As The Arrow Moves- The Voice of Dhananjaya Arjuna Chap 19 on PG 46

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RisingPhoenix

@RisingPhoenix

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Posted: 11 years ago

#221

Hey Brish
Arjun really want's to seek education
Now let see what the King Chritrashtra says
Thanks for PM
Update soon
I gave my friend the link of your ff
She will read it soon

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subhikrish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#222

chappy 9,10,11- all d 3 potrayed d thirst of arjun for learnin... and ur words expressed them perfectly...great work brish

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Justitia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#223

Brishti, I haven't even seen your pm yet for the chappy update!! 😆😆

Arjun feels a connect with the gurukul due to living in the forest as a child...😊

You know, even the gurukul track in ⭐️B kind of indicated this -

The first night in the gurukul, the kid Pandavas were all cosily sleeping, and the kid Kauravas were busy swatting mosquitoes!! 😆

Awww...Arjun-Kunti bonding 😳

Again, his eagerness and willingness to learn!! 👏👏

Poor kid is scared of war and bloodshed - don't worry, Madhav sab samjha denge!! 😛

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raj_a_p

@raj_a_p

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Posted: 11 years ago

#224

Yesss. 😆 The moment I was waiting for. The Pritha-Parth moment. You have really portrayed their love very beautifully. Waiting for the next update.

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Cotswolds

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Posted: 11 years ago

#225

Oh my brishti.. This is a gold mine.. 👏

Stories of mahanayak. I plan to read them soon.. Lovely.. 👏

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ElMystique

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Posted: 11 years ago

#226

And the quest for knowledge begins .This is just perfectly done Brish Pritha Paarth bonding was very adorable . He is scared of bloodshed this defines his character perfectly .Sitting in the favourite corner of palace with mixed feelings in his heart about geeting back his actual home but the lain to leave his mother is well portrayed ...Brish update ASAP Many authors have written about the bird's eye peircing but I am eager to read about Arjun"s POV and your take on it ...

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Shriya95

@Shriya95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#227

Like I said previously,parth getting sooo eager to go to school n start his quest of knowledge is very heart warming to see!! N pritha felling a sense of safety on sending her sons away again underlines a lot of things about the animosity shown to them in hastinapur Their entire convo was very pleasing to read, read it twice or thrice,just the convo!! He is unwilling to fight!!! Poor dear,this gives a hint that how much circumstances n krishna will affect him to fight!!! I'm super exited about the gurukul episode!!!!😃😃

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AngelinaEdangel

@AngelinaEdangel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#228

Brish!! Its so beautiful!! The mother-son love is so beautiful!!! Loved the chap!!

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Semanti Chakraborty

@DharmaPriyaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#229

You want long comments Brishti, but I am so overwhelmed that I have no word to praise this how beautifully you showed his emotions & longing for a touch of Mother nature again 👏👏 AWESOME!!!! So sensitive our Arjun is 😳
Loved the mother-son bonding very very much oh 😭 the poor child is hurt by the behavior of evil cousins😡 so wants to leave the home soon 😭 also the poor mother is feeling relieved to send them away from her 😭 what a pity, Maharani Kunti has no power left today to save her sons 🥺
Mother's blessing will come true very soon 😃 can't wait to see a proud smile on Kunti's face for her Arjun
Update soon dear 😊 Carry on 👍🏼 Jai Shri Krishna! Jai Gaandivdhari Arjun!

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RisingPhoenix

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Posted: 11 years ago

#230

Knowledge is an integral part of our life Jaldi Arjun will recieve it 😃
Haye you have written the chapter so well 👏
Partha and Kunti bond so good
Duryodhan and bro yaar
Aur kya kya describe karu Brish
Plz update soon yaar

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