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Hi friends I am magical mirage (Rachana).I am in this forum from last 6 months .it's my first attempt with an os.i was not sure about the os .but I tried my level best to make it.when I started writing the story I realized that os is the most difficult one to write.please ignore mistakes.read it and please vote for me if you like it.😊



You Are The Only One
(Magicalmirage)






"may I come in"bittuji knocked the door of vanity
"Bittuji... come in"rk
"Chief...that girl is waiting"bittuji
Rk looked at the mirror doing his hair.the make up man done the last touch up.
"Bittuji ..shot is ready?"rk
"A little delay...ten minutes chief"bittuji
"Ok..what were you saying?"rk
"That girl..she is waiting for you"bittuji
"Bittuji..what she wants?"rk
"She wants to talk with you chief"Bittuji
"Bittuji..you clearly Know that I am not interested in chatting with girls.if she wants my autograph let her come and take it in a public place not in my vanity"RL
"But chief..she is stubborn.she says that she doesn't need an autograph but she need a personal talk"bittuji
"Tell her...I am not interested"rk
"But...chief"rk
"Bittuji.."rk called him warningly
Bittuji sighed and left the vanity.rk looked at his image in the mirror and flashed a smile
"You look stunning sir"make up man
"Rishab kundra is always stunning ..have any doub"rk
"No sir..you are perfect"make up man
Rk nodded look at the mirror admiring himself.
"Sir shot is ready"spot
"Ok..let's go"rk climbed out of vanity. A girl ran to him.
"Please sir...please give me five minutes"girl
"Who are you?"rk
"Chief..hey girl ..."bittuji came running to them
"Bittuji who the hell is this girl and who allowed her near my vanity?"rk
"I.. I .am sorry chief.."bittuji glared at the girl
Rk continued to the set.
"Sir please ..I have been requesting bittuji from last two weeks . please sir..only five minutes"Girl
"Will u allow me to take this shot?"rk
"Sir... please five minutes after Your shot"girl
"Okay...but not in my vanity"rk
"Well...sir it's a personal matter.."girl
"Look.. Ms.. whatever.we don't have anything in personal.so we don't need a closed space.. Understood?"rk
"Sir..at least a place where only we two hears our conversation?"girl
"Oh..shit...can't you in Ms. I have my own diginity ..I don't want to spoil it by talking with you and making news"rk
"Sir"girl
"Security"rk gestured to clear her out.
*****
"Hah...it's a long day..I am tired .I need some sleep"rk said to himself
He heard some sounds outside the mansion .
"Bittuji..what's it?"rk
"Chief...that girl she tried to sneak inside the house"bittuji
"What?that crazy girl?"rk
"Yes..chief may I call the police?"bittuji
"No...I will talk with her'Rk
"Thank you chief"bittuji
"Why you are thanking me?"rk
"The girl is really a mess...from last two weeks she followed me like my shadow..everywhere ..even my home..my kitchen.can you believe it chief..she is crazy"bittuji
"Yeah.. seems like that.but what she wants?"rk
"I don't know chief..she doesn't want to talk about it to anyone else "bittuji
"Ok...she won't attempt to murder me"rk laughed
"Chief"bittuji looked scared"what if she is some terrorist and want to make you a captive"
"Don't worry bittuji"rk laughed seeing his expression.
They went to the visiting room and saw the girl was held by two securities and she is trying to pull out from Thier grip.
"Leave her and you go"rk gestured with his hand standing on the stair
"Bring some coffee..patil"rk
Patil nodded and left to kitchen
"Please make your self comfortable"rk pointed the couch
"The girl seated and looked at him with utter admiration.
Rk seated opposite to her .
"Then.. Ms..."rk
"Madhubala Malik"Madhu
"Ok...Ms madhubala malik..all these stunt performances to meet me in personal?"rk
"Yes sir"Madhu
"Okay..so what do you want?"rk
"I..I..,"Madhu uncomfortably looked around.
"Don't worry no one will disclose whatever you tell me..they all are my staffs"rk
"Well...I born and brought up in US..my father had business there and I am his only daughter..my mother passed away when I was 5 years and my father remarried.but my step mother eloped with his boyfriend.you know..the relations are just some sort of timepass..no strings attached..it's the life I used to live.my father had a heart attack and he passed away two years back.so I went back to India and settled here. I am running a successful business now in Mumbai"madhu stopping when she saw Patil coming with coffees.hr served them and left
"Take Your coffee madhubala"rk
"Thanks"she sipped some coffee
"Okay..I didn't use to watch Indian movies ..but one of my friend pestured me to watch your film ek ishq ek junoon.. literally I fell for you at the first sight itself"Madhu
"Rk Smiled amusingly"that's obvious..most of the girls tell me that"rk
"Yeah..this attitude..I am attracted to this"Madhu sipping her coffee
"So you fell for me and now you want me as your boyfriend?"rk
"No..never"Madhu
Rk raised his eyebrows"then?"rk
"Listen to the story...you are an actor so you should hear the script fully ...not a part"Madhu
"Oh so you have a long script? you asked me for 5 minutes"rk
"You are allowing me to talk ..then y I should cut short it"Madhu
"Yeah..you got a point"rk amusingly
"Continue"rk
"As I said you when I saw your film I got attracted to your features.. your Greek god face ..your attractive eyes.. your Perfect body.. Everything it's perfect and I realized your are the oneI am searching for "madhu
"Thanks for the compliments...you want to marry me?"rk asked sheepishly at the craziest girl he ever met.
"Marriage..it's not in my dictionary"Madhu
"Oh...then.dont say you want to sleep with me"rk Said
"Err..man don't talk like this to me.i am still a virgin"Madhu
"Really..I thought you were having some fun at US"rk
"See rk..I am obviously a free minded girl that doesn't means I am falling up on any random man.i am only attracted to your beautiful features ..not you"Madhu
"Ok..now continue"rk
"I selected You for my purposes.."Madhu
"What's it?"rk
"Well..you know I am all alone.i have no one to claim mine ..no one to love as my own.. of course I have lot of friends..but it's not like some one our own.."Madhu. A tear glistened at the corner of her eyes.
"So..you want to stay with me?"rk
"Don't Make assumptions please...let me finish"Madhu
"Yeah"rk
"So I decided to adopt a baby...but..then a thought crossed my mind.why couldn't I have my own baby ..I am 22 and Perfect age to get pregnant."Madhu
"So.."rks voice trembled
"I was in search for a man with Perfect features..I want my baby to be perfect.."Madhu
"No.."rk
"Please.. let me say it?"Madhu
"What is it?"rk
"I want your semen"Madhu
"What?"rk jumped up from the seat and looked at her awestruck.
"R u crazy...get out from here"rk
"Look rk..I need only artificial insemination..I won't tell my baby or anyone that it's you.. please give me"Madhu
"You are asking me it like you want some chocolates"rk
"Please rk try to understand my situation..I am all alone..I Know you are rich..yet I am ready to give you my whole wealth for it .. please"Madhu
"Security..clear her out"rk
Security came and grabbed her hands,dragged her to the door
"Please rk..think once please"Madhu
Bittuji came to the living room "what she wants chief?"
"Ahm... nothing"rk
"Then y are you furious chief?"bittuji
"Bittuji..I think you can also help her with it"rk smiling
"I can help her..I will chief..she is just a head ache..what she wants?"bittuji
"Semen"rk
"What?"bittuji
"You heard it right bittuji"rk Smiled
"No"bittuji hide his crotch with hands.
Rk laughed..
"Chief...I am scared she is really a crazy girl..she will do anything to get it"bittuji
"R u mad bittuji?"rk went back to his room
"Chief you don't know her..she is really stubborn"bittuji mumbled

