Rishbala||short story||Soulmates 2(completed|pg 31||dt 14/7) - Page 22

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

omg..
thats very scary update..
and the last part was heart wrenching..
rk barging into The room to see Rk..

No..It's not Rk..

and the way she was begging..

dips.. madhu understands whts happening.
no need to taunt her more..!!

Yes..

whats that ?
rk cant be dead..
dont tell me u are planning to met Rk & madhu in Heaven.. *sigh*

Lol.. Never.. If they Reunite in heaven then what about Ridhu..??
tnx fr pm :)

Thanks for Reading aan 😃😃
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kkrnightriders

THANKS AISHU TRAGEDY NAHI CHAHIYE MUJHE LIKE TEMPEST😆

Me too don't like tragedy ending aparna.. I always want to end my all stories in a good note 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Madhu realize her mistake n love for rk
Hope rk get well n who was person at end?
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu

Awesome update
Madhu realize her mistake n love for rk
Hope rk get well n who was person at end?

Thanks dear.. You will come to know about it on next part.. Thanks for reading 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
such an emotional update.
what's the point in blaming while both rishbala spent their time fighting. Boy I didn't see the twist coming. hopefully you won't kill either of rishbala😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Fantastic update. So now rk is in serious condition n madhu is totally shaken. Their daughter unknown to the happenings.dips is trying to support madhu. Thanks for the pm. Do update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Anntempleton

such an emotional update.

what's the point in blaming while both rishbala spent their time fighting. Boy I didn't see the twist coming. hopefully you won't kill either of rishbala😉

Thanks a lot dear.. Yep they won't die.. Thanks for reading.. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: madhumeandyou


Fantastic update. So now rk is in serious condition n madhu is totally shaken. Their daughter unknown to the happenings.dips is trying to support madhu. Thanks for the pm. Do update soon

Thanks liah.. Gonna update.. Pls continue reading 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi friends.. Here is the final part.. Sorry I don't know anything about Christian myth so if there is any mistakes pls forgive me..& pls don't compare things given in this part with reality..& this is an rk filled part..you have all right to throw tomatoes and eggs on me if you didn't like the part.. Pls ignore mistakes..


Soulmates 2


Final part


Rk's pov

I looked around & found myself on hospital bed.. How I came here..??the visuals of that grim accident came in front of my eyes..
"come with me rishab.. "that man called me again.. But who is he.. I never had seen him before.. Then how he know me.. I looks him again.. He looks old.. His beard is white in colour..& his dressing style is also different..but what he is saying..? I didn't got it.. Is he saying I'm dead & he came to take my soul with him...??
"who r u..?? "I asked him..in return he forwarded his right hand to me..i looks him & held his hand.. I felt an electric spark by touching him..
"come with me... I have lot more things to show u before taking u from this earth.. "his words made me shocked.. So I'm dead...
"is I'm dead...??"I asked him.. He smiled at me.. "not yet.. But soon.."
"who r u..? "I asked him..
"come.. I will say u.."he said.. I get off the bed holding his hand..we together move in & I looked back...the sight before me was shocking...i was on that bed..then me..?? ..i looked at him for an answer.."u r rishab's soul..."he said to me...
"r u taking me to youndriworld... ??"I asked him..
"no..u didn't died yet.. After ur death I will take u there.. R u eager to go there..??"he asked me..
"S.. Take me as fast as u can.. I don't want to live in this world which only gave me pain.. "I said..he looked me.. "u won't change this word na.. "
"never.."I said confidently..
" don't u want to live ur life with ur beloved ones..?"he asks me..i know he is saying about Whom & I have answer for it too..
"but they don't want me...i have no one here.. So it's better I die.. "
"OK.. Then come with me.. "he said & I walked with him by holding his hand.. We get outside from the ICU & I saw Madhu sitting there with my ridhu..don't know what happened to me suddenly..i couldn't stand there by seeing her tears.. Did she shed these tears for me..??she didn't wants me then y she is crying for me..??so many questions popped up in my mind..i tried to go near her but he stopped me..
"she can't see u.. "he said.. Oh yeah.. I am a soul now.. I forgot about it.. We continued walking..
"can I ask u one thing... Who r u..??"I asked him..
"if u want explanation I have lot more things to say but in short i can say I'm Peter.. "he said.. My eyes grew wider..
"Saint Peter...??"I asks him..
"yeah.. Ppl call me so.. "he said..oh gosh.. Now I'm with saint Peter.. One of the apostles of Jesus Christ...he took me to my home... The Door was locked but v enters inside...
"y v came here..?? "I asked him confused..
"u know rishab some ppl like u don't know the value of life.. "he said..
"oh so u took me here to advise me.. Anyways I'm going to die... Then y should I know the value of life.. ??"I asked him crossing my arms..
"u r forgetting ur promise to ur wife.. "he said..
"no... My promise was to take care until my death.."I said him..
"u r really a jerk..now I'm thinking y god gave her hand to you.."he says..
"Did i ever stopped her from anything..? I gave her full freedom.. She was the problem maker... Always create head ache for me...she want me to show my love for her..i love her but I can't say it 24*7.."I said in a strong tone..hearing me he chuckled...
"did u ever said it to her after ur marriage..."he asked me... I didn't thought he will ask things like this..
"I don't remember.. "I said...
"i didn't managed a tough human like u... Oh my Jesus.."
"I'm a soul now .."I corrected..
"can't blame his wife.."I heard him muttering...
"y r u always talking by her side..??"I asks him with a frown..
"it's time for u to realize ur mistakes.. "he said & caressed on my eyes...i saw a vision of my past..

