Vrishketu:How did Karna's son become Arjun's ally??(Part 4:page 11)

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.FairyDust.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

please continue

your idea of this story is rare and too good

I would love to read more

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Vrish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

I would actually have liked to see more resistance from Vrishaketu to joining the Pandavas, rather than going over immediately after the dream. Maybe he could have done something like joining Yudisthir, who was the least offensive to his father among the 5 'uncles'

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Shriya95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Hey archu just read both the parts today...I must say u r a terrific writer !!!!! Beautiful...I love the way u have portrayed the relation bet karna n his son...n also him connecting to subhadra the post ws lovely...nw I wanna see hw he reacts to draupadi!! Continue fast!!

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Rumjhum Laha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

i support vrish in showing reluctance of vrishketu in joining pandavas but he can't ignore father's dream i wish to see he is denying to take any affection from any uncle and kunti and ofcourse draupadi , with subhadra , other pandav wives and other sons like youdheya, sarvaga, niramitra and suhatra (living son of yudi, bheem, nakul sahadev respectively) he is mixing up

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Swetha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

^ Thanks much for this story update dear abt Karna's son & Arjun! :)

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Archana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

@angrani,@shrishti,@jhum,@aru,@deboleena thanx a lot for your nice comments dearies..😛

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Archana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Cotswolds
Archu, this update is again fantastic.. Ye dil maange more..
You have novel ideas. . I felt his angst, frustration, dilemma,, inner turmoil, his love- hate relationship..
Vrishketu inherited tragic life of his father.. 😭.

PleSe continue..

cots bro,thnx for liking and your nice comments.i wont allow vrishketu to have a tragic life like his father..after the initial dilemma,his life will become colourfull indeed..😛

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Archana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: .Vrish.
I would actually have liked to see more resistance from Vrishaketu to joining the Pandavas, rather than going over immediately after the dream. Maybe he could have done something like joining Yudisthir, who was the least offensive to his father among the 5 'uncles'

vrish bro,actually I wanted to show more reluctance from Vrishaketu...but I was in a hurry to finish the story with the second part..😛