RishBala TS: Flechazo (Completed + Epilogue)

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Hello everyone...

I'm Maithili! You can call me Maithili or Maithu!
I came across a lot of RishBala Stories written by amazing writers.
Just to thank you all, I'm posting this story which I have written for another Jodi in IF.
Hope you will not take it wrong.
It's a simple and sweet love story.
Hope you like it!

Flechazo

Spanish word signifying a Bow shot - Love at first sight.
So it's the bow shot of Cupid to inflame the love at first sight.




- Maithili

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Part 1


"Madhu give this coffee to Rishab dear." says Padmini to her only daughter.

"Maa, why me!" ask the ever strong girl with fear and stress for the first time.

"I told you yesterday that Rani mausi is on leave for 2 days."

"I was not in my state to hear you Maa!" muttered Madhu under her breath.

"Did you say something?"

"Nope!" shaking her head.

"I'm preparing lunch dear, please take it to his room." pleaded Padmini.

"As if I have a choice!" telling this she takes the tray and headed toward the stairs.


"What am I going to do?

First time going to see HIM face to face!

May be I saw HIM in childhood but don't remember anything.

My heart has to listen to my mind!

Ahhh! Why is it difficult?

HE is a stranger. I'm going to hand over this coffee and get out immediately.

Why didn't my college start last week or yesterday?

Why HE has to come now and not after one month?" blabbering all her thoughts, she climbs those stairs which makes her feel like hiking a mountain.


Her stress is justified as she is going to meet HIM for the first time in person. HE is not unknown to her, she knows HIS likes, HIS dislikes and HIS favorites. Why wouldn't she?


Living not far from this Kundra's mansion, having both her parents working under this roof, she can't neglect the only heir of this family.


The Kundra family is like a second family to her as she has spent most of her time here.


Listening to her mother talks since childhood, sometimes she felt like she is not her child but HIM, which leaded to jealousy until once she heard how caring HE was towards her mother in her absence when she was needed.


The main reason for envy HIM is her mother who ignores her whenever he comes for vacations. HE becomes her priority.


And one more thing that she doesn't like is when her mother is on cloud nine for whole day when HE addresses her as Padmini Maa.

Her mother tells her that she feels connected to HIM and responsible of HIM since HE lost HIS mother in a car accident when he was 12.


Being away from parents for few months or years is nothing compared to be away from parent(s) for a life time, she tells her daughter at least once a day.


Luckily her father is not HIS fan, as they have just formal talks between them and nothing more or less. Those talks are like:

Hi!

Hello!

How are you?

How are your studies going?

Enjoy your holidays!


Her father, Malik, personal driver and assistant of Mohan Kundra since the day the latter has become CEO of Kundra Group of Companies, few decades ago. He is MK friend cum right hand.


Coming back to Madhu, few years back she concluded that the envy and the jealousy are the reflection of her possessiveness for her mother. And her mother will always keep her above this world in her universe.


Even if she doesn't like to be stressed for small thing, she is going to see the man she has been drooling over with those photos in HIS room and some other places since ages.


From the moment her mother told her "Rishab is shifting permanently here! He is coming here tonight.", she was in a state of shock due to which she couldn't concentrate on her mother's conversation about her associate, Rani mausi's absence. It's with the mention of her favorite uncle she came out of her shock but it didn't last long as another bullet hit her head which is that she is asked to be there for lunch.


It's not the first time she is asked to be there but it's the first time she will be there in HIS presence.


Standing in front of HIS room door, she thinks if she is going to see the angel in the heaven or to be a prey in lion's den.


"What is the need to send me when HE said HE will come down and take HIS coffee himself? I think Maa is becoming deaf in love. Moreover, he said, no he ordered to not bring it to HIS room. But Maa is Maa, she is pampering him a lot!"


Gathering all the courage to face him without letting the firecracker sound of her heartbeats cross her mind, she knocks the door which slightly opens. She peeps her head inside to see if there is someone. Hearing the shower, she sighs in relief and mutters "Thank god!". But the next second, the room is calm, no sound of shower, no sound of someone present.


She quickly went near the coffee table and put the tray on it. Keeping the courage in hand, she tries to open her mouth but it went in vein as she heard HIS voice from bathroom "Who is there?" in an American accent.


All the courage went into drain and her stress shoot up.


Muttering "Leave! Leave! LEAVE!", she started to go out of the room until she heard the bathroom door open and the person asking her to stop.


