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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: annukumari007

Awesome updates 👏

Loved it so much
Eagerly waiting for the next part please update soon dear..
Thanks for the pm

Tysm dear.😆 Nice to know that you are loving my work. Will try to update soon. Stay tuned❤️
Edited by prishathebest - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Thanks for dedicating the update to all Forum Friends.
Awesome updates.
Loved them all.
Madhu told RK what is playing on her mind and RK too is attracted towards her.
Rishbala on their date, was nice.
Madhu's mother divorce news made Madhu upset and she landed in front of RK's room.
Waiting to know what happens next.
Continue soon.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awsome updates
Madhu was thinking whdther to chat or not to rk & they chatted for more time .. i was happy that madhu & rk ended the chat on a good note after knowing they both had different opinion what madhu was on a trip to goa with friends ? Rishi was going to propose madhu but madhu dint feel like she cant love him so trishna reminded her about the past where she met rk after 6 months & madhu was happy knowing he was there she thought rk will recognize her but sadly he dint but i felt angry as it was not his fault they both told they wont meet again . Happy to know rishi & madhu r still friends .Omg she met rk yet again but this time with a girl & madhu hated him for not recognizing her & was hurt & angry
Wow rk madhu had danced
Rk madhu had cleared their misunderstandings & gone for dinner date nice & rk still wanted to spend time with her
Madhu talked to her mom but was broken after knowing her parents wanted to part ways
She was in rk's room??& she said she was ready for it shocking rk
What will happen now?
Waiting for the next part😊
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Thanks for dedicating the update to all Forum Friends.

Awesome updates.
Loved them all.
Madhu told RK what is playing on her mind and RK too is attracted towards her.
Rishbala on their date, was nice.
Madhu's mother divorce news made Madhu upset and she landed in front of RK's room.
Waiting to know what happens next.
Continue soon.
Thanks for the PM dear.

Missed reading ur comments yaar. Glad you are liking this story. Madhu at RK's doorstep, shocking right? Read on to know what happens next😳
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Tomili

Awsome updates

Madhu was thinking whdther to chat or not to rk & they chatted for more time .. i was happy that madhu & rk ended the chat on a good note after knowing they both had different opinion what madhu was on a trip to goa with friends ? Rishi was going to propose madhu but madhu dint feel like she cant love him so trishna reminded her about the past where she met rk after 6 months & madhu was happy knowing he was there she thought rk will recognize her but sadly he dint but i felt angry as it was not his fault they both told they wont meet again . Happy to know rishi & madhu r still friends .Omg she met rk yet again but this time with a girl & madhu hated him for not recognizing her & was hurt & angry
Wow rk madhu had danced
Rk madhu had cleared their misunderstandings & gone for dinner date nice & rk still wanted to spend time with her
Madhu talked to her mom but was broken after knowing her parents wanted to part ways
She was in rk's room??& she said she was ready for it shocking rk
What will happen now?
Waiting for the next part 😊

God I love reading such long comments!Tysm sweety for listening to my request n showing ur support. I'm so happy to see how you gave such an apt summarization of this FF till now. Kahani abtk😛
I'lI try to update next Part soon.
Love u😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
This is weekend.. Can we get an update??
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: aishu007

This is weekend.. Can we get an update??

Still working on it. Will surely update it by tomorrow evening. Thanks for waiting😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
This, by far, has been the toughest part for me to write. I literally struggled in the end to complete it n I'm apologizing in advance if this doesn't meet ur expectations. 😕 But I guess I will deliver a lot better next time. For now, give it a try😊

