II SHAHEER SHEIKH II VASUDEVASYA VIBHATSU ARJUNA AT#36

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RosChel.Lobster

@RosChel.Lobster

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hmmm Krish if u don't mind so can u please give a brief update what actually happened in the previous AT n 10 pages of this AT? 😳

Niva n frappie which OS u ppl are writing? 😊

I swear Medha earlier I felt less connection wid Parth n Madhav but now I exactly know abt their eternal bond n even I'm craving for it but it seems cvs r in no mood of showing it 😭

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@Regina_Lupa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

@rushi we discussed on how to survive without arjun for nxt two weeks then went on to naming new At!!!
then frappie gave the awesome idea of Uloopi track os again!!

then somewhere spark of subhadra's chlidern came!!!! 😉
the last 5-6 pages only done by today!!!

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Shriya95

@Shriya95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Rushika
Hmmm Krish if u don't mind so can u please give a brief update what actually happened in the previous AT n 10 pages of this AT? 😳
Niva n frappie which OS u ppl are writing? 😊

I swear Medha earlier I felt less connection wid Parth n Madhav but now I exactly know abt their eternal bond n even I'm craving for it but it seems cvs r in no mood of showing it 😭

nothing much rushika, we r trying to come to a conclusion fr a name fr this at😆

I m quite interested in finding out the age difference btwn the pandavas or to be more specific, KaJu

Niva has been writing an OS or Arjun-subhadra cos theirs is the nly one which we dint write yet😉

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ElMystique

@ElMystique

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Subhadra felt ludicrous for a moment she wanted to speak but hardly voice came out .Her throat felt dried up and lips dehydrated.Dhananjay had the smirk on his face looking at Subhadra's predicament.She moved behind with her gaze constantly on the floor to avoid eye contact with the mighty armed Vibhatsu but couldnt resist herself.

She took deep long breaths and gathered all her courage and looked at Kiriti for a moment and closed her eyes.All she could visualise is hazel eyes his mighty arms and torso.

She began blushing all the while when the visuals of her memory lane appeared to her.phalguna understood her plight and gently went closer to her.She could feel his fragrance and closed her eyes even tightly.The wind played the cupid and her hair feel on her beautiful face.

The elegant son of Indra gently took off the hair on her face and his fingers made slight movements on her lips and cheeks while his other hand lay on her waist .The tiny hair on her neck rose upright.She felt a sort of Adrenaline rush all throughout her body.He clutched her tightly in her waist region.She took even deeper breaths and closed her eyes even tightly.She felt lust running through her spine and couldnt stop herself.

This was the moment when she stopped his fingers which were making gentle moments on her face by clutching his hand tightly. As a result a set of chains that connect his rings broke.He still had a smirk on his face .Parth who was an expert in making women swoon was enjoying the quandary.

He then left her and took two steps behind.

She then opened her eyes gathered all the courage and looked at him and this time he raised his both the hands as a sign of telling her that it was absolutely not his mistake and he hasn't done anything...

She was annoyed and looked at him and rolled her eyes when he came closer to her .As he approached her she was panic .The reason being the beautiful daughter of Vrishinis, maiden Subhadra did not want Parth to know her feelings...

He came closer to her she closed her eyes when he rubbed his nose along her nose .She took a deep sigh .He could feel the hot air on his face.With his lips on her Cheeks he said "donot worry Subhadra I haven't understood your naughty feelings for me"

his lip movement on her cheeks while he spoke left her craving...

TO be continued...

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Shriya95

@Shriya95

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Yaaahooo... This AT is on fire nw!!!! Awesome frappie...nice suspense build up fr tomorrow...n don't leave it in between😉

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ElMystique

@ElMystique

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Rushika
Hmmm Krish if u don't mind so can u please give a brief update what actually happened in the previous AT n 10 pages of this AT? 😳
Niva n frappie which OS u ppl are writing? 😊

I swear Medha earlier I felt less connection wid Parth n Madhav but now I exactly know abt their eternal bond n even I'm craving for it but it seems cvs r in no mood of showing it 😭

Rush darling let me give a detailed update

First yesterday me and paro took the pran to complete At

First I started with geeta gyaan where I found about Subhadra's CHILDREN

The word children left me in a trans and I shared it

then

I started writing Uloopi OS and about Iraavan baby and paro helped me

Krishu di and brish were adding fuel to our bits...

Then we realised it was Rabindra jayanti and disscussed about Chitra and Parrth

Then we discussed on what we would do in Paarth's absence

Tab tak 136 pages wwere done and we were playing AT name game

as in name the new AT with the last letter of previous AT name given by a member

ABhi dear came up with an awesome idea GUMSHUDA AT

as u know abhi darling is Kapil Sharma of This AT ...

Comming to this AT Niva joined in our crazy author group and started with subhi arjun appavitrata and I couldnt stop myself...

Sheena shared a bit of knowledge with us and I shared few names for donot post AT which are dedicated to Medha and Sheena

dats it ...

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taruna

@taruna40

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

CONGRATS ON NEW AT

THIS AT IS ON FIRE IN FIRE 10 PAGES ONLY

I CAME STRAIGHT ON THIS PAGE WOW STRAIGHT ON PARTH AND SUBHADRA ROMMANCE AWESOME

PLS UPDATE MORE SOON YR OS SOMETHING TO DO WHILE WAITING FOR ARJUN

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Niva1

@Niva1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

@ Frappy - wow loved it deariee. Its getting hotter now. Lets see how apavitra we can make it. Shubhi is a little immature right, so it feels great to see our hero as the conqueror.❤️😎

Lets have a blast with the story tomorrow. Krish has also promised to take it to level 2. I am going to hold her on to that promise 😛.