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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjanaYYZ

Vrish - can u do a sequence on Dhrit, Karna, etc. watching StarBharat especially DiceHall sequence - include their comments and corrections please



Okay, in Ksheersagar, Vishnu & Lakshmi have decided to have an open air theater, and have invited all the participants in the MB there for a viewing. Somehow the equations are just not the same as they were during their lifetimes.

Yudisthir sees the scene of his accepting the challenge to bet that which is dear to him, and hangs his head in shame. Sahadev approaches him.

S: Jesht, why are you so despondent? You are shown as being very reluctant to stake us, whereas...

Y: That's what embarrasses me, Sahadev. I was guilty of wronging all of you, and these murkhs are showing me as the victim.

K: Anuj Yudisthir, that's nothing compared to how they are showing me. My behavior was wretched, for which I deserved to die, but here, it's looking like I was as vivash as you guys

Karna & Yudisthir embrace each other & start weeping in each other's shoulders.

N: Brata Bhima, look @ how Brata Arjun is looting you of the credit. In that hall, you alone spoke out for Panchali, but here he is, taking vows against Dhritarashtra. It's you who took the vow that he'd kill Karna & Sahadev Shakuni, but here, he's taking the vow to plunge Dhritarashtra's life into darkness.

Bhima laughs loud and decides to arm-wrestle w/ Arjun, but Panchali comes in b/w & hugs him.

P: Arya, I've got great news for you. You know, in bhulok, some people who are watching this and discussing this online, they have given you the Patiyogita award.

B (excited): Panchali, what's the Patiyogita award?

Draupadi pulls out her iPad and shows him the I-F page & then the Patiyogita awards. She shows how it's mostly been won to date by either Yudisthir or Arjun, w/ one win by Sahadev. She then hugs him for winning this latest one. Nakul looks despondent.

Suddenly, Bhima slaps him hard on the back, & Nakul reels, crashing into Panchali. She hugs him, and comforts him

P: Don't worry, Arya. I'm sure you'll also win it some day

B: Yeah, Nakul, I'll go and arm twist them into making you the POW at least once

N: How can that be, Brata? You killed the Dhartarashtras, Brata Arjun killed Brata Karna, even Sahadev killed Shakuni. I killed my bhatijas, but Panchali had nothing against them.

B: Don't worry, Nakul, I'll force them to make something up. It's not like they've been anything close to authentic all this while.


Elsewhere, Dhritarashtra, Gandhari, Shakuni, Duryodhan, Dushashan, Vikarna, Bheeshma, Drona, Ashwatthama are watching all this as well

G: Arya, what are they showing? It's true that you were silent all along, but here, they're showing you as very actively insulting Draupadi 😡

D: Don't worry, Gandhari, what I did wasn't much better than that

Vikarna & Dushashan are furious to see what's being shown

Dushashan: What garbage is this? Brata Duryodhan never staked any of us.

Drona: Not only that, how could he possibly have staked Ashwatthama? And Ashwatthama never said a thing about Draupadi. Why would Krishna curse him then?

Bheeshma: Not only does this whitewash Karna & Yudisthir, it whitewashes me as well. I didn't say a word of protest there when Duryodhan called her a dasi. Here, I'm protesting @ Dhritarasthra ordering Draupadi to stay?

Duryodhan: Anyway, I feel betrayed that even the few victories I had were tainted by the presence of that disguised Kaunteya, Karna. I'm glad they looted his lines & gave it to me. Incidentally, Dushashan, according to them, both you & Mamashree were shocked when I suggested her removing her vastras?

Dushashan: Mamashree, you are really a star of this from our side. Just how you talked Yudisthir into increasing the stakes, and even staking himself, & then Draupadi. You were just brilliant.

Shakuni: And mere bachchey didn't lift a finger for Sishupala, who in fact was friendly w/ Bhimasena, but here they showed him confront Krishna, of all people

Vikarna: But Brata, in this serial, you were moronic. Sishupala kept insulting you - calling you napunsak, nirbal and what not, why would you have taken up cudgels for him once he was dead?

Duryodhan: Beats me. Ask the guys who did this.

Gandhari, who is w/o her blindfold, since Dhritarashtra now presumably has his sight, remarks

G: Putr Duryodhan, how handsome you look in that stubble

D: Thank you, matae.

