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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar

The chappy of Bheem coming back! Awww :")
The part where he says only my eyes were wet, proves he was different and his heart was so pure, and even such hatred cant change his heart!
I have a few lines in mind for Yudhishthir which I was thinking of telling you only Semanti!
I know its too too early to actually talk about it here, but still...

"If you can make one heap of all your winnings

And risk it on one turn of pitch-and-toss,
And lose, and start again at your beginnings
And never breathe a word about your loss;"

Doesnt this talk of Yudhishthir??? I am sure eveyrbody understoof which part of the epic I am talking of! Think from YUdhi's POV..doesnt it?



Thank you dear for giving your time for my FF 😊 Glad that you liked it! Yes, he is very different & his heart was very very pure 😊
I understood about which part you are talking about 😊 the lines are enough to bring tears in my eyes 😭 poor man 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
I can see why you deserved to win patniyogitha for Yudi.
The last updates made me so emotional.
You see I have a thing for good characters..
And when I mean good, not just cardboard good.. but wood good.
Even goodness has many layers and they can be as interesting as grey characters,This is what I learnt for Yudi's character in MB. ANd you have portrayed him perfectly to T.


Love
Tirtha.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry Di for the Late comment...Little Busy...😊
Ur Update...WOW...WOW..WOW...No words to praise U,sis...Excellent Writing...😛👏

Finally,Bheem was back...His anger towards suyodhan was justified one..

But Yudhi...His worries n feelings were portrayed beautifully..👏👏

His talk with Paramaatma...Wow...so Nice...

And ur lines about Forgiveness was awesome...

Gradually I understood that I was already carrying an infinite store of forgiveness within my inner heart, but it was locked. Suyodhan's sin hurt it only to unlock its door! A river remains locked within the stone of mountain, but its flow can never be produced until the Sun hurts the ice of mountain to melt! To make the flow of forgiveness possible, merciful God arranged this strike on my heart! Every good thing of this universe needs an initial pain to be useful, isn't it?


Especially,these lines...SUPERB..Loved it...


Ur Songs...so meaningful n useful for all our Lives..


Thanks for the pm...cont soon😊


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Gudakesha

I can see why you deserved to win patniyogitha for Yudi.

The last updates made me so emotional.
You see I have a thing for good characters..
And when I mean good, not just cardboard good.. but wood good.
Even goodness has many layers and they can be as interesting as grey characters,This is what I learnt for Yudi's character in MB. ANd you have portrayed him perfectly to T.


Love
Tirtha.



Welcome to Yudhi's palace Tirtha 🤗 (or should I say my palace, as I'm his wife 😆)
Thank you very much for liking my work 😊 I'm just trying to show his heart which is still unseen to many of readers. & I know that you like goodness very much 😃 keep reading 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shiningstar77

Sorry Di for the Late comment...Little Busy...😊

Ur Update...WOW...WOW..WOW...No words to praise U,sis...Excellent Writing...😛👏

Finally,Bheem was back...His anger towards suyodhan was justified one..

But Yudhi...His worries n feelings were portrayed beautifully..👏👏

His talk with Paramaatma...Wow...so Nice...

And ur lines about Forgiveness was awesome...

Gradually I understood that I was already carrying an infinite store of forgiveness within my inner heart, but it was locked. Suyodhan's sin hurt it only to unlock its door! A river remains locked within the stone of mountain, but its flow can never be produced until the Sun hurts the ice of mountain to melt! To make the flow of forgiveness possible, merciful God arranged this strike on my heart! Every good thing of this universe needs an initial pain to be useful, isn't it?


Especially,these lines...SUPERB..Loved it...


Ur Songs...so meaningful n useful for all our Lives..


Thanks for the pm...cont soon😊




Thank you very much brother for your lovely comments 😊 that feeling of forgiveness is his dearest feeling, you know 😊 & here it starts, after this accident.
I'm glad that you liked those lines so much 😊 & the songs are my favorite too.
Will update now, keep reading 😊 Jai Shri Krishna!
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Posted: 10 years ago
A perfect Update, Devika!!! I loved it so much!!! Arya, iss dukarm ke andhakaar mein aapko banna hoga dharm ka prakash!!! Smaran rahe, Aneko baar uchitanuchit roop ka jo visleshan hai wo galat bhi ho sakta hai kintu hamara antaratma kabhi galat nahi!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

A perfect Update, Devika!!! I loved it so much!!! Arya, iss dukarm ke andhakaar mein aapko banna hoga dharm ka prakash!!! Smaran rahe, Aneko baar uchitanuchit roop ka jo visleshan hai wo galat bhi ho sakta hai kintu hamara antaratma kabhi galat nahi!!!



Thank you very much Jiji 😊
Priye, Krishna aur aap hi to mere prernaa ke srot ho!! Aur aapne yatharth kaha, hamari antaratmaa kabhi galat nahi ho sakti 😊 aapke sundar shabdo ke liye dhanyabaad, priye 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very poetical yet very real!! I just loved Aryaputra Yudhishtir's thoughts on my Bhratha Narayan's avatars! Adbhut kahan hai, " Ashuddh sheesha ashuddh Chitra ko pradarshit karta hai aur svach Sheesha Svach chitra ko!" Kintu Arya, aapko to pavitr ko aur pavan atma ko Bhratha avashya darshan dete hai!! Ek aur baat, har ek vyakti apne hi rang mein praveen hota hai aur aap se aage, dharm Gyaan aur adhyatmikta mai bohot kam hai!! Keval Saptrishi aur devrishi honge!! Isiliye aap anya aryaputron se kada bhi kam nahi!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great chapter 😛 loved how yudhisthira is a dharma gyani . He would love to meet lord krishna.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome , beautiful superb part
loved it

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