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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sahadev and Panchaali

Sahadev was the most intelligent among the Pandavas, or Panchaali's husbands but spoke the least. Panchaali was disturbed about this fact. Although she longed for having some juicy and intellectual conversation with Sahdev, she hardly got any. Sahdev would only give him silly riddles. It was mid-morning and Panchaali was busy playing cross and knots with herself as Sahadev solved a set of riddles prepared by his Guru Drona which he had treasured with him since he left Gurukul. Panchaali was near the Aswathha tree in the backward while Sahdev was sitting at a distance on the ground itself.

"Panchaali," Sahdev called to her. Panchaali looked from the distance to Sahdev. "Tell me aarya.." Panchaali answered. "I can't solve one of the riddles." Panchaali was shocked. Sahdev was asking her the answer of a riddle? Was she lost? Panchaali walked up to Sahdev with her confused look. "You are asking me? Are you sure?" she said. Sahdev gave a "hmm." "Knowledge is universal Panchaali," he continued, "if you are ashamed to ask, how do you acquire it?" he kept on "...a drunkyard has to take the help of the drink to get drunk," Panchaali listened carefully. "..but those who prone to get drunk can also get drunk on knowledge and intelligence." he completed and looked at Panchaali. "But its just that most people don't choose to do so." Panchaali smiled and added this time! Sahdev approved. "It is our choices that make us what we are today, far more than our abilities, isn't it aarya?"

Sahdev smiled. "I learned this from you Panchaali, today." he said. Panchaali felt good. "Lets solve the riddle now!" she said as Panchaali and Sahdev looked back at the riddles.

(the choices dialogue courtesy is from harry potter. Sorry but i felt it would look good here in this story.)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
I loved this!!! 😛
I can definitely see Panchali & Sahdev having intellectual discussions...😃
And no, don't worry, it's not a "Harry Potter" dialogue - it's completely appropriate everywhere!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Awesome writing again. 👏

I loved this Parth-Panchali story more than the previous one. However, I still felt the distance from Parth. Panchali loves Parth a lot, but somehow he doesn't return the same love. But that is wat I felt.
However, I loved the Nakul-Panchali story the most. It was sooo romantic. Nakul helping Panchali to get ready is so passionate... ☺️
I love Bhim n Panchali's friendly chemistry. I love how they bond over cooking. 😊
Yudisthir n Panchali's chemistry is very mature. They understand each other very well. 😊
Anyway, I tend to be a little honest. If I ever hurt u, then I'm really sorry. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: amritat

Awesome writing again. 👏

I loved this Parth-Panchali story more than the previous one. However, I still felt the distance from Parth. Panchali loves Parth a lot, but somehow he doesn't return the same love. But that is wat I felt.
However, I loved the Nakul-Panchali story the most. It was sooo romantic. Nakul helping Panchali to get ready is so passionate... ☺️
I love Bhim n Panchali's friendly chemistry. I love how they bond over cooking. 😊
Yudisthir n Panchali's chemistry is very mature. They understand each other very well. 😊
Anyway, I tend to be a little honest. If I ever hurt u, then I'm really sorry. 😊


No no not hurting me at all.😊 But, i know its sad but Sabyasachi is like that. He never was too passionate towards Panchaali. But still, I try to put some romance. You can always give your review. No problem.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Again awesome lovely story great story want ramance yudi drau nakul arjun
Edited by pujametallic - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Panchaali and Pandavas... (Story together)

The Pandavas were finally happy and relaxed. They were ready to build the new palace in Khandavprasth with the help of Mayasura. The palace would be ready in no time, while the Pandavas, and their to-be Queen Panchaali sat under a huge tree which was saved from the forest fire. Yudhishtir and Phalgun planned about the building of the palace while Bheem walked up and down the ground. Nakul was still in the palanquins with the horses and Sahdev sat quietly, faraway from everyone. Panchaali felt impatient. She willed to discuss with Yudhishtir and Phalgun but she did not feel like going up and offering help. It was not ego, it was simply her will.