G: Incidentally, putr, where is Bhanumati? You staked her here, but I never even saw her. I dropped the thali here when Draupadi came in, but then I'd have been very happy to know that I had at least one bahu, Bhanumati

V: Jesht, did you know that Balarama wanted to give Subhadra in marriage to you? None of us did, but here, you were there @ the mandap, and Subhadra came in, all married to Arjun.

D: Oh, whatever!!! Why would I want a sleeping beauty like her?

G: However, I don't like this. They've portrayed all of you very badly.

V: Matae, why are you complaining? They've whitewashed you pretty well too

G: I don't care. You supported Draupadi there, questioning Yudisthir's right to stake her after he had lost himself. Karna insulted you and then Draupadi. None of that here. Kunti must have bribed the entire production unit.

Elsewhere, Pandu, Kunti & Madri are sitting, sharing the popcorn

P: Kunti, I like how this serial depicted me

M: Jiji, did you have to put me down in that manner? Why couldn't you ask them to be fair to me as well? While whitewashing your jesht putr Karna?

Kunti gives a mischievous grin, hugs Madri like Bhima hugging Nakul, and pinches her hard on the cheeks

K: Yeah, Madri, you're right. Had they shown the original, I'd have looked ugly for what I did to Karna. So I had to intervene. While I was @ it, I had them do over everyone that I loved, including Karna. Don't worry, our Nakul & my Sahadev look incredibly cute 😆

P: If only Karna had welcomed me like that? I sometimes wish you did try to tell me about him. I'd happily have made him my heir, instead of Yudisthir.

K: Arya, why don't we go and join our sons and others?

P: Sure, let's do that once this is over

Kunti picks up her iPhone and has a quick convo w/ Shinde. She's done, & turns to Pandu & Madri

K: Okay, I've asked them to skip the vanvas, which they will. We'll go straight to the war. After the show, we'll go straight to dinner. Madri, call Draupadi and ask her to book reservations @ the 'All you can eat' buffet. I'll ask Subhadra & Uttara to get our sons, Abhimanyu, Parikshit, Janamejaya, Ghatotkacha, Prativindya, Babruvahana, Iravana & others to all join us in the feast.

P: I have a better idea, Madri. I'll just buy that place. It will go out of business, particularly if Bhima, Hidimbi & Ghatotkacha are gonna be there for the 'All you can eat' buffet 😆

M: Good idea, Arya. I'll ask Panchali to contact Hidimbi, Valandhara and all our other bahus so that they don't miss out either! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjanaYYZ

Dear StarSabun Creatives:

Thank you for your pure potrayal of me. I can finally face my sister-in-law in heaven now. Her memory is not what it used to be Dwapar Yug and after viewing your depiction of what happened she understands I did not instigate her VH and I was just mildly upset about the whole "sutaputra" rejection at her swayambar... otherwise am an excellent guy. Bhrata Bhim even shared a ladoo with me and Arjuna cried with guilt that he killed me for so little. Yuddhistir was as apologetic as ever. He truly is the best most forgiving brother.
Best Regards,
Karna
P.S. Even Nakula and Sahdev have stopped chasing me with their sword & axe👍🏼
P.P.S. Thank you for opening my eyes to how ex-mitra Duryodhana manipulated me and caused my separation with Vrushali... I have stopped talking to him and have started searching for Vrushali in heaven's Missing Person's Bureau - they have assigned Adirath 007 to locate her.




Sweet!!! 😆

Originally posted by: AnjanaYYZ

Dear StarSabun Creatives:

I truly appreciate that you have recognized my MAHANAYAK status. Am also eternally grateful you depicted my shield throwing skills. I spent much time practicing that skillset to impress my younger brothers, Nakul and Sahdev. The two together practicised sword fighting while I shielded😎 Alas... Madhav came along with his Golden Disk and all forgot about my special shield throwing abilities.😭😭 Ingrates!😡 Speaking of which... I vaguely recall Jhestest bro was quite mean to us especially Panchali in the Dhyut Saba.😭 That is why I vowed to kill him.😡 Now he keeps insisting I apologize as he didn't do much.😕 Also I never vowed to eat dirt.😕 That was Madhav's childhood bad habit😊. Please try not to get us mixed up otherwise he may slice me like Shishupal.
Yours truly,
MahaNayak
P.S. Panchali is mad at you. She curses you to be as childless as StarDrau.😡 Jhester Bro, Nakula, and Sahdev keep trying to prove to her they are not Napunsak. 🤣


Too good 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .Vrish.




