I have to say you do a commendable job with each chapter They are long and so much eventful ...
Actually I'm not much into adult story or even if I read that's cause I have loved the concept and this is one of them but still I can not bring myself to comment or say anything on those Intimate parts in any Story so pardon me for that but I assure you from now on I'll try to share My view on other things in each Part onwards from your next chapter...
Actually you have written this story Wonderfully and you do know to portray things excellently this One is One of your Best... from Last 3 days reading your couple of story and this one is quite intriguing to Know These character shades by shades Specially Rishab though I prefer to imagine Maan on His place 😉
I'm always into Maaneet story not much out of GHSP forum but not regretting cause this story is enough worthy to read cause it's holding my interest and honestly I don't want it to end ever...
I just could not come to like This Character of RK from start he's aura is dark intimidating and really an engima ...
many times felt like hating him to the core seeing him always pointing Madhu's living in Their house or surviving at their mercy treating her like an object with His wish I just could not accept His behavior I know His past is not fancy but that given him right to demean her or Hurt her feelings????
it had continue till long my feelings regarding him sometimes it was so bad I myself felt like slapping him cause from start he was invading her space and troubling her how would will we feel if in an unknown place someone behaves that way with us but whatever he was with time seemed reliable and that music room incident just messed up my mind...would you believe when madhu reached home and hugged radha tears were making way out of my eyes I'm not such emotional person but I don't know what happened yesterday that I cried I would have commented anything on for each part in this story but My health is not good and right hand is hurt and I can't manage to type much... sorry for that...
but my Feelings regarding rk started to change but again is use and end thing with Madhu after he's satisfied didn't go well with me... though good thing is His honesty he never hide His real intention
he cares more than just seeing her a bed warmer isn't it true???
Cause I feel that...
but nothing like that happening he's still not thinking her beyond his wants of object...
what is she to him actually???
I would be really hurt If he ever break this thing and finish it of ending their more like deal than any relationship...
cause this gonna hurt Madhu and isn't her one year will be ending soon what about that how things will be then??
okay I can manage only this much with my left hand 😆
others query and sharing my view will resume after getting little well or in further updates...as many things are still unsaid from my side...
but must say this one is really amazing kind of...
so it's end here... will be waiting for next update egarly...😊