RishBala SS : Crazy About You (Completed - 12/07 - P:41)

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: Tinku2015

Hai forgot to ask did madhu get to know how dips got hurt...n guessing that dips loves someone else n being forced for marriage she asked rks help...now the girl who came at the end might be dips being some fight with her lover...is mybguess right😆

You see when he called his PA to get Dips treated by Doctor, her mind approves that he is not the one who hurt her and what her sister was saying is truth.

May be the way it was written wasn't clear, but that a bit of her thoughts.

You guess might be right but I don't want to say anything regarding this for now else i will reveal the rest of the story. Evil Me!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--
awesome update..

dear ... love it..
loving rk more & more after each updates ;)

so He & dips shares a friendly relation.. wow..

he is all for madhu ...

now excited for next..
update soon..
tnx fr pm..

Thanks a lot dear!

Glad RK is getting more and more people by his side.

Hope the excitement stays even after reading the next part.

Glad you loved it dear!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu
Awesome update
Rk n madhu both r getting closer physically and emotionally
N who is girl that came

Thank you!

Physical and Emotional factors are the plus point of their relationship.

Ha that girl! She is screwing everyone mine! LOL

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: shubhraa...
awesome update..

Thank you 😊

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Maithili

@maithu_

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#235

Hello everyone!

How are you all?
We are approaching the end of the story in just 3 parts and I'm so happy with all the responses I get.
Thanks a lot!
Love you all!

Link for previous part: Part 12

Happy reading!

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Part 13

They split from each other with the reasoning sound of closing door.

Rishab didn't saw who was the person on the door who can open his cabin without permission.
Madhu embarrassed gets up from his lap and goes back to do her work as Rishab back to his.

*** OMG! Could it be someone?
Please! Tell me there was no one! Please! ***

In case it was someone, Rishab would have been informed.
So he though may be it's wind from his window that made the door creek open a bit and closed with a thund!

"No one was here!" he said to her seeing her laser eyes piercing the door.
"Oh!" getting back to her task.

- Sometimes I feel like she is still a teenage girl! And I love that. -

*** Thank goodness! No one was here! ***

Both of them were discussing about a quotation when Rishab got a call.
His expression changed to helplessness and regret.
More than anything, panic was visible hearing the caller.
All he managed to say is:
"I'm coming!"

*** Where is he going to go leaving this important tender? Hope it's nothing serious to someone. ***

Leaving the task in his hand, without giving a head to Madhu's question, he rushed out of his cabin.
Madhu got immediately worried seeing his behaviour. She got the main lift and asked the office driver to follow Rishab's car.

She saw him passing through stop light and asked the driver to just follow.
She tried to call his phone several times but no answer.

- Why is life this cruel? -

After 18 minutes of chasing, his car stopped and hers too.
They are now in front of the City Hospital.

She sees him enter and follows him until she collides with a lady.
Both exchanged their sorry as nothing wrong happened to anyone and the lady left.
Now, she couldn't find him. Not even a single view of him is visible to her eyes.

*** If he is here, it must be something emergency. So may be by this way. ***

She targeted on the way which was leading to ICU and there she saw him, broken and powerless.
She neared him to see him holding a paper in his hand, tears flowing down his eyes, shattered, sliding to ground.
Madhu runs towards him in the long corridor, making her feel like running miles and miles to reach the goal.

"Make yourself strong Mr. Kundra. We couldn't save the mother and the child." the doctor who emerged from the chamber said before leaving him to take the time to sink the information. And that was the moment Madhu was by their side.

*** What is happening here?
Who is she talking about?
Child? ***

Curiosity took the best of her, making her move away from Rishab who by now was leaning on the wall with closed eyes, she went near the door of the room near them and looks through the glass frame to see the person she never dreamt of seeing in this state.

She turns to her left and

SLAP

She slapped him. His hand went to his left cheek and eyes wide.
Never in his life, someone has hurt him, hurt him physically and here she has slapped him. HIM.

"How dare you?
How dare you can do this to my sister?
You said she was just staying at your house and the baby?" she palmed her forehead.
"What did the baby do?
You are doing drama am I right?
You did this to her?
You did this to her?" pointing finger at him with fire in her eyes.

"You Aminal!
I thought you were just pervert but NO!" holding his collar as tears reached the ground like a falls.

She is shattered.
Her world is shattered.
She can't handle this.
She can't.

- I can't see her like this. -

She moves away from him and falls on her knees with her face in her hands.

"Don't! Don't come near me!" she yelled swatting his hand as he wanted to comfort her.

She stands up and makes her way to the door and looks at her Sistah through the glass frame with tears rolling down her cheeks. And stands there like a statue until her parents made their appearance.

Hospital procedures were done and the cremation happened the next day itself.

During this whole 24 hours, Rishab tried to go to Madhu and explain himself but she wasn't in a state to listen to anyone and especially not him.

She is lost.
She is not here.
She lost her sister.
She lost her best friend.
She lost her guardian.