Chapter 14: One Passionate Night

Rishabh

I heard a knock on my door n wondered who could that be at such a late hour. When I opened the door, I was left thunderstruck on seeing the person standing there. It's her!
When I last saw her today, I was convinced that it was the 'last time' I was seeing her, considering how firmly she had rejected my offer. I had tried to convince her by doing literally everything I could've possibly done. I was delightfully charming, I played decent, I even tried to do the "talking stuff", not my usual style but still she won't budge from her 'I-don't-go-f**king-around' resolve. Honestly, there was a moment when I saw her shield getting weakened n I thought maybe, finally I'll get my way with her. But thanks to her annoyingly stubborn attitude, I had to accept my defeat.
Until now, when I see her standing at my door, in her most miserable state. I'm shocked, surprised, little concerned n totally confused. Before I could ask or even think of anything, she speaks,
"I Want To This Too!"
I knew exactly what she means by that. I can't believe my ears. I never anticipated this to happen, not after the clean closure we had on the subject. But here we are!
"I.. I don't understand". I clasped my hand to my mouth as I take in her horrible state,
"Gosh! Look at u! Are u ok?"
She keeps staring at me without blinking. Her ever-so-beaming eyes looked dull n lifeless. Her cheeks were tear-stained. Her body looked fragile n weak. But surprisingly, her voice sounded determined n unwavering when she said
"I'm fine. I am telling you that I'm up for ur offer, if that's still valid?"
I tried to search in her eyes, see if they could tell me what's going on in her head. She was always pretty good at hiding her feelings n I could've never been able to lure her, if it wasn't for her traitor eyes. Her gorgeous, breath-taking decisive eyes! She kept on denying but her eyes invariably told a different story. They always gave her away. They were my accomplice, my favorite thing about her. But now, even they seem to have turned me down.
I let her in n closed the door behind us. Her eyes are still waiting for my answer. I don't know what to say. She doesn't seem to be herself n I couldn't take this ahead now. I want to f**k her. Damn I wanted to f**k her from the very moment I saw her pic on my laptop! N over the time, my fantasies have just grown dirtier n wilder. But this is not the way I want it to happen. Today she looks like trying to get away from something n so, has to surrender to me. I don't want her to agree to this for mere reason of escaping from something. I want her to want this, with all her body, mind n heart. There should be a burning desire in her for me, like all her insides r on fire n the ONLY way she could calm those flames is when she let them embrace mine, coalesce with each other, until we r one.
"Ready for it? U can't even bring yourself to say the word"
She lowers her eyes n try to think of a good response. Finally I hit the right chord!
I take a step ahead n my voice comes out soft when I ask her "What happened to you? What made u to change ur mind?"
"None of ur business" She snaps n again turns up to look at me. Her gallant tone was back.
"U offered me to...to sleep with u. Well, I'm ready for it. N I want to do this your way. It will be just a one time thing n then we will walk away, never to see each other again. No connection, no strings attached."
Her bold proclamation startled me. I wondered if she's the same girl who judged me up n down n called me pathetic for the way I choose to live my life? Is she the same girl who despite of admitting her feelings for me, refused to bend her morals n rejected me on my face? Does she has any idea what she's agreeing for?
She moves ahead n very subtly places her arms around my neck, raising herself to my ear n whispers with her soft lips almost touching my skin, "What happened Rishabh? I thought u were not the over thinker type! Just give me what I want n feast upon what I offer..."
Bloody hell! Her sensuous voice, her vanilla scent, her teasing touch, everything is such a big turn on. I can feel my blood rushing down n my length getting harder in my pants. I can't take this anymore. I'm not a player but I'm NO f**kING GENTLEMAN EITHER!
I lift her up in my arms n see her lips curl into a victorious smile. I like her this way, dauntless n unafraid of what she wants. But still that stupid feeling keeps nagging me to pull myself back. Too bad bro, I'm not entertaining u today!
As we reached the bed, I put her down. She keeps staring at me with raw passion n that quenches some of my doubts from earlier. Still, DAMNIT! I've to do this.
"Before anything happens, I've to ask u one thing."
She sighed. She has no idea how damn frustrating this is for me too. I'm not a gentleman, but I did promise her some decency.
"I know something went wrong with u which is why u r here to find a distraction. N tell u what, I don't give a f**k about any of it. Only thing I want to hear is, whether u really want to do..."
She cut me by crashing her soft lips on mine n that is the end of all my stupid self-restraint.

Madhu

I frown as he begins to remind me all the Whys' n hows' of the situation. I'm not here to recall my motives n rationalize them. Instead, I'm here to forget everything n give into my desire. So I cut him n all of a sudden, slammed my lips on his. I seriously had no idea what to do. I had acted on an impulse when I initiated the kiss but now I'm totally clueless about how to go ahead. I have not kissed anyone before n the moment I met his cold, parched lips, every numb nerve in my body awakened. I realized what I was doing n almost retreated but just then, I find his hands cup my cheeks n his lips start moving around mine vigorously. He was sucking my lips n his tongue caressed them in between. My heart has started racing in my chest n I think I will melt down any moment. Suddenly he pulls away n looks at me confused.
"Why r u not reciprocating? Wait...is this...is this ur first kiss?" His voice sounds full of surprise n my cheeks flush with embarrassment. I nervously look down to my hands clutching his shirt. Wait, when did that happen?
He removes his hands from my face n shakes his head.
"Oh freaking hell! U should have told me this. This is insane!"
I look up at him to see how he feels about this. Obviously an inexperienced n naive girl like me would be a big turn off!