Few days later

Rk was in a press meeting
"Sir...there is a rumour that you are dating your new heroine..is that true?"reporter
"No..it's just a gossip.. nothing true in it"rk smiling
"But sir..some one said that they saw you together in a restaurant..was it a date"reporter
Rk looked around the hall and saw Madhu standing there looking at him.she saw him looking at her and she waved her hand.rk stared at her and immediately looking back
"W..what..y..you were Asking"rk stuttered
"Sir..about heroine gossip"reporter
"Don't you have any other job...y you people just interfere into others life...can't you leave me Alone?"rk looked at Madhu
She mouthed at him"no"
Rk fumed with anger.
"Press meeting is over"rk
"Sir..please we have some more questions"reporter
He stood up from the seat and walked to his car.the reporters followed him with Thier questions.
"Bittuji.."rk called
Bittuji and securities help him to get to the car.
"Bittuji get inside."rk
Bittuji slide inside and rk drove the car to mansion
"It was pretty cool"a sound from back seat.
"You..madhubala"he braked and the car went to halt with a screech
"Yes...me..what's is your decision rk?"Madhu
"What ?I said you no..no means no"rk
"No doesn't Means never"Madhu
"Get out of my car you damnit"rk
"No unless you say yes"Madhu
"Look.. madhubala ..are you crazy..if u want a child go to some semen banks and get the crap..I am not gonna help you.. understood?"rk
"But rk..I want your features for my child..not any other random man's"Madhu
"Madhubala..get out of my car ..or I will throw out you"rk
"Rk..what is your problem on helping me?me and my baby won't ever claim you ..then what's the problem and no one will ever known it's u.even not my baby"Madhu
"Madhubala..i knew it na..my baby is living like a ba****d."rk
"I will go back to US after my delivery ..it's not a matter there.. single mother is not an issue"Madhu
"But it's an issue for me madhubala"rk
"Please rk..I am all alone .. please"Madhu
"Shut up and get out of my car"to
Madhu climbed out and looked at rks car with watery eyes.rk see her retreating figure in the mirror and sighed
"She is getting into our nerves chief"bittuji
"Yes..but she is different from other girls .. bold and beautiful.. stubborn ...I like Her"rk
"Bittuji looked at him in disbelief.

*****
Two months later
Rk mansion
"Madhubala I told you no.you are bothering me from last two months"rk
"Please rk..I have no one to claim mine..please"she folded her hands before him and tears rolled down her eyes.
"Ok...I will help you..but on one condition"rk sighed
Madhu wiped her tears.."thank you rk..thank you very much..but What's the deal?money?"Madhu
"No.."rk
"Then?"Madhu
"I will visit you till your delivery and I will visit my child till you go back to US"rk
"Hm.. your reputation..if anyone come to know about it?"Madhu
"I will take care of it...so deal?"rk forward his hand
"Yes"Madhu hold his hand
******
"Chief r u mad..do you know what are you doing?"bittuji
"I don't know bittuji why I agreed with her..her tears...it's making me weak"rk
"Chief but you have to rethink"bittuji
"No bittuji...I promised her"rk

One month later

"What Madhu..is it?oh..I am really happy...take care ..I will be there by evening"rk cut the call and Smiled
"Chief..what's it?'bittuji
"She is pregnant"rk
"Oh.. congrats chief"bittuji
Rk raised his eyebrows .
"After all it's your baby"bittuji
Rk smiled

Evening
Madhus house

Rk pressed the door bell and Madhu Opened the door.rj went inside
Madhu was wearing a red saree which added elegance to her pale skin.
"Ypu look beautiful"rk
"Thank you..coffee?"Madhu
Rk nodded and settled himself on the couch.
Madhu went to kitchen and came out with coffee
"Thanks"rk
Rk sipped the coffee ..Madhu looked at some magazines.
"Well..Madhu congrats"rk cutting the awkward silence.
"Thank you.. congrats to you too"Madhu
"Oh.. really?"rk laughed
"Did you consult doctor?"rk
"Yeah..Dr rathode..you Know him na"Madhu
"Hmm..the docto done the ivf?'Rk
"Yes.."Madhu
"Ok..do you want any help from me?"rk
"No..I have my friend ria here to take care"Madhu
"Ok..I will come tomorrow"rk
"Ok.."madhu

*****

One month later

"Madhu why don't your tummy not yet visible"rk
"It will take few more months'Madhu
"Oh..how many months?'rk
"5_6 months"Madhu
"That much time"rk sighed
"Y Mr superstar..I think you are impatient to see Your baby?"Madhu Smiled
"Yes..I want to take her in my hand"rk
"Her?"Madhu
"Y you don't want a girl?"rk
"No I want a boy..I want a boy resembling you..your cute dimples "Madhu
"Is my dimples cute?"rk
"Yes.. Sometimes I wish to kiss on them"Madhu
"Kiss me"rk
"Are you sure?"Madhu
"Yes"rk
Madhu moved close to him .she entwined her fingers around his neck.she stood on her.toes and kissed on his cheeks.rk closed his eyes..thier eyes glued with eachother.rk leaned to her lips and gently pecked on it.
"Excuse me,"ria
They parted suddenly
"May I destroyed your moments?"ria
"No..it..it's okay"Madhu stuttered
"Madhu ..c u tomorrow"rk left ignoring ria
"Madhu what was that?"ria
"I..I..just'madhu
"Madhu you love him?"ria
"No..I don't Know"Madhu
"Get it clear girl.. don't go back with a heart break"ria
Madhu looked at her confused.

After one month

"Madhu..may I come with you to hospital?"rk
"But y rk,?"Madhu
"I want to see our baby"rk
"Ok..but if someonr see you with me?"Madhu
"No one will.."rk

Hospital

"So rk you want to hear babies heart beat?"Dr
"Yes doctor"rk
He put the machine on Madhus tummy.rk and Madhu heard the heart sound.tears welled up thier eyes..
They see their baby while scanning..
"Madhu our baby.."rk
Madhu hold his hand and gently squeezed it.

Two months later

"You have an outdoor shoot rk?"Madhu
"Yes Madhu..one week"rk
"Oh..one week..that's a long period"Madhu
"Yes ..I am also upset.."rk
"Rk will you.call me from there?"Madhu
"Yes Madhu ..I will"rk

Two days later.

"Rk five more days for you to return"Madhu sighed
"Yes Madhu..it's Killing me..how is our baby.."rk
"He is okay..ouch.."Madhu
"What's happened Madhu?"rk
"He is kicking..I think he realized your voice"Madhu
"Afterall I am his father"rk
Madhu laughed

After a week

"Madhu calm down..y are you so nervous?"ria
"Rk is coming back today"Madhu
"Oh you missed him last week"ria
"Yes I really miss him"Madhu
"Guy's I think you are in love"ria
"No ria.. don't make it difficult for me"Madhu
Madhu heard the door bell and ran to the door .
"Hey Madhu..take care"ria
She slam open the door and hugged rk.he hugged her back..
He cupped her face"Madhu I missed you both"rk kissed on her forehead.
"We miss you too"Madhu.
He knelt on his feet and kissed on her baby bbump sending goosebumps on her body.
"Rk he is moving"Madhu
Rk put his hands on her tummy and closed his eyes.
"I can feel him Madhu"rk eyes get wet
Madhu Smiled
"May I stay here tonight?"rk
"Yes...sure"Madhu

Night

"Rk will you sleep near me?"Madhu
"Yes"rk lay down near her.madhu crawled towards him and held her head on his chest.he gently wrapped his hand around her.
"Madhu..you know I am so happy for my decision..I feel I have some one for my own..after my parents passed away.i was really alone.the only one close to me was bittuji.i had so many fans and followers but I never enjoyed anyones company..but it's you ..you are the only one who came to close to my.heart"rk
"Mine too rk"Madhu

9 months passed in a glimpse.rk visited Madhu each day
"Rk...ouch..rk.."Madhu cried
"Madhu please hold on we will reach hospital in few minutes"rk

