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shavii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

it was heart touching 😭
an son and father unknown to each other...

it remind of lord ganpathi bappa and mahadev shiv when they meet first time same way he stops his dad from entering his mother's place and in anger he cut of his head😭 and later he gets the elephant head

later to be called as elephant god but here thankfully abhimanyu came😊😊 for sure arjun going to be shocked

i am worried reading it how reaction going to be hoep he doesn't doesn't get angry with subi

continue soon

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Yajnaseni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

That must hv been a shock for both of them. Loved the father-son fight. Dunno, kinda bollywood style. Update quicky Aru di. We hv a thriller here.

PS- If this one is ur worst FF, your best FF could win the Pulitzer prize.

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OmkaraKiParvati

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Superb.. Waiting for the next part..

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Arunita Chandra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

"This is not a bloody joke damn it" shouted Arjun looking at everyone gathered in the garden .
father's roar made Rochangarbha more nervous , he hided behind his mother who came out from her palace listening all the chaos in garden , listening all what happened from Abhimanyu , Subhadra is now standing with bending her head down silently
"i demand an answer" Arjun looked at Abhimanyu , now it was time for Abhimanyu to feel nervous , he knows how much father was shocked and hurt
"pitashree" Abhimanyu's fumbled
"Abhimanyu , i didn't expect this from you , whole day you were with me , there is no incident in this 13 years we didn't talk about and you hided about existence of your brother?" Arjun was really angry
"i am sorry pitashree" Abhi bent down his head
"Aarya please don't scold Abhi , he doesn't have any fault in this " started subhadra
"you better don't say anything, we have another child and you just kept me in dark about that?"Arjun was no mood to calm down

"Parth don't blame them, they did what i asked them to do" Krishna entered with his usual smile on lips , Rukmini and Satyabhama also followed him. Seeing Satyabhama Rochanagarbha ran to her and embraced her tightly."Satyama" his voice was chocked. Satyabhama carrassed his head and gave a tensed look to her sakha."what kind of sport of yours is this Madhav?" Arjun was genuinely disgusted "everything is subject to your mischief?" "and you Satya!" now Arjun turned to Satyabhama "you call yourself my sakhi?and you too didn't inform me? You came to forest too to meet us and still you didn't say a word to me?" Arjun couldn't believe his sakhi can hide such a big thing like this"Aarya brother Arjun is right" now Rukmini speaks seeing everyone silent "i can understand initially during his penance you didn't want to divert his mind, but then there was ample time to inform him, i told you to do so but you didn't listen and Satya too is ever ready to play prank to her sakha, now brother has every right to be upset with us. Krishna advanced to Arjun and held his shoulders tightly "Parth if i would have told you earlier how would have come to know that even your youngest son is as worthy as others? Like all you too would have considered Rochanagarbha as a child. You would never take test of his skills as Abhimanyu, so i had to keep the truth as surprise." Krishna gave as usual a mischievous smile to his Parth."and your surprise was going to make me killing my own son, i cant imagine what would have happened if my arrows harmed Rochanagarbha!" Arjun shuddered in the very thought. If Abhimanyu wouldn't have reached in time he cant just imagine what would have happened."that is why i sent Abhimanyu to spend night with mother" Krishna's smile became more mesmerizing

"and Garbha!" Abhimanyu advanced towards Rochanagarbha , garbha clutched Satyabhama more tightly
"you have all grown up that you are alone capable of fighting in night is it? why are you then hiding behind Satyama? come out." Abhi sounded angry

now tears started rolling from Rochangarbha's eyes

"Abhi , don't scold garbha anymore , you are scaring him , look he is crying , " says Subhadra

"mata if i would have been late for a moment we all had to cry for him" Abhimanyu's voice was trembling "think what would have happened if i wouldn't have reached in time?"

Rochanagarbha for the first time was seeing all the known people surrounding in different light, mamashree trusts on his ability , brother Abhimanyu is scared for him, he doesn't know how to react in such changing situation
he only kept shading tears

Edited by RoseFairy - 11 years ago

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iturkhahs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

wooohh...😡 & 😲 Arjun... Poor kids got really scared😭

but why such a small update :( make the next one a big update pleaseee

... waiting for it eagerly😊

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.Vaikartana.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

First of all Thankyou Aru for bringing Rochanagarbha into light.Never knew about him earlier I read all the parts in a single go.Madhav...how much he cares for his Parth.Loved that he said I cant see Parth in pain I just love ParAv.But felt bad for Rochanagarbha.Poor boy though unintentionally everyone's decisions and commitments gave him a lonely child.Good that he has friends of almost similar age.I felt proud of him on his confidence of being able to take part in the war.