Rishabh

To say I am surprised will be an understatement. I digested the fact that she is a virgin n never had a boyfriend but this! This is completely absurd. How is this possible that she is not kissed ever before? Are guys around her totally blind? Cause tbh, man she is one of the hottest girl I've ever seen. N now knowing that I'm going to be her first, in literally every aspect, it's driving me crazy! No other man had ever touched her before. I'll be her first! N I've got to make it incredible.
"U have no idea what u've been missing on Miss lil Doc. U wanted distraction right?"
I swiftly move ahead n lightly stroke her left cheek.
"U r in for a treat baby. I'm gonna give u the night u'll always remember."
I run my fingers down her bare hand n she shivers under my touch. I love to see her body react to me this way. She can hardly imagine what all I can do to her. My mind is running with dirty ideas.
"Look at me" I command n she obliged.
I could hear her heart throbbing against her chest. She is nervous n excited at the same time. I could tell it by the way she kept biting her lower lip. Oh, how badly I want to suck her luscious lips again.
"U'll remember this one to be ur first n the best kiss ever. I'm gonna make u feel so good that nothing could ever top that. U want this right?"
She nods her head slowly.
"Good! U may want to close ur eyes now. I assure you it will be more pleasurable that way."
She quickly shuts her eyes n waits for me to make a move. I admire her features, taking in all her angelic beauty n her youthful innocence. Her nose wrinkles when I take longer to meet her lips n I couldn't help but smile seeing her desperation. She looks so cute n adorable. I couldn't hold myself any longer and closed the distance between us.

Madhu

I was growing restless awaiting to feel his touch again n then, it happened. He slowly places his lips on mine n his hands went around my waist. Oh that feeling! It is beyond everything that I've ever imagined. He tries to be gentle, unlike the last time. His insistent mouth is parting my shaking lips, sending wild tremors along my nerves, evoking the sensations I never knew I was capable of feeling. I attempt to follow his action. My hand lazily circles around his neck as we kept on our slow rhythm of devouring each other. His lips tastes minty n I could feel my mind getting intoxicated.
Out of the blue, he lightly bit my lower lip n I let out a gasp. Taking advantage of my parted lips, he quickly leads his tongue into my mouth. Our tongues mert n now the kiss is turning more intense. He's kissing me harder, deeper, with a fervent urgent need, literally sucking the life out me. N I try my best to sync with him. My legs felt weak n I cling on to him, my only support in a dizzy swaying world. He grabs me by my hips n lifts me off the ground Thanks to the side slit of my beautiful gown, I was able to climb on him n wrap my legs around him. He is crazy n he is diving me crazy, totally nuts. COCONUTS
After a while we part away, breathing heavily. He let me down n chuckles catching his breath,
"Breath-taking wasn't it?"
I look away shyly n smile.
"Tell me, did u like it?"
He raises my chin with his hand n makes me look at him.
"Answer me".
"Hmm" I am too embarrassed to say anything.
"N do u like it when,"
He moves his hand to caress my cheek.
"When I touch u?"
I get goosebumps feeling his feathery soft touch. He bends down n brushes his lips along my jaw, to my ear n huskily whispers,
"N do u like it when my lips r pressed against ur skin?"
He lightly bites my earlobe n I tremble by his sudden assault.
He comes to stand behind me, n now works his expert mouth on my shoulder blade. I moaned in pleasure as he nibbled on a spot right above my collarbone. He seemed to have noticed it as he begins teasing me doing that again n again.
"Rishabh!"
My voice came out as a desperate plea.
"Do u want we to stop?"
The hell not! N he knows it too.
"Then tell me what u want". demands n I feel his hot breath fanning my skin.
"Tell me what u want me to do, baby".
He coaxes me to speak up but honestly, I don't know what I want. I just know I want him closer. I want to feel him. I want to get lost in his touch. N the way he addressed me with baby, it only made me wanting for more.
"I want u... I want u Rishabh!"

