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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
feeling sad for rochanagrba all have forgotten him and arjun doesn't know he had other son who existed in dwarika

feeling sad😭 for him atleast arjun get to know the truth he will be happy😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Rochanagarbha felt annoyed with this obstacle of the way of meeting his mother , why even guards let this unknown person to enter? does Dwarka's guards forget about mother's safety? where is brother Abhimanyu? how he didn't have any knowledge of this intruder?

"who are you to ask me such question?" asked Garbha annoyingly.

Arjun was feeling quite astonished to see the boy's courage. who is this boy? the boy is not looking like any son of Krishna or any Yadav warriors he knows but even in darkness the boy looked quite familiar to him.

seeing Arjun in thoughts rochanagarbha proceeded towards the door of Subhadra's mahal , but again got stopped by sword. seeing him just a boy Arjun mercifully used sword instead of arrows to stop him.

Rochanagarbha took only a moment to determine himself. since brother Abhimanyu is not here responsibility of mother's safety is upon him, atleast today he got a chance to apply his trainings and learnings , perhaps this is the opportunity today goiven by destiny to prove himself as son of great Arjun and brother of valiant Abhimanyu , he moved back in lightening speed and unleashed his sword and charged Arjuna.

"you are just a child boy, don't you have love for life? go back child, don't give up your life" told Arjun

"for a warrior running away for life is same as death , why are you wasting time , either go back from here or fight me." says rochangarbha proudly , he every time hears brother Abhimanyu saying these similar kind of words , he got the chance to utter himself.

Arjun tried for last time to avoid the boy and walk to wards the gate but this time Rochangarbha placed the sword on his shoulder

"if you want to enter you have to kill me first, he gave a push to Arjun."

Arjun was eager to spend time with Subhadra alone , Krishna had done all the arrangements how can he let Madhav's effort to be futile? he was quite annoyed by the boya's overgrown up behaviour so in a rage he attacked garbha , and for few times only the sound of swords could be heard. After few times with a final stroke Arjun managed to make Rochanagarbha falling on ground armless, although Arjun was impressed by his skill, he put the sword on the boy's shoulder "tell me your name" asked Arjunbefore Rochangarbha could answer the cloud which had covered the full moon till now was moved and in the moonlight Arjun got shocked to see his own replica, that's why the boy was looking so familiar because he looks the same what Arjun looked in his teenage. Arjun rubbed his eyes, is it any illusion? None of his sons look same as him, Abhimanyu is fair skinned and beautiful as his mother, Shrutakarma is more dark than Arjun, among all five of upapandavs he is darkest although good looking but not as impressive as other brothers, Iravan whom Arjun met once in Indraloka, was just a boy then but he looked more as his mother, naga princess, quite handsome but not similar as Arjun, and what he heard about Bavrubahan, his complexion is as molten gold, he looks as heavenly as his mother, but this boy looks exact as Arjun almost as an image in mirror, how come he looks more similar to him than all his four sons?Arjun for few moments got lost in thoughts.Rochangarbha used the opportunity and stricked on Arjun's wrist by elbow and managed to fall of the sword, and in a blink he got of from ground and pulled his bow, before Arjun takes own bow garbha released arrow. Arjun caught the arrow by hand and threw back towards the boy, Rochangarbha jumped and saved himself and again released arrows, Arjun got compelled to release own arrows, but minor ones considering the boy's age but Rochangarbha managed to cut those arrows and released more. Now Arjun got impatient and took the war seriously, after few moments he managed to cut the boy's bowstring, Rochangarbha finding no option threw his bow towards Arjun, Enraged Arjun cut the bow in pieces with sharp arrows which was showered on Rochangarbha, in rage first time Arjun forgot he is fighting with a bowthe sharp arrows were about to pierce Garbha suddenly few arrows from a third person took a shape of umbrela on Rochangarbha's head and saved him from Arjun's arrows. Both father and son turned towards the person who intervened.
"Abhimanyu!!" Arjun was confused why Abhimanyu saved this adamant boy who was stopping his father to meet his mother.
As soon as Rochangarbha saw Abhimanyu a feeling of fear occupied him, his feet trembled, he cant deny in this earth he fears Abhimanyu the most, and his brother had to rescue him from enemy! Now a good punishment is waiting for him, Rochangarbha considers Abhimanyu most strict brother in universe, brother Shrutakarma says the same too during giving lessons he doesn't tolerate single mistake, now where to hide from brother's scolding? Garbha thinks and then another thing struck him, how the man knows brother Abhimanyu and can call him by name without adding Kumar? Who is the man?
"pitashree! don't shoot him, he is my brother, your son Rochangarbha" screamed Abhimanyu
both Arjun and Rochangarbha were speechless

Edited by RoseFairy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Wow...arudi...beautiful os...i didnt even heard about this Rochanagarabha,a son of arjuna...
but its story is very sad...no one take care n show affection to him...pity boy... i hate the destiny now,more.😭..
cont soon.
thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
awesome story!
never knew about Rochangarbha!
beautifully written!
i'm speechless!
waiting to know what will be Arjun n Rochangarbha's reaction!
do continu soon
thankx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
lovely update dear i don't knw hw u cum up wid these ideas it's awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
awesome... superb...excellent...waiting for whats coming next😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
i absolutely loved it !! it was perfect aru di !! anfd my parth *giggles* he is sooo desperate to meet subhi jaan !! no one cares about rochanagarbha
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
nice story...
didn't knew subhadra had one more son..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Wow !! What A Way To Meet ! Aww, Big Brother Abhimanyu !!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
nice story..
didn't knew subhadra had one more son too..

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