"What should we name our kingdom?" Yudhishtir shot his question. Phalgun broke a piece of twig and threw it. "Something prastha. As it was originally called Khandavprastha." said Phalgun. Panchaali wondered where Krishna was. He could suggest something nice and she was sure that Phalgun would accept it.

Finally they decided on Indraprastha. Panchaali suggested it as Indrapuri when Phalgun and Sahdev decided on Indraprastha. Mayasura came visible in front of them at this moment. He wished to know the description of our royal palace. All of the Pandavas looked at eah other and then to Panchaali's direction. Panchaali would discuss with all of them before each gave their views. She walked up to Yudhishtir.

"I think we should start with the normal sabha first. There will be beautiful waterways even in the sabha." Panchaali said. Phalgun said that the waterways should be till the staircases and not move off to the gardens. Yudhishtir described it to be .."as gorgeous as the stars at night, as pleasant as the clouds in the sky." Panchaali looked at Yudhishtir and understood that he did not expect much from anything. "Panchaali," said Bheem, "we shoudl first say that the palace should be huge so that all the small eyes are unable to fit the palace in their eyes. Isn't it jyeshth bhrata?" Yudhishtir smiled. Panchaali knew who Bheem meant by small eyes!! She knew of the 100 arrogant cousins her husbands had. Phalgun only described the curves and corners of the palace just as his nature. "Phalgun, how can the backyards be grey?" Panchaali asked as she heard Phalgun telling that he wanted a grey-like backyard! Phalgun smiled at Panchaali, "Magic and illusions, why can't it be grey then? I don't mean it will be covered. Just it should have a grey atmosphere." Nakul described how classy the palace should be. "But what about your horses Nakul, won't you describe the stables?" laughed Bheem and Phalgun. Panchaali said, with Nakul's approval, "The palace should have internal and external beauty, includes the stables." and laughed off. To this Yudhishtir and Phalgun was impressed with Panchaali. Sahdev did not demand anything. He only wanted the palace to have hidden secrets in every layer." "Just like the hidden third eye of knowledge." said Panchaali. "Yes, Panchaali speaks right." said Nakul. "What about you Panchaali?" Sahdev asked. "Yes," said Bheem and Yudhishtir nodded with approval. Phalgun looked up from his Gandiv. "I.." said Panchaali. "I want a balcony, from which most of the city will be visible. "Maybe not every core of it, but most of it." To this, all the Pandavs looked impressed. "It will show the whole of Indraprastha." Mayasur promised. "Panchaali, whatever the balcony shows, you can make the most of it I know." said Yudhishtir. "See see our Panchaali is so intelligent." Bheem said giving Sahdev a wink. "Panchaali is indeed a token of goodness for us." smiled Phalgun. "I will also wave you from the gardens and you wave back okay?" Nakul said. "You are lucky. You will get everything. The stars will be so sparkling to look at from your balcony. It prves you are open hearted ." Sahdev said.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It seems like no one was satisfied by the Indraprastha shown in ⭐️Bharat today. So I thouht of a description of IP through my writings. It wouls also show Panchaali and pandavs conversation together. The above post was for this. Hope you all like it, Please keep commenting and let me know.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Brishti...this is wonderful!! 😊
Thank you!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey i loved all your parts just read them now
there is just a small request can u please change the colour of panchali n sahdev part coz flouruscent green is very bright to focus on its words
i loved how you have written relationship between her n all 5 of her husbands especially nakul,sahdev as unki baari to kabhi tv pe aati hi nahi hai but all parts were very cute!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nuckts

hey i loved all your parts just read them now

there is just a small request can u please change the colour of panchali n sahdev part coz flouruscent green is very bright to focus on its words
i loved how you have written relationship between her n all 5 of her husbands especially nakul,sahdev as unki baari to kabhi tv pe aati hi nahi hai but all parts were very cute!😊


Sure. 😊 I will update soon. And which colour would be better? Brown? Or another shade of purple or any other colour?

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