While somebody else did that, I'll do a variation - Duryodhan loses Karna to Arjun


D: Samrat, I suggest you now stake Arjun

B: Who is there who you can match w/ Arjun?

D: My friend, Angaraj Karna

B: That sutaputra?

K: Yeah, Bhima, I'm a sutaputra, but your brother is a durachari who stole a woman from her marriage. Mitr, why are you equating me w/ someone who did a rakshash vivaha? I'm a suta all right, but not a rakshasha

D: Don't worry, I plan to make him your das. Do I have your permission to stake you?

Kaju exchange an eyelock, and then Arjun answers on his behalf

A: Of course you do - he has sold you his soul

B: Na, na, na, given away for free. But this is still not equal - if we win, we're getting an ordinary suta as a das, as opposed to you, who will be getting Arjun as a das

D: Not an ordinary suta, a really special suta

Priyamvada gives Kunti the news that Arjun & Karna have been staked against each other. Kunti is horrified, but Priyamvada 'comforts' her

P: Don't worry, Rajmata. Your putr Arjun will win, and Angaraj will become his das & sit @ his feet

K: Priyamvada, are you mad? Karna is his jesht: if anything, he should sit @ Karna's feet

Elsewhere, Adiratha 007 gives his dear bahu Vrushali the news of Karna being staked. She is shocked.

V: People can be staked here?

A: The objective is to get Draupadi staked

V: I can't have that. Let me pray. In fact, if Arya loses and becomes their das, he loses his mukut 😈

A: Hey, that's right. Do a puja so that Arya loses. I'm ashamed to call him my son. If it weren't for having you as a bahu, I'd disown him

Vrushali does her puja so that Karna loses his mukut & freedom, so that she can resume duties as Draupadi's maid, while Karna can become a das to the Pandavas... maybe of the Pandava of his choice

In the battlefield, Krishna who's looking bored while the war is on, and suddenly gets a bartman-abhas about what's going on in Hastinapur. Since he needs both his Sudarshan & his Koumadaki against Shalva, he decides to send his Panchajanya to Hastinapur to distort Shakuni's voice to the dice. The conch shell converts Yudisthir's voice as heard by the dice to Shakuni's, and Shakuni's to Yudisthir's 😈 The conch appears in the court, resting on the ceiling & camouflages itself to blend w/ the ceiling, so that nobody notices it.

Shakuni & Yudisthir then start playing. The Panchajanya plays its role, and everything that Yudisthir says he wants, he gets, surprising Shakuni & shocking Duryodhan 😲😆 In the meantime, whenever Shakuni calls a number, the Panchajanya distorts what he says so that the dice can only hear distorted numbers. Like if Shakuni wanted a 5, the Panchajanya translated it as 2. If he wanted 12, the dice made it 7, and so on.

As a result, Yudisthir safely got 3 merus home, while w/ a 4th, he killed 3 merus of Duryodhan. Finally, when Duryodhan's meru was on the verge of returning home, Yudisthir called 12, and the dice rolled accordingly, sending Duryodhan's meru to yamalok. 😆

BANS started laughing, while Duryodhan was furious!!! Shakuni suggested that they offer a combination of Nakul & Sahadev's exchange for Karna, but Bheeshma reminded them that they can only bet equals, and if one used lineage, Karna was far inferior to either Nakul or Sahadev, let alone both, while if they use valor, both Nakul & Sahadev together were nowhere near Karna.

Duryodhan then bet Dushashan against Bhima & lost. He then bet himself against Yudisthir & lost again.

In the meantime, Vrushali got the news of Karna's losing, and went to Draupadi and asked her to take her back into her service, now that Karna too was a das of the Pandavas. Draupadi smiled & accepted. She then went to the sabha, since the game had ended. Kunti & Gandhari too arrived there.

Yudisthir was feeling generous and offered to release Duryodhan & Dushashan, in order to assuage Gandhari's feelings. Bhima didn't like the idea of releasing them. However, Draupadi came to him and suggested the following:
  • Yudisthir repossess Nakul & Sahadev from Duryodhan
  • Yudisthir gets Duryodhan to give up any more claims on Karna's loyalty, and require that Karna's future loyalty will be to the Pandavas, who will determine his future. Since Vrushali was her maid, Karna could join her in the service of her hubbies
  • If Dhritarashtra wanted Duryodhan & Dushashan freed, he release Bheeshma from his commitments & order him to accompany Yudisthir to Hastinapur, and be loyal to him for the balance of his life
Duryodhan grew furious & wanted to storm out of the hall, but Bhima slapped him and reminded him that he was still a slave, and hadn't yet gotten back his freedom. Dhritarashtra tried to bark an order, but Bhima reminded him that he was king but Yudisthir was samrat. He then ordered Duryodhan to release Nakul & Sahadev, and abandon all claims to Karna's friendship & loyalty, and ordered Karna to return his Anga mukut to Dhritarashtra, and swear lifelong loyalty to the Pandavas. Karna reluctantly agreed.