Madhu stopped near the door with one hand on the frame while the other holding tightly her kurti with her heart in her hands and her back to Rishab.


"Who are you?"

LUB-DUB-LUB-DUB-LUB-DUB ... No answer

HE started to near her.

"Answer! What are you doing here?"

LUB-DUB-LUB-DUB-LUB-DUB ... No reply again.


Having enough of her silence, HE asked her to turn but it's of no avail.


"If you don't turn now, I will make you turn and face the Devil!" in a warning tone.


Gulping down the lump that had formed in her throat and closing her eyes with no options left, she turned to face HIM.


Seeing the beauty in front of HIM, HIS breath was caught in HIS throat.


Time froze for second, even for minutes before the silence is broken by Padmini.


"Madhu" Padmini called her daughter to come down.


Hearing her voice, HE came out of HIS trance but it was Madhu's turn to be hell shocked, or can be said tempted as she opened her eyes which got the pleasure to fall on half naked person in front of her, just with HIS track pant and wet hair.

Her jaw dropped to ground and eyes stared at HIS body.


He chuckled seeing her reaction.


Before he could say anything Padmini once again called her daughter.


Without wasting a second, Madhu rushed out of the room as soon as she gains back her presence of mind leaving the man in his own land.


"Madhu Hmmm! See u soon Darling!" with a smirk


*****


At the dining table, Padmini is serving lunch to Mohan who is like a brother to her while HE enters.


HE, The Rishab Kundra, UK return young, handsome, one of the most eligible bachelor in India and future Managing Director of Kundra Group of Companies and CEO when the time comes.


"Morning Dad!" addresses his father coming down the stairs with his eyes scanning the place.

"Afternoon Son!" replied MK.

"Didn't change!" MK just smiled facing his son who has taken a seat on his right side.

"How it feels to be back home after 17 years?" MK asks his gold medalist son with pride in his eyes.

"Dad, I have been here at least once a year!"

"It's different now. You are a permanent resident here." he smiles affectionately at his son before continuing "By the way, don't forget that it has been 2 years last I saw you."

"I had my internship to do, Dad." He continues before MK could say anything "And 5 years back, I had a bike accident and you were there for one week to see me. So there is no fault of mine in all these."


Now it's Padmini's turn to not let MK speak.

"Bhaiya(Brother), let him have lunch first. After that, you can have a talk."


Rishab mouths "Thank you!" to her.


"Padmini, Call Madhu to join us!"


Hearing the name itself HIS face lit up.



Hesitatingly Madhu comes towards the table fixing her eyes between Padmini and MK all the while fidgeting with her knotted fingers.


Rishab excitedly smiles at her but she is sure in her mind to not look at him from now on. What the poor soul can do when her heart is not listening to her mind.


"Come Dear!" MK ask her to take the seat on his left.

"I'm..I'm not hungry!"

"Since when you started to eat only when you are hungry, Dear?" asked MK a little sarcastically to his dear girl.

"Uhhh"

"Come and have lunch!" MK said firmly.


Padmini with her eyes asks her daughter "What's wrong?". For that Madhu just shook her head and took her seat.


Padmini served Rishab all his favorite and went to serve her daughter.


"When is your college starting Dear?"


Rishab is of full ears and eyes for Madhu since the moment she stepped in front of him but she has only eyes for MK, Padmini and her plate.


"In one month!"

"Isn't this your 2rd year in MBA?"

"Yes!" still her heads shifting between MK and her plate.

"Are you free from Monday?"

"Uhhh"

Seeing her questioning look, MK repeats

"I asked, do you have any work from coming Monday?"

"Day after tomorrow?"

"Yes!" the simplest answer MK could give.

She simply shook her head and went back to her plate.


MK turns toward his right and calls him "Rishab!"

"Yes, Dad!"

For the first time since he saw her near table, he is diverting his attention towards someone else than Madhu, but not fully. Still his gaze is on her from the corner of his eyes.


"You remember that coming Monday you are taking your position in Kundra Group of Companies?"

"Of course dad!"


"Madhu will come with you to the office for the coming one month! She has done internships in our company and she is trained well to help you in your work."


Hearing his father, his face lit up more than before. But Madhu eyes widened as if seeing a ghost.


Turning towards Madhu

"You know that in future you will be one of the board of members and the 2nd Managing Director after Rishab?"

