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Originally posted by: IWasHareeshFan

dekho, mujhe KrishnaaPriya ko chod kar aur koi wattpad par nahi mila, but its OK, even she writes arsu stories.

Now the question is ki do you know any way jisse I can filter out all those Arjun Krishna romance stories on OA?

I think if you are searching by Krishna-Arjun, there's very little chance of you avoiding the romantic ones, since rarely do FF writers mention a 'couple' whose explicit romance they aren't willing to explore. I feel like there's a better chance of finding what you're looking for in subplots of FFs which explore Krishna and Arjun's relationships with their respective wives.

I can empathize with your reaction to the more explicit stories, as I have a similar inhibition (mine's due to my convent education + conservative parents, and I am trying to slowly get over it)...and it's okay to either take your time to get used to it, or make the conscious choice to avoid this whole genre.

You can also check the followers/following of KrishnaPriyaa to source out other writers who write similar stories. And sorry, but I am also new to AO3, so I don't know all of the tricks yet.

Sorry for replying so late

Thank you so much for understanding my POV.

and it is absolutely fine that you tagged me, actually its good to read new perspectives untill and unless it is not very weird, its my bad that I am unable to read everything that you post.

oh that's great, actually its much needed, I am glad to know that people are actually writing in Sanskrit otherwise the language is hardly known to people including me, I know very little but I am trying to learn.

yes, I will definitely check Krishnapriya's list.

I have signed up for their invitation list and I hope I will get acceptance very soon.

Wait let me try to post something that makes me uncomfortable, I hope that IF will allow me to post that.

I am offended by run-on sentences, pointless narration of what went where, and copycat diction.

Originally posted by: BrhannadaArmour

I am offended by run-on sentences, pointless narration of what went where, and copycat diction.

Who will not be offended, even I was offended I mean what's the point of describing everything, who is even willing to read all these wild things

Actually I was reading a particular type of story, while reading I came across this one, although the writer is very good, if you read her other stories then she has written good stories on friendship, youth etc, but I don't know why she described everything like this, even in this story you will have to filter good sceenes.

Read the above post, the second one, you will be super offended.

copycat diction means?

Now see, the story has been written by someone on the same couple, see even she has described the same thing but how nicely she has chosen the words, how elegantly she has written same thing on the same couple, just try to give the below thing a read, its awesome and romantic as well.

Here we go

In the silence of the bedroom, all Karishma Singh could hear was her own heartbeats....!!

She was really getting nervous like a newly wed bride...!

Suddenly, clicking of the door knob alerted her....

She felt her heart paused for a moment before it started racing...!

Vyom Singh entered n a pleasant smile appeared on his lips....

On the bed was the magnet, itself unaware of the intensity of its pull..!!

Taking slow steps he walked towards the bed, n sat down close to his beloved wife....

She was looking prettier through the maroon veil....

Before revealing her face, he held her hand, n lifted it up slowly holding it tight...

Bangles jingled!!

He smiled within his lips, feeling her elevated pulse......, n kissed her hand softly....

He could clearly see the shiver of her lashes across the veil....

He smiled fully, n then lifted it up, revealing the angelic beauty to himself...., n got entranced again....!

KS's heartbeat raised n raised, causing a rush of blood in the facial vessels.., turning her cheeks crimson...!!

A nervous smile appeared on her lips unknowingly...

Her shyness had always been most appealing for Vani...

The innocent beauty, which had never failed to impress him even in simplicity, was making him go insane today...!

Running through her fascinating features, her eyes were again trapped by that cluster of stars on her forehead...

Pushing aside her jhoomar softly, he bent a little n planted a kiss on her forehead...

Her smile widened a little...

Her beauty hadn't faded in years..., but had risen to several times instead...., Vyom Singh couldn't deny...

Heavy loads of shyness weren't letting her lashes rise...

With all her beauty, nervousness n attire , she was tickling VS's heart...

He raised her face, holding it in his palms...

She looked up at him shily...

His eyes were waiting for consent....!

She closed her eyes. That was her submission....!!

Vyom Singh placed his lips on her forehead again...

The long night of winters wrapped it's cozy arms around the thirsty souls...., n Vani showered his precious love over Kashi lavishly...!!!

PS just look at the words, how metaphorically she has described/written everything.

These are okay to write in my opinion, to read or not that's the reader's choice.

Originally posted by: wayward

These are okay to write in my opinion, to read or not that's the reader's choice.

Actually I liked the last part but could not admire the first 2 posts, I mean it was way too wild for me to even think about those scenes, seriously soch kar bhi dard hota hai.

My parents toh are way more forward I think, they say ki at least now make a boyfriend as you are in college, but I say ki no, not now, its not the right time.

btw I told you naa that I did a big blunder with the word smooching as I wasn't familiar with that word so what happened was

I was going somewhere with my professor, we were walking together, she was looking somewhere else while I was looking at the construction work that was going on in our college campus, so she saw someone smooching and she said ki see, how these people are behaving in public, they saw me and they are still smooching, they did not even stop.

I was completely unaware ki what she was saying, I did not even know that any such word even exists, but kuch toh bolna tha, I mean if I wouldn't have said anything toh she would have felt ki I am being rude

I thought that she was talking about the construction work that was going on, after thinking ki what to say

I just looked at the construction wale uncles/bhaiya I said

Ma'am they are smooching for the development of our campus.

We were walking and she stopped all of a sudden, she started looking at me in a weird way, I still couldn't figure what's wrong, then she said ki they are smooching, she pointed at a particular direction, I also looked at that direction and then she again looked at me and I closed my eyes in embarrassment.

She probably noticed that and she tried to divert the topic but she couldn't do that instead she said ki you know what, they did not even attend the class today and here they are, however the couple came out from the canteen, the girl was hiding behind as she saw the professor but she couldn't see her clearly so she thought that I was walking with a student as the prof looked like a student only agar door se dekho toh, she was wearing a top so recognizing her was aur bhi difficult and that too jab clearly naa dekha ho tab so they continued with whatever they were doing, but when we went close (there was no other way to go where we were going, vahi se jana padta) toh I remember that girl kaa reaction.

you know even my younger brother knew the meaning of that word but I didn't know.

Actually I am still learning the slangs and new new words.

Now this happened last semester

Please don't consider me a fool, I did not know the meaning of that word neither I was looking there to get any clue, therefore this confusion. However, I am learning new new words from different people, although I don't use those but still I am learning.