Vrushali too arrived @ the court and was happy @ this development. Yudisthir then announced that the game was over, and that he was freeing Duryodhan & Dushashan, while repossessing Nakul & Sahadev. Bhima suggested that Karna be made the das of Arjun.

At this point, Kunti was furious and ordered everybody to return to Indraprastha, along w/ Karna & Vrushali. So Kunti, Bheeshma, Yudisthir, Draupadi, BANS, Karna, Vrushali, Adiratha, Radha & Priyamvada all accompanied them to Indraprastha.

At Indraprastha, Kunti announced there that she was Karna's birth mother, & had abandoned Karna due to herself being unmarried @ the time. Karna fainted, and the Pandavas were shocked. Yudisthir announced that both Karna & Vrushali were free, and that in fact, he was turning the kingdom over to them, and that he & his brothers would serve Indraprastha Samrat Karna in any role he wanted.

Vrushali burst out crying, heart broken that not only were her dreams of a mukut free future were not only cruelly crushed, but also, that along w/ Karna, she too would have to adorn a mukut. She fell @ Kunti's feet,begging her to spare Karna the mukut. Kunti looked helplessly @ Radha and requested her to knock some sense into Vrushali.

Radha persuaded Vrushali that as Karna's wife, she was sworn to support him in life, and it so turned out that Karna was not a suta. Vrushali felt cheated. However, Draupadi too approached her and offered to support her in adjusting to her mukut, and Kunti told her that Priyamvada too would help prepare her for this. Yudisthir also told her that in addition to Kunti, not just Karna but all 5 Pandavas would honor Adiratha & Radha as parents, & Vrushali as a bhabi. Bheeshma told her that the child in her womb would become Yuvraj. Karna intervened and told Bheeshma that that decision would be made later on merit, so that if any of the other grandchildren of Kunti was better, they would get the position. Bheeshma tried to object, but Karna reminded him to look in a mirror.

Following this, Karna was crowned the samrat of Indraprastha, and Vrushali too accepted the mukut of samragni. After a few months, as her pregnancy developed, she managed to adjust to the new role, courtesy the support of Priyamvada, Draupadi & Subhadra. In the meantime, Kunti & Bheeshma were happy that all their troubles were behind them.


WOW.. what a story 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Cotswolds

Vrish, another good one. I liked your warped, twisted thinking..😆

Panchajanya was a masterstroke. Brilliant post. Hilarious..🤣🤣



Not just that - but did you notice - in your corner, I made Vrushali mukut free for life, but here, I condemned her w/ a mukut for life 😈
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Posted: 11 years ago
Vrish - AMAZING. Love all the MB Families watching StarBharat in heaven🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
vrish, it was realy awesome, now write somethink about ashwatthama's reaction for his part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Naah, someone else do this one. Arijit, you try it!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .Vrish.



Not just that - but did you notice - in your corner, I made Vrushali mukut free for life, but here, I condemned her w/ a mukut for life 😈


Yup.. That was hilarious.. 😆 Vrushali getting training to wear mukut by drau, subhi and priya.😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Open air theater. In heaven. 😆 Great concept.
Loved the way you showed all deviations. Kunti managing the show from up above and dinner idea is rofling.. Great one Vrish..👏⭐️
Edited by Cotswolds - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dastard StarSabun Creatives:

Why? Why? Why did you have me say those dialogues yesterday? My sister-in-law slapped me,😭 Bhrata Arjuna is giving me Angsty looks again, Bhim threatened to take back his ladoo, and the twins have started chasing me with their sword & axe again. I have tried to explain that I was provoked... She called me a monkey!😡 But, still only Yuddhistir is letting bygones be bygones. He is truly my brother from another father.😃 Speaking of Mother...she is denying I am her son again😭😭

Without Regards,
Karna

P.S. Adirath 007 has not been able to locate the real Vrushali in heaven and is wondering if she is fictional? Please advise him.

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