As The Arrow Moves- The Voice of Dhananjaya Arjuna Chap 19 on PG 46 - Page 25

Originally posted by: harangel

Brish!! Its so beautiful!! The mother-son love is so beautiful!!! Loved the chap!!

Angie!!!! Thank u thank u!! :):):) glad u liked it 😃

Originally posted by: Urmila11

You want long comments Brishti, but I am so overwhelmed that I have no word to praise this how beautifully you showed his emotions & longing for a touch of Mother nature again👏👏 AWESOME!!!! So sensitive our Arjun is😳
Loved the mother-son bonding very very much oh 😭 the poor child is hurt by the behavior of evil cousins😡 so wants to leave the home soon 😭 also the poor mother is feeling relieved to send them away from her 😭 what a pity, Maharani Kunti has no power left today to save her sons 🥺
Mother's blessing will come true very soon 😃 can't wait to see a proud smile on Kunti's face for her Arjun
Update soon dear 😊 Carry on 👍🏼 Jai Shri Krishna! Jai Gaandivdhari Arjun!

I added the Yudhi portion for you Urmila :):) Hope u looked that too.his sensitivity is what I actually wanted to show..
And yea.. Kunti was very much helpless.. And I can't wait to make her proud for her sons..Arjun especially!!! 😉

Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix

<font color="#CC3333"><font size="3">Knowledge is an integral part of our life Jaldi Arjun will recieve it 😃
Haye you have written the chapter so well 👏
Partha and Kunti bond so good
Duryodhan and bro yaar😡😡😡
Aur kya kya describe karu Brish😕
Plz update soon yaar 😃</font></font>

Thanks Dear!!! :):):) feeling so happy readin ur lovely words 😃

Originally posted by: Rushika

It was such a an adorable update Brish ⭐️ Simply loved it 😊

I love these lines n the hidden pain here 😔

I am the only person in the universe who is happy to be away from home." I said. "I know dear. And I am the only Mother on Earth who feels safe by sending her sons away."

I try to write simple lines with a deeper meaning...:):) Rushi I am glad u liked it love... 🤗
Arjun's pain is always hidden. But he had a lot of pain to bear too

Originally posted by: Yajnaseni

Such a beautiful mother-son bond. Arjuna- always the eager one to learn. I liked the update but somehow it clashed with my ideas on Arjun- the thing that he used to hate wars. But hv ur writer's liberty. Continue soon...

Oh...ok. Thanks for ur words though. :):)

Sorry for not replying earlier...

Great update as usual... 👏

Please continue...i guess gradually the story is progressing towards Panchal... 😉

the connection is awesome... paarth always considered earth and nature as his ultimate teacher...
and here the young one is too eager to go to gurukul...
I like the way you put " death is scary I want to know I want to live"

also when he wiped kunti s tears with his small uttariya.. awwehhh I simply wished time freeze at tht moment. ...

I could see tje griwn up one in here dear... as I stated above. . I want to know I want to live I want to be loved... arjun..


standing ovation b. .

cool...👏...

Arjun gave his word even without knowing...u explained it really beautifully...


PS :: I really want to know the pandavas relation with each other from Arjun's POV please...

Ok wow, just wow...the entire promise part blew me away, seriously...

Wonderful update Brishti. I really liked the way you have described Arjun's connection with nature👏.

What I liked even more is how he introduced himself "Son of Kunti". When I had first read Mahabharta, this was what set him apart from all other characters. Thank you for taking me back to those times again😊