Hospital

"Bittuji I am really scared...Madhu and.my baby"rk
"Chief.. Everything will be fine"bittuji
Few hours later.
"Sir..Dr . rathode wants you to meet him"nurse
Rk went to doctors room.he saw a small baby wrapped in white clothes .
Rathode handed him the baby
"My baby?"rk
"Yes"doctor
"Oh he is saw cute..."bittuji
Rk gently touched the baboy little fingers.and kissed on its forehead.the baby Smiled in sleep .
"Chief..he have the dimples"bittuji
"Yes ."rk Smiled
"Doc ..Madhu?"rk
"She is Okay.."doctor
"Thank you doctor"rk

Two weeks later

"Chief..the produced called me...he want to start the shooting today"bittuji
"No.. bittuji I am not going for any shooting ..I want to spend time with my baby"rk
"Chief..but"bittuji
"No bittuji..just do what I said"rk
"Mr superstar go and do your work..don't pamper him so much.what he will do when we go back to US?"Madhu
Sadness krept on his face.he stood up from the seat and placed back baby in the crib.
"Let's go bittuji"rk left without looked at Madhu
"Madhu that was so cruel"ria
"Ria...but he should realize it"Madhu

Rk mansion
"Chief please stop...it's the third bottle"Bittuji
"Y Should I stop ..for whom I am living bittuji.. everyone leave me... everyone'Rk cried
"Chief.."bittuji
"Leave me Alone"rk

Two days later

"Rk ..why won't you come to meet our son "Madhu
"He is your son"rk
"Rk..."Madhu called him confused
"That's the contract"rk
"Rk..how could you be so mean?"Madhu
Rk cut the call


One month later

Madhu called rk
"Yes madhu..what do you want?'rk
"I am going back to US Tomorrow"Madhu
"Ok..good bye"rk
"Rk don't you want to see our son?"Madhu
"No.."rk
"Ok..as you wish.. our flight is at 6.."Madhu
Rk cut the call
Madhu sighed
"Your words hurt him Madhu.."ria
"I know . but it's for good.now he won't get hurt by think about us"Madhu
"Madhu..y can't you stay with him?"ria
"I love him ..but I don't know what he thinks about me..if he denys me I can't bear it ria..so it's better for me to get away from him "Madhu

Next day
Evening
Madhu looked at the road
"Madhu let's go..he will not come.you will miss the flight"ria
Madhu sighed .She locked the door and hopped in the car with baby
"Beta.. your papa don't want to see us"tears rolled down her eyes.

Air port

"Ok..Madhu bye..take care"ria hugged her.
Madhu nodded and took her baby onhher hand.she pushed the trolley with other hand
"Madhu..r u going back without saying goodbye to me?"rk
"Rk.."Madhu turned back with a big smile.
"Madhu..."he took baby from her hand and kissed on his forehead.
"But rk..you told me you don't want to see us?"Madhu
"Ria met me yesterday ."rk
"Then y didn't you call me yesterday.do you know how much I got worried"Madhu
"Everyone in industry call me a dramebaaz .so if there is no drama in my love story ..it will not be the Rk."rk
"Yeah .. attitude Han?"madhu.rk Smiled.
He handed baby to ria.he knelt down on his knees and forwarded a ring
"Madhubala Malik...you are the one who touched my heart..you are one whom I wanted to share my life with...will you be mine..will you marry me?"rk
"Hmm...let me think"Madhu smiling
"Madhu.."rk
"Yes..pagal dramebaaz"Madhu
"Aahaan"rk
.he stood up and put the ring in her finger.they hugged eachother.
Everyone clapped.
"You are the one rk... YOU ARE THE ONLY ONE"Madhu




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Thank you
Magical mirage

Edited by magicalmirage - 8 years ago
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Wooow new story with happy ending nice story
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Please dont comment till 21st may 2017
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All the best to all the writers.
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Originally posted by: madhumeandyou

Please dont comment till 21st may 2017



One small doubt..
Writters also can vote for others OS na???
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Originally posted by: ananya2010

All the best to all the writers.



Thank you ananya on behalf of all the writters of OS 😊
Edited by MyDriYa - 8 years ago
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Here is MyDriYa's OS with a sporty touch
Have FUN.. 😛

... "You are the only 1" ...


HE (wearing a denim jeans & t-shirt with a cap ) makes an entry in the Lavish grand hotel with his lovely wife &
cute small daughter... 😊
All smile to see them.. His wife asks the female receptionist for keys & says we have a room booked here on the name of M.. But before she could finish her talk, receptionist says with a smile I know mam!! & look towards her husband who is busy in playing with her daughter ignoring all the things.. 😳
Receptionist gives her key & the couple with their daughter march towards the booked Room.
The Receptionist looks at the time & feels relief as her shift is over now..
She happily leaves while another lady takes her place..
After a while.. Another couple make their entry.. 😊
Receptionist looks the man (in formal dress ) and smiles seeing him who is holding his wife's waist & drooling at her 😉
His wife (in Saree) gives a dragger look to her handsome husband & signs him to behave.. But he holds her more tightly.. She knows her husband very well that he doesn't listen anybody so she just asks receptionist about their room..
Receptionist checks the list & look for keys but gets nothing! she gets
confused then take master key & asks a staff to show them their room and she self start to search the missed key in the drawer & everywhere.. 😲
Trio head towards the room & that staff open the room & finds that its already has been occupied by another celebrity couple with their daughter while a superstar with his biwi is at the door.. That staff gets confused and about to say something.. But just then Madhu screams in happiness "maahiii" seeing MSD, who is happily holding his daughter in the arms ..
(RK looks at Madhu & thinks she never screamed like this for me 😲 )
RK tells we have booked this room..
MSD with his wife & daughter Ziva look at Rishbala & says I think there is some misunderstanding..
Madhu & Saakshi both are lost & happy to see MSD & RK.. 😆
That staff is still confused and calls someone to sort out the problem.. Manager comes and checks the details and tells Sorry to MSD and explains that this room *007* was already booked for RK. MSD tells its ok.. Its not a big mistake as we mostly used to book room no 007 here as its.. "Ur jersey no & lucky No" before MSD could finish RK finishes the line.. 😉
MSD smiles & says oh! U too finish 😉
Rk smirks & tells RK is best in everything..
But "you are the only one"
who taught me how to finish that too in style..
Manager nervously interrupts & says sir! Sorry for inconvenience but ur room is just opposite .. Room no 5
MSD nods & about to leave the room with saakshi & Ziva but Madhu stops them and tells Its ok We can take another room also. MSD asks but.. Are you sure and he looks towards RK.. Madhu holds RK's arm and tells we don't have any problem in this.. right RK? RK smirks & tells if My Biwi doesn't have any problem then.. Madhu says its just small thing that I could do for u Maahi..umm!! I can call u maahi n.. 😳
(RK looks her dumbstruck )
MSD tells yup ! BTW what is ur name!! Saakshi says she is Madhubala 😊
Madhu smiles & forwards her hand towards MSD's face..
(Rk looks Madhu & then MSD with open mouth.. While Saakshi is still looking at RK )
Madhu pulls ziva's cheeks & Rk takes a breath of relief..
MSD thanks RishBala and about to go inside the room but Madhu stops him and says but we need a favor.. MSD is confused.. Madhu tells photo.. MSD smiles and all Pose for a selfieee 😃
... ...
Rishbala takes another room
(opposite room of MSD) RK locks the door.. But Madhu keeps talking about MSD only.. RK gets irked & tells biwi u never screamed for me like you scream for the captain..
(MSD is always a captain for fans 🥳)
Madhu tells because he is MSD & giggles..RK feels jealous and tells hope you remembered that we came here to
celebrate our wedding anniversary not to attend any family function of MSD or not to watch any cricket match..
Madhu notices RK's jealousy and starts to praise MSD more.. RK fumes and holds her waist and makes her close to him & asks talk now..
Eyelock
Enna sona kyun Rabb ne banaya
Enna sona kyun Rabb ne banaya

Madhu is speechless and RK smiles.. Madhu breaks the silence & says why i need to scream for u? You are not MSD.. 😉 Rk again fumes but before he could say anything Madhu tells You are my pati "you r the only one" who will be with me forever...so close that I don't need to scream for u..


