Rishbala||short story||Soulmates 2(completed|pg 31||dt 14/7)

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Aiswarya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: madhumeandyou

Wonderful update aishu.
U gav diffrnt climax from movie . Loved it lots.
Very emotional yet heartwarming in the last.
Thanks a lot for the pm

Thanks liah.. I didn't wanted to make rishbala old soon... So I changed the end.. Thanks for reading 😊

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Aiswarya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: Jyoraj
Emotional part with happy ending
RK was not ready to accept his mistake but finally did.
He got another chance and they are a happy family.
Nice story

Thank you so much 😊😊

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Aiswarya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: harini_
Superb and emotional update,
Rk too realized his mistakes and both realized they can't live without each other,
he got second chance,
finally Rishbala living happily with Ridhu,
lovely ending and awesome edit,
thanks for the pm

Thank you so much Harini 😊

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Aiswarya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: magicalmirage
Nice ending for a beautiful story.
They realized Thier mistakes
They got a second chance to live
And rk is successful in it
Now they are expecting Thier little bundle of joy
Thanks for pm
Write more stories
Best of luck

Thank you chechi 😃

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Aiswarya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: kaustavi
Amazing part..⭐️⭐️
Peter...is he God's messenger? Yes.. 😊
He made Rk realize his mistake and also made him realise his Madhu loves him a lot...
I felt so bad when Madhu was going to suicide...thank God, everything became alright...
They lived happily ever after...with coming happiness in the form of new child..

Loved this story so much..
It teaches us ..we should communicate and give time to our loved ones...respect our relations..
Thank you...😳

Thank you Kaus..Thanks for the lovely review😳

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Aiswarya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--
second chance is what it takes.. people says this line.. and it aptly suit ur story.. they got a second chance at love.. to live with each other.. to love each other.. though serious topic it was.. rk changed for good.. and madhu as usual i supported her.. being feminist.. lolz.. but i love rk more.. hahaaa.. ur edit girl.. its superb wala.. rk & madhu there.. they are tp die for.. tnx fr pm & this beautiful story :)

Thanks aan.. Glad you liked the edit & story.. 😃