Pov ends
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"hello...yeah I will be there with in an hour.."rk said & disconnects the call..
"Rk.. "he turns hearing madhu's voice...
"madhu I have an important work.. In will be late today.. "he said..
"work.. ?But today is my check up date na.. Did you forget about it..??"she pounded..
"uff.. I forgot...do one thing u go with deepali..."he said..
"this is ur child not deepali's.. "she says indignantly...
"don't shout.. "he snapped at her...
"last time too u were busy na..u have time for all damn things but have no time for us .."she says facing him...
"y r u behaving like a child..??do what I said.. "he said & tried to leave..
"last time also this same happened don't think I'll hear ur lame excuses today.."she said...
"u do what u want... "he said & left..

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Pov starts

I opened my eyes & gave him a questioning look..
"it was whose mistake..??"he asked me..
"of course hers..she creates unnecessary events..."I said vigorously ..
"I came here to make u realize ur mistakes but u r defending urself..??U r 1 in million.. "he said & smiled at me.. Is it a mocking smile..??my eyes glued to his blue eyes...his eyes have a great sheen..i didn't say anything...actually I wanted to say many things but my words stucks in my throat..he moves from there & me too followed him.. He stopped in front of my art room...
"afte marriage did u ever opened this room..?? "he asks me.. I started thinking.. Yes.. Occasionally but before marriage I was always inside this room..but I can't be irresponsible like that after marriage...
We entered inside..the room Was dusty..i had kept this room very neatly but now it seems like a ghost house...he showed me my own paintings which is now not in my memories ...
"can i ask u one thing what's the problem b/w u & ur wife..??"weird question.. He know everything about me then y he is asking this..??
"actually u both don't have any particular reason for ur fight right...?"he asks me..
"actually what u want to say.. ??"I Asks almost irritated...
"u r going to lose ur life bcoz of u only rishab.."he said.. I didn't get what he meant by that..
"this is not the actual time for ur death u had more age to live but u choose death.."hearing him mukund's words echoed in my ears..is it right..am I responsible for my condition..??
"yes.. U r.. "he says me..yeah he have the power to get my thoughts..we went outside the room.. My eyes falls on a photo hanged on the wall.. It was clicked on ridhu's first b'day..unknowingly a smile appeared on my face cherishing those happy moments which they gave me..
"did u really loved her..??"I heard him asking me... My heart ached...i loved her..no I love her more than anything but I didn't show up it...is it was a mistake from my side..?
"r u saying I'm at fault.. "I asked him softly..
"u r at fault too..u know one thing rishab there was no problem b/w u 2..u creates problems in ur life...she is not only ur wife but a daughter too.. Do u know how much her father's demise hurts her that day..?u add more to it..if u was there then she will be happy..atlest u could fulfill her father's last wish.."he said.. Don't know y but now his words r affecting me..we went from my home to the church where me & madhu gets married..u both gave a promise to each other before him..i can clearly say u failed to keep ur promise..i looked around.. Tears rolled down my eyes..i thought after death everything will be fine.. But now I don't want to leave this world...
"I know what u r thinking...but u will be no more by tomorrow morning .."he says breaking me..
"will I die tomorrow...??I asked with faltering voice..he nodded affirmatively..v went outside & spend rest of the day by visiting the places & ppl which are close to me.. The night fades away welcoming the dawn...a new Dawn brings happiness to everyone's life but this dawn is gonna take my life away from here.. It's gonna take me away from my beloved ones...v went back to hospital..
"I want to live.. "accepting my faults I said him..."u r too late rishab.. "his reply shattered my last hope..i saw my madhu on the same place where she was sitting yesterday.. My daughter don't know what's happening around she is happily playing with aryan..madhu's family was also there..i saw dr. Calling abhay.. I went near them..

