Welcome in the afterlife-a kuru family OS

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Hello every one...this OS actually came as a dream to me n coundnt wait to put it down...I will do it in parts😊
He opened his eyes...a strange feeling empowered him...he did not the sight he usually sees because all he sees is a color every one called black...he was having new sensations...what is this he wondered...after much thought did he undrstand...he could SEE!!! DHRITRASTRA could see!!! He became as a child,trying to capture every sight in his eyes and then he saw her...she opened her eyes...though she knew the feeling,it was a long time since she had experienced it...a long time since she saw a color other than that of the red silk cloth with which she tied her eyes...

Gandhari woke up...turned around, and saw him...though she had never seen him her heart knew him...she called out.., Aarya?? Dhritrastra finally saw the face of the woman who was his life partner,his ardhangini and with the first sight...he fell in love with gandhari.

She went towards him and hugged him n with tears both of them remembered that beautiful day wen they first came close n he told her, jab samay aayega tab yam ke dwar par hum saath jayenge gandhari...they were living this moment wen a voice said,pitashree...
Dritrastra saw the apple of his eye,hugged him,kissed him...he was cleansed of all sin after suffering in hell ...duryodhan had become suyodhan...

At a distance another lady stirred...opened her huge eyes and saw the face of the man she saw every day in her dreams. Her tears obscured her view,she wiped them to see pandu...who was looking at her with love filled in his eyes and when he embraced her...she was living in her death...wen the broke apart she saw madri with tears...only that they reflected genuine happiness...jiji,aapki tapas ya poorn hui...ab Aarya aapke hai...aapka adhikaar hai unpe...ab hamaare beech koi spardha nahi...the ladies hugged..now they were sisters in the true sense...

Kunti now searched for the sun of her life...as the arrow dat pierced his heart pierced hers too...then she saw karna smiling like the rising sun. He came and hugged her and Kunti was grateful to her death for this moment

Brothers,sisters in law, friends met...with beautiful memories of the past...and karna said to Kunti..mata, ab aap yahan swarg se dekhiye kaise mera anuj yudhisthir dharti ko swarg banata hai...phir jab samay aayega...paancho pandav aayenge...swarg me base kuru vansh ko poorn karne...Kunti looks at her sons from heaven n showers her blessings ...

Next part:pandavas ascent to heaven

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Paro95 , a novel concept. Look forward to it see new friendly equation between yudhi and dury . 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful concept...I got sentimental while reading it...👏

Really, Dhritarashtra n Gandhari never saw each other. Especially, Gandhari who deprived herself of vision, for her husband.
Kunti's pain was indeed great. She became lonely at such a young age. Yet she fought n made sure dat her loneliness didn't hamper her children's future. She finally saw the man, she had seen only in her dreams for a very long time. Pandu was hers finally.
N finally Karna got his mother back.
Please write more about their afterlife. Even Pandavas n Draupadi.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u for the positive response😊...I m nw thinking about how to interpret and write about the pandavas ascent...will surely write it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ok so here is the second part of my story...some part of it is fiction n some part of it I've read online & tried to in corporate it...it's gonna be a long post so I've decided to divide it into two parts(like hastinapur😆).
Here goes part one😃

The music stops...the rajyaabhishek is over.the new king takes blessings from his grandfather, his two elder and two younger brothers...Kalyan ho parikshit says yudhisthira who was handing over the thone to the only ray of hope left in his life. Arjun was content after a long time...3 out of his 4 sons died...one sacrificed for victory, one killed mercilessly in the battle &one killed by his guru putra. Yet now he was content...he was nw relieved of all responsibilities n was ready to begin his last journey...
The young king took blessings of his grandmothers...the fire born lady whose oldage was overpowerd by her beauty...the beloved queen of hastinapur...yagyaseni draupadi... He asked her, jis prakaar apne apni sooj-booj se jesthpitamah ka saath Diya, unke saath dharma ki sthapna ki...us prakaar Kya mujhe aap ka maargdarshan nahi prapt hoga? Kyun nahi hoga,she said, hum sadaiv tumhare hruday me vaas kar tumhe protsahit karenge putra...aur waise bhi tumahaari daadishree, mere govind ki priy been subhadra hai tumhare saath...Arjun n subhadra look at each other n remember their time together...how she lost her heart to him wen he played d veena, how they made each it her dance, how she kidnapped him to get married...these memories brought tears to her eyes...but Arjun could not see those tears...subhadra was one of the only living ppl of the yadava dynasty...Arjun had failed to protect his friend, he could not keep his promise, his friends wives were either dead or kidnapped or became celibates...such an end to a glorious dynasty made the pandavas loose interest in life...n made them take this huge step of renouncement...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome. 👏 I really love your concept.Please write longer updates.😊

