...~ A Journey of a Hero called Karna~...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I have often dreamed..
Of a far off place..
Where a hero's welcome..
Would be waiting for me..
Where crowds will cheer when they see my face...
Where the voice keep saying ..
this is where i meant to be...
(song from Hercules)
Once upon a time there was a boy called Karna ,who dared to challenge the world.. They kept him down.. bruised his ego.. stoned him with their unforgiving words... He kept coming back more strong..with a dream in his eyes.. that a day will come when this very world...these very people would acknowledge him..accept him for who he is.. and will give him respect that he had always craved for..
He lost his path and went on to a different road...A road laid with thorns ..A road laid with unforgiven deeds.. He realised and wanted to come back.. to his world... to his own.. but it was too late.. there was no return..
Those crushed dreams and hopes had now given birth to a never ending guilt.. A burdened heart..
Why Me? He asked...But noone replied... He kept shouting aloud...his cries went unheard..
They say You were born to die...thats why...
A voice came from far across.. He sighed and realised his ultimate fate... He gave his most prized possession... he had...his heart... he cut it into pieces... One piece fell into a mother's lap who had abandoned him long before ...One piece fell into that brother's hands who had vowed to give him death...and Another piece to a dear friend who had perhaps used him all along... His eyes beemed with tears of happiness.. It was time to go to his world.. A world more beautiful ...A world where he belonged.. far away across the sea... Those rays were calling him.. saying ... Son , come home.. Time to say Goodbye...He looked back once... He looked at those memories... those relations.. those friends.. He smiled at them... He blessed them .. had always loved them.. but he has now nothing to give..apart from one thing left... His life..
He gave it up with a smile and went his head held high with pride and satisfaction to his father's place...
Many asked what he got in return...
He got his glory at Last!
P.S- Thank You everyone for always encouraging me in this place. It was wonderful journey in this forum. I would cherish the experience of writing . This is my last written piece. Hope to meet you all in a different place ..May be some other hero might inspire me yet again... Just want to thank My Childhood Superhero Karna for being always inspiration to write about. I will surely complete my last OS - An encounter with Karna😊
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.Vaikartana. thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ritieee🤗 I completed reading ur post with tears in my eyes and pride filling my heart Yes u rightly said He earned glory which is eternal.And be happy every day when we see d sun we can feel our Suryaputra and in d moonlight we can feel the gentleness of his heart.Beautifully written sweetie
And why did u put a gud bye note at d end ?😡Wont u be der in AFC????
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Karna is one of the most fascinating and intriguing characters of Indian mythology!
He was invincible, generous and deeply layered ... his heart seemed like some hidden treasure that we have been trying to unlock from ages now ...


some pages of his life are truly tragic

i really wish there was someone to guide him, bless him and probably show him a path to follow during his growing ages


PS: have always loved your written pieces ... always keep writing! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Riti maa you're truly his maa. Wonderful writing. I'll edit this later.

Edit- Outstanding...👏... You just wrote the essence of Karna! You made me misty eyed... You made me recall my memories about some people I met & missed in my life... I love the way you pick small words, string them together and give us the most beautiful garland everytime...!!! May your garlands spread their fragrance timelessly...
Never compromise your writing for anything...I wish one day the whole world read your words!
Edited by -Jamy- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow u really wrote Karna's POV very well😭 👏
these lines are 🥺

He blessed them .. had always loved them.. but he has now nothing to give..apart from one thing left... His life..
He gave it up with a smile and went his head held high with pride and satisfaction to his father's place...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful Riti! Well done! 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: vaikartana

Ritieee🤗 I completed reading ur post with tears in my eyes and pride filling my heart Yes u rightly said He earned glory which is eternal.And be happy every day when we see d sun we can feel our Suryaputra and in d moonlight we can feel the gentleness of his heart.Beautifully written sweetie

And why did u put a gud bye note at d end ?😡Wont u be der in AFC????


🤗 Thank you dearie...
I will be there...just not writing for a while..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -TomNJerry-

Karna is one of the most fascinating and intriguing characters of Indian mythology!

He was invincible, generous and deeply layered ... his heart seemed like some hidden treasure that we have been trying to unlock from ages now ...


some pages of his life are truly tragic

i really wish there was someone to guide him, bless him and probably show him a path to follow during his growing ages


PS: have always loved your written pieces ... always keep writing! 👏


Thanks TJ..you have been supporting n encouraging always with your comments..

Yes Karna's character has so much potential to be written...analysed ..discussed...it draws strong opinions on every side of argument...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Jamy-

Riti maa you're truly his maa. Wonderful writing. I'll edit this later.

Edit- Outstanding...👏... You just wrote the essence of Karna! You made me misty eyed... You made me recall my memories about some people I met & missed in my life... I love the way you pick small words, string them together and give us the most beautiful garland everytime...!!! May your garlands spread their fragrance timelessly...
Never compromise your writing for anything...I wish one day the whole world read your words!


Thank you Jamy for your beautiful encouraging words.It truly means a lot..

Karna has so many layers ...sometimes we might find a reflection of ourselves in those pages of his life...I just loved exploring him...and in process got so many friends like you..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Riti,
You are just brilliant, too good... I have always enjoyed the pieces you write. You have extraordinary talent that not everyone is blessed with. Do not stop here, sky is the limit, keep writing...

I am sure you will go places

😊

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