"Dr. What's it..??any problem.."I heard abhay asking dr. With concern filled voice..
"abhay u know about his state na .. He is now living with life support system..his body is not responding to medicines...& no improvement in his condition from the past 24 hours..."Dr said to him..
"U mean.."abhay asks him..
"there is no use of continuing this.. He won't
Survive..v want his wife's permission for taking him off from ventilator..."I got shocked hearing it..that means my time is nearing... Abhay went to talk with Madhu.. We went past him..he said her the matter..i waited for her reaction but without a second thought she agreed for it..I couldn't believe it.. Did she really hates me..i looks Peter.. He was looking madhu..abhay went back.."it's time for u to say bye to this world.. "he said me.. I looks at madhu for one last time..i saw her standing from her seat..
"dips.. Take care of her.. I will come now... "she said & gave ridhu to her after giving her a forehead kiss..she went from there & I followed her.. She climbed up the steps finally reaching the roof top..i looks her startled as she moved towards the parapet..she was staring at the ground from there..i looked peter & then again looks back her.. She fell on her knees & cried her heart out.. I wanted to embrace her in my arms but I couldn't do anything than helplessly watching her pain..
"y u done this to me..y..?? Y u snatched my rk away from me..all was my mistake then y u punished him...if u wanted to take a life then y didn't u take my life...don't think I will live in this world without him.. "she was screaming at god...i saw the love for me in her eyes...is she going to kill herself.. No...i looked at Peter pleading with my eyes.. While madhu walks to the end..i went near him & held his hands.. "Death is fated for me na pls save her.."
"I'm no one to save her... She won't die rishab.. It's not her time to die.."he said.. Then will she lead a life miserable than death till her end.. No.. I can't see my madhu in pain.. I want a life.. I want to live with my family...i Want to start a new life.. But I'm late but not too late.. I fell on my knees & held his legs..
"Peter can u gave me a more chance..??"I asks him..
"Go.. "I didn't get what he said I looks him again..
"Death is giving u a chance... Go.."he said making me surprised..

Pov ends

When Madhu is about to climb up the parapet her phone starts ringing.. The screen flashes deepali's no.. She thought to ignore but after a second thought she picked up the call to receive a great news..


After 4 years

Ring Ring

Madhu picks up the call..
"hello.. Who is this..?? "she asks through the phone..
"hello..I'm mukund.. "the reply came from other end..
"mukund... Why u called to land line.. ??"madhu asked him ..
"Rk's phone is switched off..v have shooting today.."he said..
"oh.. Wait I will call him.. "she kept the call on hold & went to call rk..rk was sleeping on the bed like a kid.. She looked at the clock hung up on the wall.. It's showing 10.00 AM.
"rk.. U didn't wake up yet.. "she went near him & shook him..
"biwi.. Y r u disturbing my sleep in this early morning.. "he stirred..
"Earlyyy morninggg..??"her jaws cling opened..
"u wake up by urself or u want me to wake u up by kicking on ur ass.. "she said glaring at him..
"what happened now..??"he asks sitting up on the bed..
"mukund is calling u... "she said..
"don't that makki have any work than calling me everytime.."he get off the bed & went to hall..
"hello..."rk says carelessly..
"rk.. U r late.. When will u come.. Here everything is in a messy way come fast.. "mukund said..
"no mukund.. I have a bad stomach ache since last night.. So I'm on leave today.. U can manage it na.. "
"what..?? But.. "before mukund could say anything further hang up the call..when he turns he saw Madhu standing before him..
"Rk... U r ok na.. Y didn't u say u have stomach ache.. Come v will go hospital.. "she said fidgeting ..
"hey biwi relax.. It was just a lie.. "he said..
"means..?? "she asks confused...he smirked at her & held her by her waist..
"let that single makki deal with it.."he said & kissed on her forehead.. "me & my family will go for a trip today.. "..rk leaned on to kiss her lips but stopped hearing a giggle..
"Ridhu.. "they says in union & Madhu pulled her away from him suddenly..
"papa.. "she opened her mouth to say something but he cuts her off..
"u r coming to say about ur Sunday trip na..go & get ready fast.. "he said & smiled..
They went to the juhu beach.. Ridhu & madhu were playing in waves while rk was just sitting down the sand ground & watching them... He lifts up his head & glanced at the sky.. "thanks Peter.. I don't know it was my hallucination or reality but u made me realize my mistake & gave back my beautiful life.. "
"papa.. "his thoughts broke hearing Ridhu's voice.. He looks her..
"ma.. "she pointed at a direction & he saw madhu is vomiting..
"madhu.. "he stood up from there & went near her along with ridhu..
"what happened...??"he asks rubbing her back..
"I said u don't take much leaves.."she said..
"means.. ??"he asks confused..she hugs him.. "u r going to become a father again..."she whispered in his ear..he broke the hug & looks her..
"really.. "he asks amused..she shyly nodded..
"what happened..? "ridhu asks them innocently..
"a little baby is coming to accompany u.. "he said & lift her in his arms & gently squeezed madhu to him..

I couldn't add the new entry in this edit coz she/he is inside her womb..
If you like this story pls hit like & drops your precious reviews..
Thank you friends for your great love & support... Thanks for supporting me through out this story..if possible I will try to write an epilogue..Thanks a lot again..
-Aiswarya -

Edited by aishu007 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update Aishu..
Emotional one..
At first, Rk didn't accept his mistake,what has said by Peter..
After that ,he realised slowly..
He thought,he was unnecessary in this world..
He wanted to live this life again with his family..
Death gave one chance to him..
He didn't expect..
After that,he changed a lot.
Spending time with his family..
Nice end..
Thanks for pm..

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