Hum hai deewane ..Tere deewane

Hum hai deewane.. Tere deewane

Madhu smiles & tells Happy marriage anniversary Pati... Rk too smiles & says same too u my Biwi. RK gets romantic and comes more close to her.. He sets her hair and touches her cheek softly..

Tujh se hai hasi.. Tujse udaasi
Kasmash hai rabba..
Roothi hu phir bhi raasi
Tu hi hai maula.. Tu hi hai kaazi
Tu hi hai maula..Tu hi hai kaazi
Kya karu mai bayaan
Tere ishq pe jaan kurbaan
Just then his mobile rings! Madhu tells RK your mobile is ringing.. But RK keeps looking at her only.. Madhu again tells RK your mobile is ringinggg.. RK says let it be biwi.. It must be bittu ji only. She tells then talk to him n.. RK tells what is he going to talk? Chief.. is everything ok there? If you both reached there safely na? & some more blah blah blah.. 🤣
Madhu smiles & chides him.. She tells atleast let me talk to him. She is about to move
but RK holds her again & pins her against the wall...
Hum hai deewane.. Tere deewane
Hum hai deewane.. Tere deewane
Madhu tells RK... & looks at him.. She slowly closes her eyes and RK
is about to kiss her but someone knocks the door 😡Madhu opens her eyes hestitangly.
RK fumes and slams the wall slightly and goes to open
the door and finds a staff with their luggage! RK takes their luggage
while MSD also opens his room door to receive his luggage.. Both MSD
and RK smiles to each other 😉 😎
Then RK gets inside the room and asks
Madhu to get ready soon
...
It's Night...
Rishbala return back to hotel after enjoying their outing/dinner.. The same receptionist (who exchanged the rooms) is waiting for them & she says Sorry to both Rishbala!
Madhu tells its ok.. No need to say sorry at all.. & Thanks to you because of you we got a chance to meet MSD here 😃 Receptionist smiles and tells actually because of this name only I got confused as ur room was booked on the name of MAD & another one is MSD 😆. RK smirks while Madhu gets
confused and thinks MAD? She looks RK with question full eye.. & asks is
this true? why did you book the room on the name of MAD? RK smiles
and tells Biwi let it be a Mystery n
He walks towards their room! But Madhu keeps repeating the same question..
RK tells to avoid media/fans I booked the room on this name! So that no one could come to know about us & we celebrate our wedding anniversary alone only with each other.. But Madhu is not
satisfied and follows him asking tell me na why did you booked the room in the name of MAD? Are we MAD? RK opens the door and both get inside and RK again locks the room!
RK tells of course not.. Madhu
asks then why did you booked on this name? If Saakshi booked the room
on the name of MSD means Mahendra Singh Dhoni but What is this MAD? I
mean not related to either your nor My name!! RK smirks and tells may
be not related to My name but related to your name only biwi 😉 Madhu
is puzzled and sits on the bed and start to think.. while RK takes his cloth and goes to washroom for change! He thinks now Madhubala became Mad-bala...aahaann

Madhu calls Bittu ji and asks the same question to him! He tells no idea bhabhi ji.. Chief only asked me to book on this
name! She tells okk bitttu ji and cuts the call after wishing Good night to him.. RK comes out of the washroom with towel and asks Madhu dont you want to freshen up? She looks at him.. & takes her clothes.. Rk says if u need any help in changing call me 😉
Madhu blushes but gain shot a glare look.. RK gives a flying kiss to her...
Madhu goes to change!
RK talks to self I love my jungli Billi.. & starts playing game on his mobile sitting on sofa.
Madhu comes out.. RK notices her but keeps playing game on his mobile!
She sits on bed and starts to think about something..

RK looks at her
and smiles internally thinking Mad is thinking about MAD 😆
Both Rishbala look each other but keeps mum! Finally Madhu speaks
Are you going to tell me the meaning of MAD or not? RK tells I thought
you are enough smart to find this 😉 Madhu fumes.. & tells if u don't ans then I m going from here & u enjoy here alone.. RK tells okk..okk It's first 3 letters of your name biwi.. M.. A.. D.. 😳
Madhubala means Madbala.. Madhu says eee RK! Mad means pagal & Pagalbala doesnot sounds good 🥱 RK smirks & tells Biwi correction it's MadBala only. Madhu realises that RK is teasing her.. & she
throws a pillow on him.. But RK catches it and starts to laugh
looking at her.. She fumes more and about to hit him..
RK gets up from the
sofa and starts to run around the room and Madhu starts to chase him.
RK tells while running it's not My mistake biwi.. Madhu tells shut up RK.. You are thinking of My name like this.. Am I Mad pagal.. 🥱 ? RK says what's doubt in that? Madhu tells RK.. youuu...
Rk tells yes biwi .. Its me.. 😉
She again picks a pillow and throws on him but RK bends down this time & start to laugh again looking at her.. She start to chase him again.. RK too keeps running/jumping on the bed and sofa 😛
Madhu too jumps on bed and catches RK finally but she stumbles and
falls on bed while RK too stumbles and falls on her..
Eyelock
Rishbala keeps looking at each other!
Kitani baar hum Milke bichade
Tu hi jaane rabba..
Duniya se hum begaane
Tu hai sirf meri..Phir bhi na jaane
RK tells Madbala fell down 😉
She hits him and fumes.. RK tells biwi "you are the only one" who used
to look more beautiful while getting angry.😆 Madhu smiles & blushes.. She makes innocent face & asks seriously MAD means Madbala?
He tells yesss biwi... You are Madbala of RK.. Only of RK's
He gets close to her.. Both can feel each other's breath.. Madhu closes her eyes..
but RK smirks & tells biwi I forgot something.. She opens her eyes in confusion & asks what? He tells I forgot to switch off the lights.. She asks innocently so what? He tells you don't know about MAD fans of Madhubala they will watch anything 🤬if we just present on the screen.. 🤪
Madhu's cheek gets Red.. She blushes more.. Rk switches off the light...he holds Madhu & put her on bed gently..
Tu hai sirf meri
Phir bhi na jaane
Mujh ko tu ye bata
Dooriyan hai kyun darmiyan
Madhu closes her eyes in anticipation & RK leans to kiss her..
Hum hai deewane..Tere deewane
Hum hai deewane..Tere deewane
But Madhu gets up with a jerk & switches on the light.. Now RK looks her
with annoyed expression.. She tells sorry but me too forgot something.. RK asks irritatingly what? She tells actually both of us forgot something..
RK remembers & says haan ahaaan 😉

Director tells cut.. cut.. cut it.. Rishbala looks at everyone present at the set with blank face while Director says let us join also 😉

All unit members start to laugh including ViShti 😃 & all wish

( 5th Meiej ) Happy Anniversary to Madhubala fans.. 😊


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Hi friends...most of you know me..i am your friend aishu aka aiswarya..this is my first attempt in os..i dont know how i am in writing os but this just a try for our rishbala..i thought to write a short os but after complete writing it become my longest update ever...
before starting a small description about the story : This is a simple love story of Rishab kundra & Madhubala..he was not a goody yet very frank..she was a bold girl yet innocent like a child..they had enough courage to do anything for their love but they didn't had enough courage disclose anything to their family which made the problem more worse..nope more funny😆 scroll down to know what happend really..so here it starts..

Title: Crazy about you..
Theme: When love happens..
Author: aishu007 aka Aiswarya..




