RiShbala Ts 'ChecKmate' ||Completed#PG.24|| (25/09)

RM14

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Rese 😳

unres

Finally read first part 😃

Awesome start dear AA..👏

loved how Trish ne bana di Jodi 😉😆

and loved how RK -Madhu relationship progressed ..⭐️

loved it n so b'fully written ..

enjoyed it a lot .. 😳

and once again thanks for such lovely story and cute part ..❤️

hope Rk not taking revenge ..as of now Madhu and Rk both are in good terms and now friends.

thanks for pm dear Aaniya.🤗

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RM14

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Remaining part - Is Rk cheating on Madhu ?😕

Hope not but with Atharv than? What was that he thinking !

OK Madhu agreed n Rk moved ahead with her consent. n she to likes him ..😳

Waiting for next !👍🏼

Awesome n b'fully written part.⭐️

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silverfire

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Hi Aaniya. How r u buddy.😃

Sorry for the late comment.

Lovely start n all was going well. Don't tell me RK is on revenge mode. NO!!!😕

And that last line ' his hatred is gonna cost someone's dear life !!' is giving me goosebumps.😕 N that poem is giving me negative vibes. Is gonna marry that uncle ji n teach RK a lesson? Oh God! Hope madhu does not 'checkmate ' him.

As usual ur stories r a pleasure to read ..only thing is I don't have time to come to the forum that often. If I do login , I'll choose ur stories first. 😛

Thanks for the new story n also for the pm.

Belated happy birthday to u n Deepti di!!!🤗

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Mikolingam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Fantastic , fabulous . Love the story line very much. Great start . Romance was well written. Madhu taking her time to accept RK. And RK not forcing her. Such an understanding between them. The relationship is good. Waiting who is going to spoil it. Pls continue fast

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Anntempleton

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Amazing start.

I loved the concept. Rk was so different than arrogant self which was very refreshing. Everything was so sweet why is rk trying to ruin everything. He should realize he can't hurt one sibling without hurting other. Whatever atharv did must be bad, but rk is going to spoil his future for his past.

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