She just nods, so he continues.

"Hope this one month at company will be useful for you."

She mutters "Sure!" and goes back to her food world.


"Bhaiya, hope you have finished your office politics in dining table, let them have their lunch peacefully! Rishab has just came, so let him rest!"


MK shakes his head showing that she is too much to control him while someone in the table is planning mischievously whereas the other is trembling thinking about Monday.


Finishing or pausing the topic there, they headed to finish their lunch.


Unaware of what is coming next, Madhu was picking and playing with her food. Suddenly she jumped in her place, seeing her shocked face MK and Padmini got worried.


Rishab smirks seeing her face, their eyes met for the first time for few seconds only to be interrupted by MK.


"What happened Kitten?" MK asked

"No..Nothing!" she stammered.

"Kitten, So sweet!" Rishab thought but wanted to play his role.


"You seem disturbed." Rishab said with glint of mischief in his eyes.


Madhu struggling to answer, shook her hear negatively.


******* FEW MINUTES BEFORE *******


Madhu was not in mood to be seated here in front of her crush. Her first crush, her first love with whom she spends her all nights dreaming. But now, being here, her heart is beating like a drum, she is feeling butterflies in her stomach and stressed to face him.


Being not interested in having lunch, she was playing and picking her food when suddenly she felt something on her right feet, something caressing her.


No there can't be something like domestic animals here as no animal is allowed inside this mansion.


Coming to the conclusion, she looks up to face the smirking Rishab. Now she is sure that it was not something but someone who is caressing her feet. And that some is none other than Rishab.


She tries to give him a murderous look while trying to free her leg but all goes in vain as she feels his feet move upwards which caused a tingling sensation and she jerked in her seat. It's of no use as her right leg is hold between his in no time.


******* NOW *******


Madhu have finally managed to finish her food but couldn't free her leg.

Rishab on the other side was in no mood to leave the chance he has got.


Unknown to the struggle her daughter is going through, Padmini asked her daughter what she is doing still siting when she finished her lunch.


As an innocent boy, Rishab said "I think she is waiting for us!"

"Since when you started to wait for us Kitten!" MK laughed a little and continued

"Never judge a book by its cover Son. Madhu never waits for anybody when it comes to food and sleep."


Madhu felt embarrassed while Rishab was amused.


After few seconds of struggle, she felt her leg was free, so escaped from there.


After biding bye to MK giving excuses, Madhu went to her house.

She felt her excuses to be lame but what can she do when her mind is fighting with her heart instead of helping her.


Whole day went in a blink of eye for Rishab as the tiredness took over him. Whereas, Madhu made plan to convince her parents to not come to Kundra mansion and finally she succeeded in it.


The next day is not different for Madhu as she is still planning but for other motives: How to avoid Rishab? How to overcome her feelings, No No, her fear? What can she do to keep distance? ...


She was pulling her hair in tension.


The whole day, Rishab waited to get a glimpse of Madhu.

He can't ask Padmini about her daughter's whereabouts.


As MK left to Delhi office for Monday's meeting, he felt free to communicate with Padmini. So while having lunch he asked her about Madhu like "I think Madhu comes often to help you, Padmini Maa."


Padmini feeling Rishab is concerned about her family gave the answer he wished for "Whenever she is free, she come to help me but today she couldn't make it as she is preparing for tomorrow!"


Sensing he is the reason, he felt happy to have an effect on her. So he played his second card which is to drop Padmini at her house as Malik is with his father.


And BINGO! Padmini accepted without any hesitation. Why would she hesitate when he puts tons and tons of butter and ice to melt her?


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- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago


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Part 2

***************

Hearing the calling bell, Madhu came out of her thinking mode and went to open the door.

Opening the door, her heart stopped a bit with the shock of her life due to the person in front of her.
She didn't expect HIM to be here. She didn't even feel that she was holding her breath since the moment she saw HIM.

Seeing her facial expression, Rishab smirked and said "Hi Kitten!" but there was no response.

"Can I come in?"
No reaction.

He waved his hands before her face, but she didn't even blink her eyes.
He tried few tricks to bring her back from her shock but it was of no use.
Finally, he shook her a little by her shoulder and it's done.

Coming out of her shock and leaving her breath out, she saw him enter and take a place in couch.
She searched for her mother on the door way for few seconds before turning towards him with a questioning look.