"sikkyyy..."mukund shook a sleeping sikky to wake him up..
"mukund..dont u have any other job..let me sleep..??"he lazily turns to other side..
"err..hey buffalo wake up i got a text from rishab he is coming next week.."mukund said..
"what..??"he raised from the bed suddenly & gave him a look..
"really..??"sikky asked him..
"yep..."mukund said & next moment sikky burst out into laughter..
"hey stop..whats so funny here..?"mukund asked...
"he is coming here..to this village..??"sikky asked by pressing his stomach to control his laughter..
"how he agreed for this..?"sikky asked by panting..
"radha mausi want get him married to a village girl..so they r coming.."mukund..
"omg..he is gonna marry a village girl.."sikky said & get off from the bed..
"hah.."mukund said..
"yup..v can see what happen.."she said & went to bathroom..


next week..(evening 5.30)


sikky & mukund waited along with their father kuku bhaita in airport with a signbord in mukund's hands named "welcome kundras"
"heyy..."they looks hearing a husky voice..
"Rishab.."sikky & mukund said in union..Rk removed his ray-ban from his eyes & fix it on his t-shirt..kuku saw radha & mohan behind him & smiled..rk went near them..
"yehh..sikky,mukku..how r u dudes.."rk said by standing between them & placing his one arm on sikky's shoulder & other on mukund's..
"v r fine..& u rishab..?"mukund..
"hey dumbo..call me RK.."he said..
"hm..so rk..u r gonna marry a village girl hah.."sikky asked with a mocking smile which made rk's smile turn into a frown..
"not mine..mohan kundra's marriage is gonna happend.."rk said with a lil anger..
"so..u r not interested..??"sikky..
"never..i came here for a vacation..i am missing my angelena,juli,nictia,jihana..." interrupted by sikky.."hey..who r these all..??"
in replay rk winked at him..
"oh..so u r a small casanova.."sikky..
"hm..casanova..i like it..but sikky i like to flirt with them nothing more than that.."rk said..
"but y..?"sikky asked..
"sikky.."mukund called him annoyed..
"hey u shut up..dude u say.."sikky asked leaning on him..
"he wont change.."mukund said in mind..
"becoz i dont want to lose my precious virginity with any random girl.."rk said..
"oh..so u r gonna become a typical husband..who is always loyal to his wife.."sikky asked raising his eyebrows..
"crap..i dont wanna become an idol man..i want a special one.."to winked..
"oh..u r coming to our village na village girls r not like foreigners they r natural beauties..i think u will get a nice time there.."sikky said & smirked..
"sikky stop it..rishab dont hear his words..he will misguide u..u dont know the power of villager's arms.."mukund said as a warning..
"but not as much my arms..anyways i am coming there na lets see.."rk said..
"did ur talkings over..??"they turns hearing kuku bhaita's voice..
"ha..mama.."rk said with a smile..
"so shall v move..."kuku..
"yeah..of course.."rk said..
"hm..then come.."kuku said & they move in..


In village kuku bhaita's apartment


"ha..rishab,mohan,radha...come.."
meera invites them inside..
"have ur seat..i will take something to drink.."meera said & leaves to kitchen..they sat down on couch..after few mins meera came back with juices & snackes..rk took a glass from it & sips..
"u know rishu y u r here..??"meera asked with a smile..rk took his lips from the glass & looks her..
"v all planning to get u married soon.."she said..rk just smiled..
"y u r silent..dont u like to get married..??"meera asked..rk feels irritated by her question..
"leave it meera..he is shy.."kuku said..radha looks meera..
"excuse me.."rk stood up & tried to leave..
"hey rishu..where r u going..??"mohan asked him..
"washroom.."he said & moved..in mid way he saw sikky..
"dude..y u look desp..??"sikky asked rk..
"nothing..b/w where is mukund..??"rk..
"dont know..may he went to outside..leave it..y u here..??"sikky asked..
"hm..where is washroom...??"rk asked..
"oh..its the matter..come.."sikky took him to their room..
"u can use this..."sikky said..rk opened the door & get inside..

"oh shit..!!"sikky hears a screaming sound & went inside..
"what happend rk..??"sikky asked..
"look.."rk said pointed at the closet..
"normal..i cant use this.."rk said disgusted..
"this is village na..pls adjust.."sikky said..
"no way..eww.."rk left..rk hears the ringing sound of his phone & took it out from his denim's pocket..
"hello.."rk..
"hello baby its me.."a girls voice came from the other end..
"hey juli..what a pleasant surprise.."rk said..
"whats up..??how is india..?"juli..
"bore dear..i am dying to see u sweetheart.."rk..
"me too missing u honey.."juli..
"oh..how sweet..love u baby..muahh.."rk..
"love u rk.."juli..
"Rishab..."he hears radha's voice..
"honey..ma is calling me..i will call later..bye.."rk said & leaves after disconnecting the call..sikky overhears him & thought.."oh rk..if i was u.."he slipped to his own dream world..
Rk went to hall & finds all elders r present there ready to say something..
"Rishu..come here.."radha called him near her & he went near her..
"whats it ma.."he asked..
"look this..how is she..??"she asked showed him a photo..he took it from her hand & looks..
"Trishna chowdary..23 yr..did u like her.."radha asked..
"ma.."rk said looking her..
"say did u like her or not.."radha asked him again..
"no.."he said & leaves from there without a word..radha looks him..


Night


everyone went to their respective rooms after having dinner..in between dinner also rk's mrg matter came so he didn't complete his food as he dont like to hear about it..


Room..


"ok dude now say.."sikky said while rk lie down on the bed..
"what..??"rk..
"about ur girl friends in US.."sikky with a smirk..
"sikky i am so tired..i want some sleep.."rk said..
"u r sweating.."sikky..
"hah..y u damn ppl cant at least fit an air conditioner in this room.."rk said with lil anger..
"v have fan here na.."sikky asked..
"hell.."rk..
"what happend..??i think ur mood is not ok..is everything fine..??"sikky asked with a lil concern..
"no..nothing is fine.."like a missile he said..
"its better u sleep.."sikky said..hearing the noise mukund who was lying on the bed turns & looks them..
"now what u want..sleep.."sikky roared & turned off the light..


