OS- Brihannala-Draupadi

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Posted: 11 years ago
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The sound of ghungroo' is audible to her now and she becomes more restless to meet her husband. It has been soo many days since they've talked properly, her husband is clearly avoiding her. She can understand the reason but doesn't he know his Panchali? Doesn't he have slightest faith on his Krishnaa? Yes, he doesn't know and that is the reason they are still unknown person to each other.

All the other Pandavas stealthily meet Draupadi very often except the tritiya pandav' Arjuna. After getting the work of Dance-Teacher as Brihannala he has completely reserved himself in Antapura' where only women are allowed. Draupadi tried many times to meet her Arya but failed. She understands the mental state of her husband but how can he ignore her?

"Dha dha den taa/Kat tage den taa, no no not like that Uttara, follow my steps."

"Sorry for interrupting madam but Shairandhari wants to meet you"-said the maid.

"Panchaali? Again? Why do you come to see me? Don't you know how embarrassed I feel?"- Brihannala's inner voice silently asked these unanswerable questions aloud and then she said to the maid-

"Tell her, I'm busy right now."

"But madam, she's right outside of this room and has said that she needs to meet you for some important reasons, I've told her that you're busy in Dance class but she is adamant."

"Guruma, please go, we'll continue the class tomorrow"- said excited Uttara, as her friends are waiting for her on the palace garden."

"No, first learn this mudra properly and then you can go to your friends" and then she ordered the maid-

"Tell Shairandhari that I don't like to leave my responsibilities incomplete, I can't meet"- by saying so once again Brihannala perfectly avoided Yagyaseni.

The ignorance of her beloved hurt her but Draupadi understood her Arya's situation and decided to leave him alone till the time he wants to.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww take a jadu ki jhappi for at last posting this i was feeling so attached with the situation ur writing is so effortless loved this and you sis
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sohiniluvsmusic

aww hugs 2 u 2 didi 🤗🤗bt credit goes 2 u huh u're d one who influenced me soo much!😉😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's awesome, Sohini di...⭐️⭐️⭐️👏
I hope you will continue.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sukanya_Datta

It's awesome, Sohini di...👏
I hope you will continue.😃

thnxx sukanya 😊 bt not sure whether 2 continue or not as dis is d perfect ending for me 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sohiniluvsmusic

thnxx sukanya 😊 bt not sure whether 2 continue or not as dis is d perfect ending for me 😉


But I would love to know about other attempts Paanchali made to contact her Arya and Arjun's attempts to avoid any such meetings..😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved it !
the concept is good...I loved their tumoil...how both want to met each other but cant !
please please continue !!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sohu u can't stop here u better continue or face my wrath 😡
I loved it by so far ❤️ awesum 1 but u better continue soon :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thnxx alott @yukthi nd @rushi dear bt seriously I dnt know wat 2 write anything further on dem! 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
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One of the best OSs, I've read here. Just awesome.👏

However, u CANNOT stop here.😭 Rushika's right. Please continue n write a longer one. I mean, u can make the next one on how he makes it up to her, n makes her feel dat he still cares for her. 😳Well, dat's just a suggestion.😃
PLEASE!! PLEASE!! PLEASE!! PLEASE!! PLEASE!! PLEASE!!😃
Please continue.😊

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