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Posted: 8 years ago
#81
First of all. .thank you Lian and simran for this os competition ❤️❤️..
and making our 5th anniversary. ..beautiful😊😊

All stories are beautiful, it's hard to choose only 3

1 - You are the only one -deepti (RM14)
2 - you are the only one -rachana di(magicalmirage)
3 - crazy about you -aishu(aishu007 )

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Posted: 8 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: MyDriYa

Hai & Hello to all the writters of Rishbala OS 😊
Yup.. I am here to give My reviews and votes
(writters also can vote for others story na) But before give votes let me give reviews for all the stories posted by the Craziest MBians 😳

<font size="4">Title-You are the Only one
Author- Rachana aka magicalmirage
</font>

Hi dear.. 😊
Well.. Its a unique concept to think! Because anyone will think of showing Rishbala's romance only first than anything 😉 but yours was totally opposite I mean out of Box thinking 😆
Artificial Insemination
While reading your story I just got some glimpse of a movie named Kuttram23(a tamil movie)
In that movie, a girl was rich enough an she was a mad after one of the cricketer from India and she wanted a baby with his features! & she was already married too but she illegally.. 😳
Once the cricketer was injured and admitted into hospital the girl also got to know about it and highly paid to the doctors and succeed to get his semen without his knowledge! So I was thinking why Madhu did not follow this method to get Rk's semen 😆
But no one will agree for this na esp Rk kind of person! Madhu's direct approach to RK for his semen was quiet unbelievable! Loved her honesty.. But really different thinking and thanks for the OS 😊
ALL THE BEST

<font size="4">Title-You are the Only one
Author- Mydriya
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No comment { Love <font color="#cc0099">MY</font>😉mad }


<font size="4">Title-Crazy about you
Theme-When love happens
Author- aishu aka Aishwarya
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Hi baby 😉
A normal story with Rishbala! A rich guy and middle class girl's love story 😊
I must say about your "sense of humour"
Rk woke up early morning and running inside the village in the name of jagging 😆
Loved these kind of scenes and writtings from your story..
Thanks for the lovely story and ALL THE BEST

<font size="4">Title-You are the Only one
Theme-Sirf Tum
Author- Sapna
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RJ RK ahaaan 😎
Childhood love story of Rishbala! Enjoyed every scenes of Childhood Rishbala days.. esp the hints of RK to realise her love is Madhu and RK's attempts to express his love 🤣
& RK-Sultan's fight..
Ending was also nice 😊
Thanks for the OS and ALL THE BEST




Thank you. .
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: varshajoshi17

Superb and awesome os by all writers

It was really difficult to score them
I m apologising in advance to all other writers for whom i havnt voted
Loved all os

<font size="5">My votes for rishbala os are :-</font>
<font size="5">1.10 points for you are the only one by RM14 aka Deepti</font>
<font size="5">2. 6 points for sirftum by sapnaf52</font>
<font size="5">3. 3 points for you are the only one by magicalmirage</font>
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<font size="1">Lots of love to all writers out there, thank you for all this beautiful oneshots</font>


Thank you varsha 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: ananya2010

A big thank you to Rachana, MyDriya, Aishu, Sapna, Deepti, Dhanvi and Liah for giving us the pleasure of reading such beautiful, awesome stories on Rishbala. In love with all the stories coz each story is beautiful and unique. But since we have to chose 3 stories, my vote goes as follows :

1) You are the Only One by RM14 (Deepti)
2) Sirf Tum by SapnaF52
3) Like a Fairytale (Liah)

Sorry to the other writers but must tell you, you all are brilliant, fantastic, keep writing more.


Thank you ananya 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: Sujitharajan

<font size="4">Title-You are the Only one
Theme-Sirf Tum
Author- Sapna
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Superb dear.Rk is an RJ.Rk and madhu's love story was so nice dear.


Thank you. .
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: sanghita0000

Tosapna


<font color="#333333" face="Roboto, sans-serif">Awww...I just fell in love with these two cuties...U brought the innocence of childhood love...love at 1st sight...the day dreamings seeing ur love...jealousy seeing ur love talking to someone else...silly attempts to confess ur feelings , and then failing...just loved it...U should write more dear...</font>


Thank you so much sangita0000. ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: MyDriYa

Title-You are the Only one
Author- RM14 aka Deepti

Hats off to you girl 😊
I felt like watching a movie.. I mean aashiqui2 type of story!
The love, care, pain, struggle.. everything hinted me this could be a story for aashiqui3 😉 I was a bit scared of thinking hope for no sad end.. I totally forgot Rishbala and everything because your story is master piece here 😎
Hey.. You are a great writter!

Title-The Night
Theme-You are the only one

&
Title-The sparkling mademoiselle
Theme-When love happens
Author- Dhanvi aka Freethinker

Two stories??
Both stories are nice!
But loved first one than second one..
It was like novel type 😊 The way RK try to bring out Madhu from her fearful life was unexpected..
Thanks for the lovely stories and ALL THE BEST

Title-Like a fairytale
Author- madhumeandyou

Quiet Interesting love story and was already decided by fate type of story 😛
You made me watch once again Colors Golden Petal Awards 2012 sizzling performance of Rishbala 😉 This Raabta song is still running into My mind 😆
& Ending was also simply superb 😊
Thanks for the OS and ALL THE BEST

Thanks a lot dear..so happy you loved it and you felt like watching a movie and it could be the story for Aashiqui3..OMG!

thanks for the appreciation and reading this story.😳

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Posted: 8 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: kaustavi

Sirf tum ( sapnaf52 )

Amazing os...it is wonderful...
I loved that Rk is RJ...it is so unique...and I loved it..
Pehla pehla pyar hai...I love this song so much...

Rk's love's start...hehe...child Rk convinced himself that love occurs like that watching TV and he decided 'She is the one' by Madhu's hair flying, bell sound and the background sound Pehla pehla pyar hai...lol

Loved the growing friendship between Rishbala...It was funny to read every time he decided to propose, his plan failed...his last attempt made him united with his love...keeping letter in coat pocket ...Rk hadn't realised Madhu already got to know about his love...

And Madhu's unique way of declaring love...didn't she know RJ is Rk himself?...Rk searched for her everywhere and finally met...
And I loved the song 'Main phir bhi tumko chahunga'...it suited too well...
haha...he finally proposed in 5th attempt..

Loved this



Thank you sis. .
madhu didn't know RJ is Rk. .
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: MyDriYa

My Votes for Rishbala One Shot

First of all Thanks to all the writters to gave some moments to live on Rishbala Dreamland 😳 and special thanks to madhumeandyou & srksimran for conducing this OS contest 😊

Title-You are the Only one
Author- RM14 aka Deepti


10 POINTS


Title-The Night
Theme-You are the only one
Author- Dhanvi aka Freethinker


6 POINTS


Title-Like a fairytale
Author- madhumeandyou


3 POINTS


Note:
Sorry to other writters of Rishbala OS 😳 What to do? We have to choose only 3stories na! See.. I did not give votes to mine OS 😉
Great me.. 🤣

Thanks so much dear.😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: varshajoshi17

Superb and awesome os by all writers

It was really difficult to score them
I m apologising in advance to all other writers for whom i havnt voted
Loved all os

My votes for rishbala os are :-
1.10 points for you are the only one by RM14 aka Deepti
2. 6 points for sirftum by sapnaf52
3. 3 points for you are the only one by magicalmirage

Lots of love to all writers out there, thank you for all this beautiful oneshots

Thanks a lot Varsha dear.😳

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