Morning


sikky opened his eyes & finds rk is not there..he hears the sound of water flowing from the bathroom & conformed he is there..becoz mukund is still sleeping..he get off from the bed & went near bath room..the sound of flowing water stopped & after few mins he hears the sound of footstep..the door got opened & rk stepped into room nauseously..
"oh..u took bath also..how was others..??"to smirk...rk glared at him..
"1st one was ok..second one..eww..i cant adjust here.."rk said..
"hm..so how..u used water or tissue paper..?"sikky..rk glared at him..
"sikky..v were lived in foreign but it dont meant v completely forgot indian culture & turned into foreigners...yes its true that i cant adjust with some things...so pls.."rk..
"i am sorry..i was just kidding.."sikky..their attention was broke by a yawning sound..
"oh..mukku wake up.."rk smiled..
"rk u get ready fast.."sikky told him..
"for what..??"rk asked by raising his eyebrows..
"i will give u a tour around our village..u didn't saw a village yet na.."sikky..
"dont tell like that..since i went to US..means after my 10 yr.."rk..
"yup..hm..then..u can meet nice girls also.."sikky winked at him..
"really...??"he smirked..
"ok..i will come after getting fresh..u get ready fast..."sikky told & went..
after sometime sikky & rk went outside..
"how is our village..??"sikky..
"hm nice.."rk said while walking along with sikky through the village..
"nice...??"sikky..
"okk..beautiful.."rk said but alas his leg hits on a rock & he falls down..unfortunately he fell above cow dung..he was wearing a white shirt & blue denim pants..
"eww..."he stood up & look at his shirt..
"rk..ur shirt.."sikky laughs seeing his attire..
"damn..stupit villagers.."rk said..
"no..no..u should scold that cow.."he said & again laughs..
"shut up..i want to clean this.."rk said & looks around..
he saw a pipe line nearby & a long queue waiting for taking water..without minding the queue rk went near the pipe & tried to take water..
"hello..what r u doing..v r here to take water.."a girl said him giving a sharp glare..he looks her & for 1 min he lost in her beautiful dace & then again came into his senses..
"its my shirt..i only want a lil water..for cleaning this.."he said looking at his shirt..
"if u want to get water..then follow the queue.."she said & continue taking water..
"queque..me..no way..u know who am i..??"rk said in a lil arrogant tone..
"i dont wanna know who r u..but if u want to take water u must follow the queque.."her pot got filled & she took the pot & leaves..
"village ki jungli billi..not bad.."rk said & leaves..he reach near sikky & saw him chuckling..
"what..??"rk said..
"u got ur stomach full from that madhubala hah.."sikky..
"oh..her name is madhubala..??"rk asked with a mischievous smirk..
"hm.."sikky"do u have anything for her.."to winked..
"madhubala aahann.."rk said & smirks.."come lets go back.."rk said..they reached back home..
"rk,sikky where u gone without saying to anyone..??"mukund who waited in the door step for them asked before they could enter inside..
"mukund..can u pls give us way to get inside or i want to answer it standing here itself..??"sikky asked & crossed his arms against his chest..mukund gave them way & they enters inside..
"now tell.."mukund..
"hey my moron bro mukku..v r not kids to ask permission..v went for an outing..whats the need of asking them.."sikky..
"all got worried..rishab..mausi is asking for u.."mukund..rk nodded & left..
"ma.."he knocked at the door of the room where elders r sitting..
"ha rishu..come.."radha calls him inside..he walked inside while glacing at the bundle of photos in their hands as well as on the bed..
"rishu..select anyone from this.."radha said..
"ma..y this much girls..r u trying me to get married or going to start any business with this..?"rk question made radha glare at him..
"rishu.."radha said..
"i dont wanna get married..is that clear.."rk said..
"y..y u dont want to get married..?rishu u r 26 now..."radha said..
"not 62 na..i dont want to marry a dumbo..??"rk said..
"dumbo..??"everyone asked confused..
"these villagers are dumbos & idots..i dont want a girl from here.."rk said..
"rishu..they r not dumbos or iditos..they have their own tradition & culture...u want a girl na..not a.."hardly she controlled her tongue...
"i know y r u saying like this..v gave u over freedom..v didn't controlled u...meera u know which type of life he lead in US..i feel ashamed to say like this about my son..pubs,night parties,casino..& even girls.."radha said which made meera & kuku look him with opened jaw..
"a cultured girl only can change him..& hear this too v r not going back to US ok..v r going to settle at mumbai afrer ur marriage.."radha said..
"what..no..i want to go back..ma this is cheating.."rk said with different expressions in his face..
"u r not ready to choose a girl na..then v will choose & u will marry her.."radha said..rk gritted his teeth & left..


Night(at rk,sikky,mukund's room)


"rk what r u thinking.."sikky asked rk who is lost in thoughts..
"what..??"rk asked still drowned in thoughts..
"where u lost.."sikky asked taking a place beside him on the bed..
"nothing sikky.."rk said..
"nothing..??say na.."sikky said..
"hm..sikky..u know more about that girl..?"rk asked..
"girl..which girl..??"sikky asked him..
"that girl..morning we saw na.. madhubala.."rk said...
"dude...whats ur intention..?"sikky asked..
"nothing..just an aspire to know..."rk said..
"okk..if u have any hidden intention dont hesitate to tell..i will correct u.."sikky said..What..??what he said.. ..going to correct him..?for the first time he is saying like this instead of support him..."did this sikky have any crush on her..or its any thing else..??"rk thought..
"u know where she living..??"rk asked looking..
"rk..she is our neighbour..her apartment is next to our.."sikky said..
"wow.."he looked sikky excited..
"but..no use of knowing about it.."sikky said with frozen face.."dont try to mingle with her rk..its injurious to ur health.."
"y...she is not a girl..??i meant is she some witch or ghost..??"he asked in a mocking tone..
"more than that.."sikky said with a serious face..
"sikky.."rk called him confused..
"she is the daughter of shamseer malik.."sikky said..
"so..??"rk asked..
"u dont know anything about their family.."sikky said..
"then let me know.."rk said..
"that malik na he is a semi psycho.."sikky said..rk shooks his head & said.."err..u r making me more confused.."
"i will say it..they settled here 3 years back from delhi..he had 2 daughters..madhu & then trishna.."sikky said..
"trishna..??"rk..
"yep..trishna fell in love with her collegemate & two days before her marriage she eloped with him..it was a shock for him.."sikky..
"then..??"rk asked..
"1 yr after their marriage he abandoned a pregnant trishna..this made her commit suicide..."sikky"& after that he start hating city & men there..so he shifted to this village..he said he will get madhu married only to a villager as he loss his believe in city people..u know once a man from city came to this village for a visit..he likes madhu & tried to woo her..u know what he done..??he smite him with sickle..for his luck he got saved & he ran away from here with his life..."sikky said & rk gasped..
"no one is dare to mess up with him.."sikky"its like calling our death by ourself.."
"this rk like to play with danger..."he said & smirk..
"rk no..hear my words.."sikky said..
"sikky u turn off the light..i want sleep early today..in morning i have some works.."he said & lie down..sikky looked him intriguing..


Morning


morning itself rk went out from the apartment in the name of jogging..he looked at the medium apartment which is next to their..the door is locked from outside..means..she & her father is not there..."may they left for their work"rk thought & start moving..he stops when he saw an opened sweet shop & the girl who is sweeter than any sweet is sitting inside..his legs unknowingly moved to that side..
"hello.."madhu who was busy in arranging things there turns hearing a familiar voice..
"you..!!"she asked amazed..
"do u remeber me.."he asked with a smile..
"no..y should i remember about a random guy.."she asked with normal face..
"oh..then y u r so rude with ur customer..??"rk asked..
"i am sorry if u feel like that..okk..what u want..?"she asked with a slight smile..
"the sweetest thing here.."rk said..
"everything here is sweet.."madhu..
"the sweetest thing.."he said eyeing her lips...she looks away.."if u want anything then say...pls dont waste my time.."
"angry loaded madhubala.."he smirks..
"whats ur problem..??"she said looking at him..
"until i meet u i didn't had any problem but now.."he said..
"r u trying to flirt..??"madhu asked crossing her arms against her chest..
"do u think so.."he said leaning towards her..
"u dont know anything about me..anything.."she said..
"i know everything about u..everything.."he said by smirking..
"so u know about my papa too..??"she asked..
"yep.."rk said..
"dont u like to live..??"madhu said by raising her eyebrows..
"yes honey.."rk said..
"aah..!!"madhu"who is he to call me like that.."she thought..
"dont call me so.."madhu said..
"its ur name's meaning na..madhu means honey.."to winked..
"i dont like any random guy calling me like that.."she said..
"i am not a random guy sweetheart..if u like v would start a good relationship .."he said..
"what..what he said now..v only met today..okk yesterday & now he is talking about starting a new relationship..??"she thought & glared at him..
"oh dont look me like that.."rk said..
"do u want my father to do one more murder..??"she asked him loftily..
"what..??"he asked confused..
"u said na u know everything about me then dont u know my father is a murderer..??"she asked & in that shock he flinched back..
"what..murderer..??"rk asked..
"he killed the person who was responsible for my didu's death.."madhu said..
"he..he killed him..??"rk stammered..
"yes..without any proof & threw his body into sea.."madhu..
"ok..then bye.."he said & start to move..
"hey stop.."she said..he stopped & turned back..
"dont want any thing sweet..?"she asked smirking..
"this is enough..my stomach is full.."he said & left...he looks him going & smiles..