Madhu was laying on her mother lap and sobbing thinking about her sister.
The rest of the elders were in their own world thinking about their time with the daughter they got.

Rishab entered his house with sadness written all over his face.
His father got up and met him in the mid way saying:
"Life is not an easy one son. Cope up with the loss and move on."

- I lost an important factor in my life. I lost. -

Taking the paper which look like the one he had in the hospital, he passes it to his father.
His father takes it and moves away from him.
Madhu see Rishab coming towards everyone.
Anger rises inside her, making her get up from her mother's lap, standing on her foot, she yells at him.

"You are the reason I lost my sister.
You are the reason everything happened.
I hate you! I hate you!" she screams making the mansion tremble.

This time, she really started to hate him. Or is this also a part of her mind and not her heart?
Everyone stood up seeing her like this when she ran away from there crying.
She ran up to the stairs, getting her way to the room where she used to stay.

*** I can't stand here for one more second! I can't let him have whatever he want! ***

She threw open a luggage and pulled all her belongings in it, closed the bag and made her way to her sister's room. Packed all the things in bags and got them out of the room before going into his room to check if there can be anything of her sister's there.

She analysed the whole room and went finally to side table.
There, she found something that caught her eyes.
She got near that and took it in her hand.
She flipped it to find the initial 'MRK' with 'M' a little bigger than 'RK'.

On the other side, the paper is circulating between the elders and all look at Rishab with a guilty look.

Back to room, Madhu passes her thumbs over the letters.

*** It's mine. ***

It's the bracelet she lost years back in the party where she came face to face with him.
It's the bracelet she bought with her first part-time job in Australia.
No body except her mother knew about that.
Hell no body no that she lost it.
Even her Sistah didn't know that she had made a Golden-Fish bracelet in her craziness for those fishes.
Only her mother saw that bracelet just before they enter that party which turned her world upside-down.

*** How can it be here?
And that too he modified it.
He added his initials!
There was only C when I lost it. ***

Her anger build as she brushed her thumb over the letters.
Leaving the task she was doing, she rushed downstairs to find her father holding Rishab's hand and crying to him.

"You did what I couldn't do.
You helped when she was most in need.
I don't know how I'm going to pay for all your" said Malik.
"Stop it Papa!" screamed Madhu who entered that space interrupting her father.

Everybody turned to Madhu's side as she was nearing Rishab with red angry eyes.
Her father left Rishab's hand free and moved away from there.

- She is vulnerable. She needs support but -

"How can you do this?
You are an Animal in the form of human." saying so she started to hit him over his chest and he was seeing her breaking in front of him as he can see that she isn't in a state to accept even one word from him now.

The explosion of emotions made her glare at him and she brought her hand to slap him only to be stopped by her father.

"What is this Madhu? We are missing her too but why are you putting the blame on a person Deepali believed!"
"He is not that much worth Papa!"
"Mind your words Madhu. Give him the respect he des"
"Respect my foot!" she cut her father's words.

"Madhu" her mother yelled while Radha palmed her mouth crying hysterically and she fainted.

Rishab was the first one to notice his mother lose the balance and he ran towards her and Madhu who started to open her mouth closed it as soon as she saw the scene unfold in front of her.

Rishab brought his mother to the couch and splashed water.
She slowly started to open her eyes which landed on Madhu who was sad for her state.
"I was angry on him. I didn't want to hurt you." Madhu said sobbing.
"Come here dear." Radha called her as she got up to a sitting position.
Rishab moved away from his mother.

*** I didn't want to hurt her but he... ***

Madhu joined her, taking a place in the couch.
Radha laid out her hand towards Padmini who was holding the paper in her hand.
She handover it to her and she in return passed it to Madhu.

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Thanks for reading buddies!
How was it?
Sorry for making this part a bit emotional.
Waiting for tomatoes and eggs!
I know you all will have a lot of questions.
And all the answers are will be out in Part 14.

Next part on 08/07
As I will be posting EMI on 5th, this will be in one week!
Sorry for making you all wait! If I finish that part before, I will post it immediately.

See you guys!
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Next part: Part 14

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago

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bhumi1492

@bhumi1492

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#236

Why you leave at last moment.

Please update next part soon

Can't wait to know secrets.

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#237

Emotional update Maithu

Deepali is no more, what happened to her, she was pregnant, who is the father, I'm sure it's not RK, maybe he was helping her by telling that they are married which is not true.

What has Dips written in the letter.

Did anyone see Rishbala getting close or it was coz of wind.

Madhu is feeling guilty and blaming Rishab for everything that happened.

Thanks for the PM dear.

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merliah johanna

@madhumeandyou

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#238

Very emotional update. Well written. So dips n her baby passed away. Who is the baby's father? As expected rk dsnt hav a relationship more than friendship wuth her. Waiting to knw wht actually hppnd in her life. And how will rk make madhu understand. Whts in the letter? Thnks a lot for the pm. Do update soon