Draupadi: ||~A Happy Tale Lost In Oblivion~|| IMP NOTE pg 32 (8/7/16)

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.Vaikartana.

@.Vaikartana.

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#211

Beautiful update dear.Really loving the way you portrays Draupadi.Yours is the REAL Draupadi with all her strength elegance and magnanimity.Loved it.Especially loved the way you presented the rejection.Neither justifications nor accusations.She just spoke out her decision for herself.As simple as that..Please update regularly

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Brishti Sarkar

@CaptainSpark

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#212

Nice update... After a long time read something from Drau POV 😃 Don't mind me saying.. but it is a bit clich. Drau POV has been written so many times..why don't u try to add in a different way or put in something unique?? 😃 I don't mean to discourage u,..I am just trying to help you :) I liked the part where Draupadi was wondering he had overpowered her brother 😆 Nice GoLi bonding 👏 Update soon :) Don't be so late... 😛

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#213

wonderful update dear...👏

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MsChanadlerBong

@MsChanadlerBong

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#214

Amazing update ! 👏👏

I loved how u explained her feelings 😳 the way u said why she wanted to reject Karna and the part where u say that it was nothing but her decision !

Beautifully written !

Love

Sam

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#215

amazing update

draupadi's nervousness , her elation at rendering her brother speechless and the silent communication with krishna was simply awsum.

loved it. the last line was brilliant when draupadi speaks of the world being full of hypocrites.

Edited by MS-meghasharma - 10 years ago

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 10 years ago

#216

That was so beautiful!! How do you manage to capture all the sides of her personality in a single update? That elegance, that beauty, the anger and also that naughty pride in being able to outwit her twin! Loved this to the core!