Understanding her dilemma, he answered for the unasked question.
"Padmini Maa went to neighbour's house to give something!"
"Hmmm" is all she could manage to say and then focused on her interesting hands which are fidgeting with her shawl.

Few minutes passed, Rishab tried to initiate a conversation but it was of no use.

Having enough of Madhu standing like a statue, he asked:
"Are you always in a Not-Speaking mode?"

"Her second name is Chatterbox. I think she has used her quota of talking, so giving rest to her mouth!" answer Padmini who was entering the house.

Rishab smiled hearing Padmini while Madhu face palmed in embarrassment.

After having few minutes of talk, water and coffee, he bid good night to the ladies.

Coming out of their house, his heart and eyes were fully satisfied with the intake of Madhu, her reactions and his effects on her.

*****

Next day, Rishab and Madhu came to the office and they are waiting for the personal lift to come.

Madhu is playing with her shawl edge while thinking what she can do in this one month to be composed and calm when images of few minutes before flashed before her.

******* FEW MINUTES BEFORE *******

On the way to office, Rishab came to pick up Madhu to start his new journey as Managing Director.

Being a gentleman, he opened the door for Madhu to take her seat, then he went to take his.

Seeing her lost in her thoughts, he tried to call her but it went in drain.

He neared close to her, lifted his right hand close to her face.
Feeling his hot breath on her face, she faced him with a petrified look.

He took hold of the seat belt and brought it down brushing her cheek, neck, waist and hand. Finally, he put it and settled in his seat to start the engine.

She sighed in relief that it was just to put the seat belt and turned to window side.

Rishab again tried his chance to make her speak, but her mood and no-reaction made the atmosphere terrible.

In this busiest city of India, it will take approximately 30 minutes to reach the office at this time.

Little by little, Rishab started to lose his patience. After 15 minutes of silence in the storm which is happening in their hearts, they are stopped in the traffic.

He turned towards Madhu only to find her have full concentration outside.

Listening to his heart, he took her hand and gave a simple kiss holding it tightly.

With this sudden action of his, she came out of her reverie and turned his side with shock. Tears started to form in her eyes.

Is it due to her feelings of love?
Is it due to her fear of insecurities?
Even now she is caught between her mind and her heart.

Seeing this, he left her hand as guilty took place.

Feeling her hand to be free, she hidden her hands under her shawl after brushing tear drops of her eyes and diverted her precious attention to the outside world.

He smirked seeing her antics and actions and decided to speak to her once in office.

******* PRESENT *******

They entered the lift and Rishab pressed the button to reach the 14 floor.
The door closed and Madhu went to stand in the corner.

Rishab stood opposite to her and folded his arms across his chest.

Being impatient, he asked what he wanted to know since yesterday night.

"Madhu!"
"Uhhh!"
"Why are you doing this to me, Muffin?"
"Ahaan?"

Their eyes locked for few seconds.

"Why are you avoiding me?"
Feeling his intense gaze on her, she bent her head down.

Suddenly the lift stopped, so she lifted her head to the door to find it still closed and the key missing.

She turned to see him to find him close to her, holding the lift key in his hand which slid in his pocket in the next moment.

Slowly he put his both hands on either of her sides to cage her with only few inches of distance between them.

Gaining courage, she opened her mouth:
"Wha...What do yo...you want?" but still stammering.
"You!" he replied simply.
"What?" is all that she can say in this state.
"I think you heard me Doll, I wa"
"Nooo" shaking her head.
"Let me finish Sweety!"
She is still shaking her bent head negatively.

He complemented her telling her that she looks beautiful while blushing.

She brought both her hands to hide her cheeks which brushed his arms on their way.
Thanks to this contact she got goosebumps all over her body.

He smiled seeing the effect of this one touch on her body.

He lifted her head with his forefinger to capture her eyes.
He can't describe what those beautiful eyes are doing to him.

There were a lot of girls who were behind him all those years. But he was never interested in them, all he was doing is to focus on his studies and his responsibilities until he fell deep inside these eyes the first time he met HER. So he composed himself before talking to her.

"Am I scaring you Sweetheart?"
She shook her head in all direction.
He chuckled seeing her confused.


"I saw you speaking animatedly to the receptionist when I came back after parking the car." He sighed and continued "What can I do for you Beauty?"

