Rishbala FF||Love Blooms In Heart Thread 1||Thread 2 link pg 1 Dt 25/2

sahira kabir

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Loved it

Thank you for the pm

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Roseline

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Posted: 7 years ago

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That's good to read something light hearted dear!! Very well written...enjoyable

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ananya2010

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Aishu awesome update.

Loved it.

Loved Madhu and Malik bonding. RK's is envy of their bond coz his parents were never like that with him.

RK was Padmini's student and the kids used to call her dinosaur.

Continue soon.

Waiting for the next update.

Thanks for the PM dear.

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BluebelPrincess

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Hi Aishwariya,

I don't know why I never felt like reading this story before but now that I'm reading, I would like to post a late comment on one of the parts. I have thoroughly read till second part so I would like to comment on PART 2, hope you won't mind me posting late. I rarely post on writing threads actually 😳:

It's obvious that Rishbala has their past...their past romances. And RK is having a hard time to move

on but Madhu's trying for the sake of her father. I saw a coordination between Rishbala: Madhu taking this soporific drugs and RK drinking to forget their pains from the past.

I like the way you hinted on the deep red colour of Madhu's Mehndi, hmm he is soon gonna be in love with her 😉. This part also proved that RK's past love is not Ria. See, I'm not gonna assume after reading only 2 parts that RK's past was Dipali as seen in most of fanfics. Let's see who it turns out to be.

What made me finally comment on the part ( I'm a silent member in writing department ) is that you included the meaning of the seven pheras to highlight the fact that they are bonded forever in holy matrimony and they are meant to be together despite their past.

Will soon comment on rest of the parts as well...

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