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Posted: 7 years ago
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very original and innovative writing. you are one of my favourite writers on this site.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice one.Liked the OS. Such a superb piece of writing.
Rk is facing writer's block n Madhubala a show maker . Quite different characterization.
Want to read more about them.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lovely os Lazy... Thanks for the dm darling...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I loved it so much
short light funny with happy ending

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Mindblowing OS dear...
totally loved it...
Rishbala moments r enchanted...
Outstanding ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I so knew it .This so short..Not fair .I seriously wanted to read a Big one.*pouting*
Haye main mar javan..
I seriously loved the whole plot..
Wen Rk was walking through his thoughts I was thinking did he had a Breakup or what?? Then he said B**** I confirmed it.
Then Got to know he is a Writer and was facing a Writer's block.
I loved a line were he says that u can't sit in front of laptop and write it..It should come naturally..i agree with that point.
Then there was the entry of our Girl Madhubala.
I thought she is the robber but then u introduced a twist she was just Pranking him.
Rk..Wat to say..He was so talkative and was such a sweet writer he made her fall in his words that's why Writers are Amazing..
Haye were can I find this Handsome Writer??.
He was ready to Autograph all his books haye..Thats so sweet..
Di..If we ever meet u just go in a walk like Rk and I will be pranking u like Madhu ..hehe lol..
Man I seriously loved it..Ur plots ,thoughts and writing is Amazing and Marvellous di..
Loved it to the core.
He saved his number on her mobile too..Invited for a Coffeee too..He is so Fast man..not bad Hun.
Aww the Dedication part was totally Awww and Cute and Romantic..
But I wanted to read more of them.about their date and all.

Thank u so much for this Os was missing ur writing.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved it!

If this is what happens when you "just type away" then I hope you do it more often!!

It was a lovely story but I was amazed why RK was not panicking at seeing the gun at least.

But everything flowed so well. RK's dialogue with ideas and flirting to Madhu's confusion and blushing. Sigh. Lovely!!!

The ending was brilliant!

Thank you for a great story!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome OS. Light hearted OS.
Rishbala are married
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Posted: 7 years ago
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awesome 😃but too short 😳

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