After sometime he went back to kuku's apartment..he straightly headed towards his room..
"rk..u came..??"sikky asked..
"u damn.."he went near him & grabbed his neck...
"what happend to u leave me.."sikky said..
"y u didn't tell me he is a murderer.."rk asked..
"what..who..??"sikky..
"dont try to act before me.."rk said...
"what r u telling..leave me or else u will become murderer.."rk took his hands off his neck..he starts coughing...
"what happend to u..r u gone mad..??"sikky asked..
"y didn't u tell me my would be father in law is a murderer.."rk said..
"what...would be father in law...rk u meant.."sikky looks him..
"shamseer malik.."rk said..
"what..so u r serious about this..??"sikky..
"yes..damn serious..i didn't believed in love yet..for me life is just for enjoying..i didn't want to stuck in an affair but see..what fate have done to me..dont know whats happening to me..when i see her i feel like.." interrupted by sikky.."u feel like ur heart beats r raising..breath is fastening..mind saying she is urs..blah..blah.."
"sikky.."rk glared at him..
"hm..but i didn't knew that he killed someone..i told everything to u that i know about them..& this is a new piece of information for me.."sikky said..
"uff.."rk sat on the bed & brushed his hands over his hair..
"so u quit..?"sikky asked & sat near him..
"quit..??never..i am not a coward like u.."he said looking him..
"so whats ur plan..??"sikky asked..
"u wait & watch..with in 1 week she will say i love you to me.."rk said & smirks..
"then what about malik..he have a rifle with him..."sikky..
"my aim is only his beautiful daughter madhubala malik..other all i dont care.."rk said..
"Wish me luck sikky.."rk said..
"Wish u a very bad luck.."sikky said & rk glared at him..


Next morning(5 am)


Madhu opened the door hearing the calling bell & opened the door.
"You...!!"she asked exclaimed seeing rk on the doorstep...
"Yes honey..its me..give me way.."without waiting for her replay he gently moved her aside & enters inside..
"Hey...what r u doing..??"madhu asked confused seeing him closing the door..
"I didn't done anything yet na.."rk said..
"Wha..wha..what u..mea..mean..?"her voice trembled & she starts sweating..
"Oh..dont be afraid of me...i am a decent guy..i wont do what u think untill u allow me.."to winked..
"Shameless.."she said in her mind..
"Yes..i am...after seeing u.."he said..
"What..??"madhu asked confused..
"U called me shameless na.."he said wondering her..
"How..how u know..?"madhu asked..
"Becoz i am RK.."he said..
"R..K..??what kind of name is that..dont ur parents get any normal name for u..oh sorry u r not a normal person na..insane.."madhu..
"Oh..take it easy honey..its my short name..everyone used to call me like that..i am Rishab kundra..u can call me rk.."he said..
"Pk suits for u.."madhu said..
"Hm..jungli billi han.."he said..
"Dont call me so..what u want mr.pk.."madhu..
"U ms.jungli billi.."rk said...
"I will kill u.."she said..
"Then do it honey.."he widely opened his arms..
"R u crazy..??"she asked..
"Yes..crazy about u.."he said..
"Err...get out.."she shouted..
"Dont shout..ur hitler papa will wake up.."rk said..
"Hitler..??how dare u.."she said angrily..
"Ok..then saint.."he said..
"Papa is not here.."she said..
"What really..?"he got excited...she bites her tongue remembering what she had said..
"That..but he will come at anytime.."she said..actually she know her father come only after one week..he got a call from delhi that his mother is not well so he went there..he dont want to take his daughter back to that city where he lost everything..his daughter,his wife
..so he went alone there after giving her his rifle for her self protection..
Rk starts to move towards her which made her unknowingly move back till he pin her on the wall..
"Rk..dont.."she said..
"Shh.."he shut her lips with his index finger"first hear me.."..she looks him..
"Madhu..to be frank..i am not a goody..i dont know am i worth for u or not..i didn't lead a good life in US..i use drinks,i smoke & i even have so many girl friends..i didn't cared about my family..i just wanted to enjoy my life..my youth was crazy for me..i just wanted to enjoy my life..i didn't believed in love..i thought girls r just for time pass untill i meet u..i love u..frankly..so i dont wanna lie u..so i said truth..decision is urs..if its yes..i promise whatever problem happen i will face it make u mine..think.."he said & left leaving her dumbstruck..


2 days later(evening)


"Hey rishab what happend to u...u r not in a good mood since 2 days.."mukund asked him..
"Nothing mukund..its just.."rk looks away.."y didn't madhu replayed me yet..??"he thought..


After sometime


Radha opened the door hearing the sound of calling bell..
"Hi mam.."radha saw a girl standing before her..
"Who r u beti..??"radha asked her..
"I am madhubala..Rishab sir ordered for a white forest from our shop..i came to give it.."madhu said..
"Rishu ordered..??but.."she thought..
"Ok..give it i will give him.."radha said..madhu gave the parcel to radha & starts to move..
"Hey...dont u want money..?"radha asked..
"Sir paid it.."she said left..radha closed the door & went to rk's room..
"Rishu.."radha called him..
"What ma..?"rk..
"This is this for u.."radha said..
"Whats this..?"rk asked..
"White forest..u ordered this na..a girl now came & gave this to me & said u ordered this from their shop.."radha..
"Me..??"he thought..
"Ok..give it.."he said..she gave it to him & leaves..
"SM sweets.."he read the name printed on the cover..he opened the parcel & saw the written "I Love You Rk.."in that..he gave a big smile reading it..he saw a letter inside & took it...he opened the letter & starts reading.
"Dear Rk...no my Pk..u r really shameless.. yet very frank..usually boys r behind girls saying sugar candy words..& make them fall for them..u have been surely get a slap from me if u were like that..but u r loyal..u didn't tried to hide ur past..okk ur past was not good..but i dont care about past..r u ready to become a goody..??then thumbs up from my side..dont think i am a silly girl..jungli billi hein..
Caution: u r gonna love a volcano..so be aware..
Your own jungli billi.."

"Hm..she outsmarts me.."he said & smirks..he get up from the bed & left to the shop suddenly...when he reach there he found the shop is closed..next place is her apartment..she should be there..
"Damn..i simply wasted my time.."he thought & went back..


