Draupadi: ||~A Happy Tale Lost In Oblivion~|| IMP NOTE pg 32 (8/7/16) - Page 10

Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Loved The Part ! It Was All So Romantic !!! Loved Their 1st Words !

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

awsum update.

loved the way u wrote about draupadi's pov. it truly was the only moment where she was happy and had no burdens whatsoever.

draupadi is so innocent here...admiring arjun and trying to spend time with him,

Originally posted by: Shriya95

good girl!!! n next time do post d link in drau AT too!! they'll love it😃😃😃

Originally posted by: Yagyaseni

Really Gayathri, you have a very wonderful way of writing!! It was awesome!! It can't get better than starting her life in her point of view than starting with her dear Arya, Arjun!!! The first words definitely had a great effect!! And it was really good idea of not starting with her birth or swayamvar and this incident will be the happiest moment after her children's birth!! But somewhere I am feeling sad that she will never see happiness after this lovely romantic incident!!! And thanks for the gift to ArDi fans and thanks for the PM!!

Originally posted by: Angela_Grokes

You wrote it beautifully dear. And even beautiful was the way you expressed her feeling. Please please please continue with in a day or two I am dying to read the next part.

Originally posted by: khushbooparmar

very well written ...👏👏👏
the way u write draupadi's emotion its amazing...
now i m waiting for next update how u write it how she react on kunti's word??
waiting for nxt update..
thanks for pm..

Originally posted by: sayee

Read it... It's awesome... Will comment in detail later... In class right now...

Originally posted by: Krishnaa_Nair

gayu superb dear!!
i m imagining Pooja in this along with shaheer.. the nod saying "no"... wowow!!
Nowadays me too imagine them wen I think of parth-panchali 😃
this is too damn good...
Thank u so so so much 🤗 means a lot coming from u😳
If my eyes didn't fail to capture the twinkle in his eyes, then his sharp eyes didn't fail or I must say never fails to catch my smiles!!!

this one took my heart dear. u described arjun in juz one word "Sharp" thts exactly what he is to me.. a bunch of thanks honey... 🤗

Originally posted by: shweta2728

Wow nice beginning! Draupadi is adorable! Please continue soon! Thanks for the PM!

Originally posted by: smartfotografi

Gayatri, this words "silence...has as special beauty which I never realised till I met him!" is wonderful words to describe the paradox situations 'inside' and 'outside' Panchali's feel and makes her hovering.

Please, continue your write, you have such talented to pick precise words to describe. 👏