Everybody forgot to let him know of his father's return Its sooo sad.Felt like hugging him And he fought with his father to safeguard his mother.Good boy.Loved it.And finally Arjun realises his son Waiting for his reaction

Also loved Abhimanyu being described as a strict and caring elder brother

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shavii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

omg arjun shouted that little one got scad poor boy

and now paarth will know madhav hidden it ... he is not angry on his elder son so as his wife..
hope madhav tell him but still i know arjun will in shock...

so as the little one😭😭😭
continue soon feel so sad seeing the boy who had just encounter with his father and had to face his anger 😭

he went and held his aunty.. hope arjun anger calm down after krishna pacifying him 😊😊
waiting for father son convo

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Arunita Chandra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

"please don't scold kumar garbha, its all my daughter Sathilekha's fault that she asked him to collect sea shells for her hence kumar reached palace so late, " holding Sathi's hand Satyaki entered searching Krishna and Arjuna.

Sathi rolled her eyes to see Garbha crying , he wiped his tears at once

"wow now only you were left, welcome my favorite student , warrior Satyaki ! perhaps i had forgot to teach you that student shouldn't keep any secret from teacher, did i?" Arjun was back in his sarcastic mood

"I am sorry bhrata..gurudev Arjun , " Satyaki got tensed and looked at Krishna for rescue

Madhav advanced and embraced Parth tightly "still upset Parth ? you don't trust me?" Krishna patted Arjun's back twice

the embrace was enough to wipe away all anger from Arjun , he smiled helplessly

"Madhav this time the prank was little too much , but this is too bad of you , you create the causes of anger and then cajole in such way that anger runs away as magic. " Parth embraced back Madhav

"bhrata" , Rochanagarbha comes near Abhimanyu , Abhi turned his face away. Garbha looked at his friend. Sathi indicated him to talk on through eyes. Rochangarbha held his ears by own hands
"I am sorry bhrata" he says , Abhimanyu nods and pulled him in hug , first time Rochangarbha recieved such warm brotherly hug ever,
"stupid boy, you scared me," first time garbha sees Abhi to be emotional , "don't do such carelessness ever understood? from now i will give all the advanced training to you that's all you wanted no?
"Rochangarbha smiled and nod, Abhi released him by ruffling his hairs. "now go take blessings from pitashree"

Rochangarbha looked at mamashree Krishna first "go putra , your pitashree is waiting for you." Krishna smiled.

Subhadra , Rukmini and Satyabhama conveyed the same order to him silently . He hesitantly go near Arjun and touched his feet

"come here putra" Arjun dragged Rochangarbha into his chest , a drop his tear rolled as from of blessing on Rochangarbha's head.
Abhimanyu comes closer "pitashree please forgive me," and Arjun dragged him too into his embrace

all smiled to see the soothing scene.

"Satyaki don't scold Sathi ever, thanks to her Arjun came to know garbha's worth" Rukmini affectionately caressed Sathi after Charulata's marriage to Bali, son of Kritabarma , Sathi is almost like her own daughter.

"Putra" sighed Arjun , if i knew you are there i would have brought something for you, but all the celestial weapons i had given to Abhimanyu already"

"no pitashree, i don't need any gift ,your blessing is enough" Rochangarbha tried to sound mature.

"no putra how can i bless you with empty hand? tell me what do you want ? whatever your wish is i will fulfill." says Arjun

"whatever wish?" echoed Rochangarbha.

"yes putra just say it. " told Arjun excitingly

Rochangarbha looked at Sathirekha. her eyes too shined in the golden opportunity "ask him" she muttured

"pitashree i want to accompany you in war as my brothers , please don't deprive me." said Rochangarbha

everyone was shocked. Subhadra was about to say something but Krishna stopped her. Abhimanyu sighed and shaked head , he knew his brother is going to say the same.

"is that you wish putra?" said Arjun calmly. He was sad in the thought of upcoming destruction

"yes pitashree." said garbha determinedly

Arjun sighed and kissed on his forehead, " as you wish son."

Rochangarbha and Sathilekha again changed a glance with victorious smile.

"let us leave Parth alone with his family. " Krishna nods at arjun and left , Rukmini, Satyabhama , Satyaki and Sathilekha too left.

Parth stretched his arms again taking all three of his family members in an embrace. Rochangarbha smiled in bliss , his dream of taking part in war is going to get fulfilled soon.

Edited by RoseFairy - 11 years ago

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shavii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

u brought tears in my eyes when i read the part... an father son bonding
an father discover about his son and next he end up asking to join war😭😭😭😭 that too in such year... for sure he is small arjun form there who is ready to fight,..
write more pls... on their bond.. show an scene which sb failed to show 😭

it was awesome

the family finally left alone to embrace each other👏
this story touched my hears😊

Edited by shavii - 11 years ago

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Kalyani Nitin Bujone

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Great update di. Fight between father and his son...very well written
And also read the next updates too. Abhimanyu is so caring for his little brother..cho chweet 😊
And Madhav is always there for Arjun..but I also think that Arjun's anger was justified..had not Abhi came in between I can't imagine what would have happened.
And thanks Aru di for telling about Rochanagarbha and his story. I loved the way you have written about this youngest son of Arjun.

Edited by kalyani_shiva - 11 years ago

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