Amrita.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it's a good story, please continue.
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Five men and their wife were standing near the the base of the mighty Himalayas...ready to start their journey towards the end...toh sehdev,Kay poorvabhass ho Raha hai, asked bheem to his youngest brother. Inn poorvabhaso ke parinamo se mukti paane ke liye hee toh yeh yatra kar Rahe hai hum bhrata bheem, said sehdev. All brothers looked at each other with wet eyes...truely the had a difficult life but they knew that it would have been tougher if they were alone. The five brothers hugged as they did every time wen the were victorious...after all they were victorius in life!!!
They started their journey with yudhisthira leading them...suddenly a black dog started following them.all of them wondered that in a place were there was no sign of humans,how can a dog survive the climate. But they kept quiet,sensing divine reasons.
After some distance draupadi started feeling uncomfortable...she could not breathe...her heart was stopping ...she wanted to reach out to her love but couldn't, and she collapsed. Her husbands heard the thud. PANCHALI!?!? They ran to her. Kya hua hai krishnaa...tum gir kyon gayee? Tum humse Baat kyun nahi kar rahi ho?? Uttar do...woh ab nahi bolegi my priye anujo...yudishthira voice was steady, his face showed no expression but his eyes conveyed his pain...tatparya jesth??asked Arjun. Draupadi is yug ki sabse patvitra stree hai...parantu usne bhi apna ek vachan poorna nahi Kia...hum paancho se saman roop se prem karne ka vachan. Kadachit uses bhi yeh gyat nahi ki us ke hruday ne sadaiva Arjun ko sabse adhik chaahaa. Issi kaaran se usse mukti se pehle mrityu prat hui...usse wahan rehne do. Kuch samay ke viyoog ke baad lunar Milan hoga...they leave her there but bheem doesn't go..he is stunned...due to the bitter cold his lips start bleeding.as he kisses draupadi on her forehead, her maang is filled with sindoor,depicting the sanctity of the woman who chaged the history of aaryavrata...
The brothers resumed their journey. Again they heard a thud...sehdev had collapsed like draupadi,his eyes blank, nakul was broken,Arjun was lost for words. Bheem mustered strength enough to ask his eldest brother the reason of his fall to which yudishthira replied...bheem Kya tum Jane ho sehdev ke poorvabhaason ka Karan kya hai? Yeh use Mila pitashree ka aashirwaad hai. Parantu usne is ka poorn upyog nahi kiya...woh junta tha yudh hone wala hai par usne yeh Baat gopniya rakhi. Yehi hai us ke patan ka kaaran
The next one to fall is nakul. Yudhisthir said, nakul ko uski apni sundarta ne mohit kar Diya tha issi kaaran se woh is moh Jaal se mukht hue bina hee chala gaya.before they moved on, bheem went n smoothed the hair of his brother, the most handsome man on earth,with tears in his eyes...
As they proceeded Arjun left this brothers in middle on their journey. Sansaar ka sarvashrsth dhanurdhaari, Jo ek yodha hone par bhi hruday ka ati komal tha, par Yadi usse apni is yogyata par atyadhik garv n Hota to woh hum are saath aur door chal pata...chalo bheem...use shanti se rehne do wahan...
An earthquake came wen the mightiest man fell down on snow...moments later he woke up to be surrounded by his father,mother,younger brothers & his beloved wife. Bheem had left the world. He was now with the kuru family in heaven...here all were kauravs n all were pandavas...no enemity no rivalry. Bheem looked at his elder brother from heaven n wondered why he wasn't able to accompany him. As though answering his query yudhisthir said, bheem tumhe maha vasuki ke vardaan ka itna abHimaan tha ki tum swayam ko ram Bhakt hanuman se adhik balwan manate rahe. Yehi tha tumahaara dosh...

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