Rishabh

N once those words are out of her mouth, there's no stopping me now. I unzip her dress n her back arches feeling my cold touch against her skin. She's flawless n I couldn't keep myself from kissing her milky white back. She quivers in my grip n I hold her tight. I let her dress go off. It slid down to reveal her perfectly gorgeous body. She feels embarrassed n tries to turn away.
"Don't ever do that". I hold her arms n stop her.
"U've a spectacular body. Don't ever be embarrassed of owning it."
She blushes. Oh, I can't wait any longer. I quickly undress myself, while she keeps staring at me do so. She looks impressed by what she sees n then her eyes go wide as I let down my boxers. I can't help but chuckle seeing her reaction.
I carefully make her lie on the bed n climb on top of her. Her eyes looks curious n impatient. I love the fact that she is so naive n inexperienced about all of this. I couldn't believe my luck that I'll be the first one to devour her beauty, to explore all her secrets n to give her this euphoric bliss. I hover all over her body, kissing n fondling every curve n every inch of her skin. I wanted to devour every part of her. My wild thoughts r driving me crazy n my body is lusting to feel her around me. But I've to take it slow. It's her first time n I want to make it special n unforgettable for her. I want her to register my every touch, my every kiss. I want her to feel worshiped, just like she deserves!
Finally I grab a condom n wear it on my length. She looks a little nervous n clutches the sheets underneath her fingers.
"U sure u want to do this?"
I look her in the eye n ask with utmost sincerity.
"I couldn't be any more sure about it. I want this Rishabh!"
N with this, I cleared away every little separation left between us. Our bodies unite n finally, we r one!
I'm laying on my back admiring the sleeping beauty beside me. She looks calm with her angelic face holding a lovely smile n the sheets raised to cover up her body to her chest. A pure scenic beauty! Just then my phone vibrates n I turn around to get in from the desk beside. I frown seeing the message n immediately put it away. I don't want to think about this right now. But my bam! The phone vibrates again, this time I'm getting a call. I curse mentally n climb out to answer the call. Once I'm far enough from the bed, I swipe the screen n furiously ask the person online,

"What is your f**king problem Dipali?"
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NOTE:
GUYS PAY ATTENTION TO THIS. I TAKE CREATIVE LIBERTY TO CHANGE MADHU'S FRIEND'S NAME(MENTIONED EARLIER AS DIPALI) TO KHUSHI. N NOW THE ONE WHO CALLED RK IS DIPALI, A NEW ENTERY IN THE STORY.
So, I tried n struggled a lot to write this update. I never imagined that writing intimate moments could be this hard. Now I've new found respect for all the writers who have presented this in their stories so brilliantly. Hat's off!👏
N of course, I plan on to introduce a new character in the story, who is a vamp. N she has to be Dipali, because, DUH! It's her birthright to be the kabab me haddi in Rishbala love story!😆
I'm so excited to read ur views n comments.😊 N also let me know what you think will happen next.😃
Love you guys.
❤️


Edited by prishathebest - 6 years ago
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Wow finally Madhu did which she din want waiting for next
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Wow amazing update dear loved it totally.. Hehe finally they did it oh my I'm blushing lol I loved the thing that even though Rk said badly wanted Madhu he was still concerned about her didn't want her to agree for it due to pressure or as a way of distraction he wanted her to give herself to him with her full consent & he wanted her to feel the need for him as much as he feels for her & for Madhu she was nervous at first but soon she forgot her nervousness & when she was with him she comes our of her sadness too I know Madhu loves Rk I'm sure of it it's not just attraction & Rk too definitely feel more for Madhu & I'm sure it's the start of love hahe & Madhu no it's your last meeting with him this is just start there is more to come for & that dipali is she Rk's ex?? I guess so I hate that evil kabab mein haddi but I'm glad dips is evil here lol bcoz its so hard to imagine her as goody goody char haha & bravo it's your first story & you the romantic scenes so beautifully I know it's so tough to write intimate scenes l know it very well lol you know it took me 5 stories to write a kiss scene & 18 stories to finally write a hot update it's really great of you that you wrote Rishbala hot romance so beautifully OK now coming to dips I know she is up-to something I will break her bones if she dare to create problems between Rishbala & I want Rishbala to meet soon I can't see them away from each other yaar.. Waiting for the next update.. Plz update soon.. Thanks for the pm :)

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