After few seconds of reflection and collection of her courage, she put down her hands taking care of not touching him and spoke:

"Doyoualways...withgirls?" in one breath swallowing half of her words.
"Take a break Honey and talk slowly so I can understand." with smile.
"Do you alw...always talk like this wi...with girls? Hmmm... I mean using only hmmm... sugary words." reflecting her insecurities of judging him.
"Darling, you are my first and you will be my last!"

She sighed in contentment but came back to her previous posture with hesitation visible in her eyes and he smirked seeing her reactions.

"Can we go?" she asked him.
He removed his hands and went himself near her and took her left hand in his right and said:
"If I get a kiss!"
"Ahaaa!" her jaw dropped down.

He smirked and questioned:
"Do you like me Sugar?" he saw her reaction change, so he played his joker card "You love me! Am I right?" it sounded like a statement than a question.
Her mouth opened to an "O" shape giving away an answer to his question.

"So, I'm right!"

Rishab with a smirk closed her mouth with his fingers and gave a flashing smile to her as he remembered last evening event.

He is the happiest man in the world since he saw her confessing her love for him to the coffee mug and complaining about him being intimidating while she was preparing coffee for him and he was in the kitchen entrance to get water as Padmini went to freshen up.

Remembering those sweet moment, he happily brought his left hand to her right cheek and caressing it, he asked her:
"Can I?"

Her crush, her first love is asking her, want her. Her heart is willing to give herself to him whereas her mind is screaming.

Finally, she closed her eyes and parted her lips giving in to his wish listening to her heart.

Closing himself near her, their breath mingled and he hold her right cheek tilting her head a little.

Madhu can now feel his hot breath on her lips, with that her knees became like jelly. So she balanced herself on him as he took hold of her by snaking his right hand over her waist.

Slowly his lips find their way to her soft petal lips, capturing them to a sweet passionate kiss. Few seconds later he felt her respond equally to him.

As the kiss progressed, their tongues danced in sync.

He moaned "I Love You Madhu!"
She moaned "Hmmm" in response.

Seconds became minutes after which they broke their first kiss being short of breath.

Madhu hugged him hiding her face in his chest when he tightened his grip on her waist with both his hands.

Once their breath came back to even, he caressed her left cheek smilingly with full of love for her in his eyes.

"Studies or Marriage, Flower?" still caressing her cheek.
She lifted her head to face him.
"Maa, Pap"
He didn't let her finish.
"I will talk to them Dear. You decide what you want Baby!"

With little hesitation, she started to utter her words of hesitation:
"Why do you Li... Lov"

Seeing her face he understood what she is trying to say, so he cut her question mid-way and asked:
"You want to know the reason Angel?"

She just nodded being still in his embrace.

Holding her face with both his hands and a smile playing on his lips, he continued:

"Listen Princess!
You are My Life!
You are My Love!
You are My First Love!
You are My Love At First Sight!
You are My Flechazo!"

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How was it?
If you like it let me know through likes & comments!
I have written more stories for other couple.
If you are intressted in RishBala version of those stories, let me know I will post them here.



- Maithili
Edited by maithu_ - 8 years ago


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow it was so sweet and simple story
Loved it
Pls post ur other works in rishbala version
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Simple and sweet story with an unique title.
Enjoyed reading it.
Would love to read more of your stories.
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Originally posted by: v.p.joshi

Wow it was so sweet and simple story

Loved it
Pls post ur other works in rishbala version

Thank you!😊
Will try to post them here in RishBala version as soon as possible.
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Originally posted by: Jyoraj

Simple and sweet story with an unique title.

Enjoyed reading it.
Would love to read more of your stories.

Thanks yaar!
Glad you enjoyed reading it
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Maithali Welcome to the Forum.
Congrats on your first story on Rishbala.
Loved the story, beautiful one.
Can we get a epilogue to know what will be their parents reactions when they get to know about Rishbala.
Do write more stories on Rishbala, would definitely love to read them.

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Originally posted by: ananya2010

Maithali Welcome to the Forum.

Congrats on your first story on Rishbala.
Loved the story, beautiful one.
Can we get a epilogue to know what will be their parents reactions when they get to know about Rishbala.
Do write more stories on Rishbala, would definitely love to read them.


Thank u so much!
Glad you love my work!
Will try to write an epilogue!😊
Will be posting a new story on Rishbala this WE!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Welcome to the forum,
Simple and beautiful story,
loved it
thanks for posting this lovely story in Rishbala version

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