**Ding-Dong**


Madhu opened the door & saw rk..she leaned on to the door & said.."i expected u.."
"U r really crazy.."rk said..madhu lowered her eyebrows forming a question mark..
"Dont u get any other way to tell this..?"rk asked
"U like sweet most na..so i choose a sweet way..just a different try.."she said..
"U r more than what i thought.."he said..
"Yes..i am.."madhu..
"Dont u invite me inside..??"he asked..
"Y should i..?u r not my husband na.."she said with a mischievous smile..
"Would be hubby na.."he said..
"Would be is there.."she said..
"Cut it then.."he said leaning towards her..
"Cant cut it until v tie knot.."she said & pushed him by stepping inside..
"I dont need any permission.."he said & enters inside & closed the door..
"I have rifle with me.."she turns & said..
"Then kill me & kill urself..v can unite in heavan.."he said..
"V wont get heaven if v die like that..dont u heard about it..??"madhu asked..
"If u r with me hell also turn to heaven.."he said..
"Sweet canty words.."she said..
"Do u think so..??"he asked her..
"Yes .."she said..
"Aahhan.."he said & moved towards her..
"What r u doing..??"she said stepping back..
"u r directly propotional to me..??"he said..
"Aahh..??"she looks him confused..
"Dont u heard about direct propotion..?one quantity increases other also increases..like that u step back when i come forward.."he said & chuckled..
"Oh..thats great.."she said..he moved further closer & she moved back till she hits the wall..he puts his hand either side of her blocking her way..he leaned towards her & madhu's heart start pounting inside her chest..
"Your heart beats like dhol.."he said & moved bit further..& she closed her eyes..she felt his warm breath on her lips..after few seconds not feeling his lips on her she opened her eyes & saw him smirking at her..
"U expected something na.."rk said.
"No..i..i didn't.."she looks away blushing..
"Did you ever kissed anyone.."he asked madhu..
"No..did u..??"she asked & in return he smirked..
"Oh gosh..i got a second hand piece.."she said with a fake sad..
"No..i am yet hot & fresh..."he said..
"how i could believe..??"she said..
"Dont u believe me..?"he asked..
"No.."she said..
"Then v can break up..love is nothing without believe.."he said..
"What..i only confessed my love today & u r talking about break up..how can u..??"she asked..
"U said na u dont believe me.."he asked..
"For that..u should talk to me & sort out the problems.."she said looking at him..
"How can i sort out the problems if u r there to create new new problems.."he said..
"What..so u r saying i am a problem for u..?"she asked with a bit anger..
"No..i didn't meant that.."he said...
"No..u r right lets break up.."she said..
"Madhu.."rk..
"No.."madhu..
"Y u r so silly..i was just kidding.."he said..
"But..i am not kidding.."she said..
"Ok sorry..what i want to do to make ur mood clear..?"rk asked & she thought for a while & said.."u want to promise me.."
"Promise..?what promise..?"he asked..
"U wont ever use drinks,no smoking & no girls.."madhu said..
"Madhu.."he called stunned..
"Promise otherwise break up.."she said..
"At least drinks.."he asked in pleading tone..
"Ok..once in an year.."she said..
"Only once..?"rk..
"Ok twice..dont ask for more..now promise me.."she said forwarding her hand..he gasped & said "ok..promise.."he touched on her palm & she smiled..
"Now u should promise me.."rk said..
"What..?"madhu..
"Whenever i tell..u should be ready for our marriage.."rk said..
"What..??"she asked confused..
"Yes..if i call u one day & say tomorrow is our marriage..u should be ready for it.."he said..
"But.."she said..
"Promise or break up..?"he asked..
"Ok..promise.."she said..


After a week..


Malik came back from delhi so after that he didn't went to meet madhu in her house..they used to meet in her sweet shop..


Morning


"Madhu..."malik called her..
"Ha papa.."she came infront of him..
"Madhu...i fixed ur marriage with the son of my childhood friend..
"Papa but.."she said..
"Next week is ur marriage..v have only less time..so i want to arrange everything fastly.."he said..
"Y papa fixed my marriage so fast...did he come to know about my affair with rishab..?"she thought..


Night


Madhu is lying on the bed & crying thinking about rk..
"I should tell about it to rk.."she thought & picked her phone to dial his number but before that he called her & she picks the..
"Hello rk.."madhu..
"Madhu..v r gonna marry tmr..be ready for that.."he said..
"Tmr..but..."she tried to say about the marriage proposal but he stopped her & said.."No madhu..no more questions..u promised me..be ready at 4 am..v r leaving from here early morning.."he said & cuts the call..she thought & wiped her tears..


Morning(4 am)


Madhu waited outside for rk & after sometime he came..
"Madhu come lets go.."he said & holds her hand..
"Rk..i am scared..dont know what happend if papa come to know about this.."she said...
"V dont have time to think that all..v want to go from here now.."he said..she nodded & they left..rishbala got married in a mandir at next village..
"Rk..whats next..??"she asked..
"Suhaag raath.."he winked at her..
"Chee..not that shameless..where v go now..?"she asked..
"To ur village where else..??"rk..
"What..papa will kill u.."she said..
"Madhu v should go there..whatever v had done its becoz of our situation but its not right..v cheated our parents..i dont want to do one more mistake..so v should go back & apologize them..i am sure they forgive us..they cant hate us.."he said...madhu hugged him & he hugged her back & pats on her back..
"Everything will be alright na.."she asked..
"Hmm.."he hummed..


In village..


Malik was sitting in his easy chair totally angrily thinking about madhu..
"She done the same mistake which trishna had done..."he said & grited his teeth..


**Ding-Dong**


"He stood up from the chair hearing the calling bell & went to open the door..he stood there stunned seeing the sight before him..
"Papa..i am sorry..v loved each other that much..pls..i know i had done wrong but pls..pls forgive.."he was ready to kick her out if the groom was not HE..
"I am sorry uncleji..v done mistake..but v dont wanna start a new life without ur blessings..i swer i will take care of her for my whole life.."rk said..malik went inside without saying anything..madhu looks rk with wet eyes..after a few mins he came back..
"Come inside.."malik said wondering both rishbala..they sat on the couch..malik again went to open the door hearing the calling..he opened the door..rk's eyes popped up seeing the ppl in doorstep..
"Come inside.."malik said & they enters inside..
"Papa..ma.."rk mumbled & lowered his head..
"Rishu look us.."mohan said & they sat on the couch opposite to them & malik on his easy chair..rk lifts his head to look him..
"What u had done..??"mohan asked..
"Papa..i.."rk looks away..
"Do u think u both done right..?"mohan..
"No..but v loved each other that much.."rk said..
"Y u eloped..?"mohan said..they keeps mum..
"Answer me rishu..y u eloped with ur would be bride..??"mohan asked..rishbala looks him astonished "what..??"they asked him in union..
"Hah my buddu beta..yesterday v talked about an alliance na..it was about her my childhood friend malik's daughter madhu..2 days before v came to know that malik is in this village..he said she have some problems in her kundli so want to get her married before her 23 b'day..next week is her b'day..so v tried to get u both married within a week..but u 2 outsmarts us.."mohan said..rk & madhu looked each other embarassed..
"Y didn't u tell us that u love her..then these all wont happen na.."malik..
"That i thought u wont agree for this as i am not from a village..& u will kill me like u killed.."rk stopped when he feels like madhu pinching on his hand..
"What..i killed..whom...??"malik asked confused..
"Madhu u said na.."rk asked her..madhu signalled him to shut up..
"Whats it madhu.."malik asked..
"That papa..nothing.."she stammered..
"Say it.."malik said..
"That..for make him scared i said him that u killed a person.."madhu said embarassed...
"What..??made u made me a murderer.."he said & all together laughed..
"Lier.."rk said looking at madhu & she glared at him..


After an year


"Rk..wake up.."he opened his eyes hearing his beautiful wife's voice..
"Y u r disturbing my sleep biwi..?"he asked her..
"Its 8 am.."she said..
"Only 8 na..let me sleep till 8.30.."he said & yawned...
"Wake up..i want to tell u one thing.."madhu said..
"whats it..?"rk asked..
"wake up na.."madhu..
"whats it madhu..?"he raised from the bed & sat down..
"whats it..??"rk..she looks away blushing..
"morning itself u started what happend..??"rk asked..madhu shows him the preg card..
"what..2 lines..madhu u.."he asked amused..she nodded shyly..he hugs her tightly & she hugs him back..
"i am very happy.."rk said & kissed on her forehead..
"rk..our child will be a boy or girl..??"madhu..
"boy or girl..its our child na..he/she is important for us.."he said..madhu feels a bit impishly..
"hm rk..after our child's birth u will love whom most..me or our child..?"she asked..
"hm..not a bad question.."he said & made her sit on his lap.."u know na madhu what was me & what i am now..my love for u changed me like this..i didn't thought that i will fall in love with someone..i dont when my love starts..u know one thing madhu we cant say when love happens but if it happend v cant stop ourself from loving them..& i cant ever stop loving u..& this child..its the symbol of our love..u both r my life.."he said..
"oh my pk..i just needed a simple answer but u spoke like a philosopher.."she said..
"aahhan.."rk..
"i love u rk.."madhu said & hugs him..
"i love u too madhu.."he hugs her back & caressed her hairs..


They don't know when their love starts but they know they cant ever stop loving each other😳..



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Edited by aishu007 - 8 years ago

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