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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: harini_

Awesome update,
poor Rishbala both are sad thinking about their love,
Abhay is really a brat he is always irritating pia with his talk,
loved the way Rk tricked Dipali and Rishbala are behaving like couple infront of dipali,
continue soon,
thanks for the pm

Thank you dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sapnaf52

beautiful update di
when they know ..they are tara and vivian
abhay is funny. .he like pia. .
there nickname was cute. .
thanks for pm

They will come to know each other in next episode.tjank you
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dharsii

Nice update ka..
Rk and Madhu are so sad..
Because of dipali..
Abhay is too funny..I like him..
He is irritating Pia..
Abhiya nice pair...
RK has given nice revenge for dips..
Update soon.ka.
Thanks for pm..

Updating today.please do read.thank you
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Jyoraj

RK is faking it for Dips.

Both are hurt.

New character Abhay for Pia.
Nice part.

Please continue reading.thank you
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: --Evil_Angel--

amazing update dii..
ok so new charactrr is introduced..
but this Rk..
god..when will they behave sanely..
thanks for pm :)

You are well
.thank you for reading and commenting
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: manna43

Lovely update.Abhay is very cute n full of life.He is in love at first sight.Rk n madhu r still suffering.Love the way rk treats his manipulative bhabhiji.Hope they will enjoy their outdoors.

His bhabhiji will found herself the greatest fool ever.yhank you
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: pirl18

OMG 😲 ..u srsly add abhay... suprb .
M just a great vd fan so can't see any of his heroin Akela...
N thanx 4 dedication...
As always updt was beautiful...but having so much tears,.. 😆

Hmm..now.pia is not alone.hope you are happy.thank you
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Rach awesome update, loved it.

RK is Vivian and Rishbala don't know about their identitities yet.
Abhay is like RK to look and Pia got confused.
Dips is evil but she will help Rishbala to come closer.
Thanks for the PM dear.

Dips deeds are blessing in disguise.thank you for reading and commenting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi dear it's the next update . please read and community
Merrily yours

Part5


dehradun

"Chief... tomorrow we will start shooting.. your room is arranged in Taj." I
Bittuji
"So five star accommodation only for superstar?"Abhay
"No for you also"bittuji Smiled
"One room for me and dreamy head?"Abhay
Pia glared at him
"No.."bittuji laughed
"Oh..bittuji .y you trying to separate lovers?"Abhay
"Stop it abhay.behave matured"rk
"Sorry boss"Abhay
Madhu and piya laughed

Hotel Taj
The receptionist looked at them and awestruck.
"Hey .. girl rk is my cousin."abhay
"Ok...sir your name?"receptionist
"Dreamy heads boy friend"Abhay
"What?"receptionist
"Well ...Abhay raichand"Abhay
They got Thier keys.
"Let's move "rk
Rk Opened the room and gestured Madhu to get inside.
Madhu looking around
"Wow rk..it's so cosy"Madhu
"It's a normal room Madhu"rk
"Hmm...we should have told bittuji to book a honeymoon suite.actually it's your honey moon..Viv"Abhay
Rk glared at him.
"Viv?"pia
"It's just slip of tongue..I meant rish"abhay
"Oh.."pia
Madhu looked at pia and her eyes welled up
"Excuse me"Madhu went to wash room
"What Happened to bhabhi?"Abhay
"She may be tired"pia
"May be..now let's move to our room"Abhay
Pia followed him.
"Something wrong with bhabhi.she was happy till they went into Thier room..no actually till I said about honeymoon.may be viv's cold reactions hurting her..I should stop him calling Viv..it will cause more trouble"Abhay thought
"Dreamy head..do you want company?you won't get scared if you are alone in your room"Abhay
"No thanks vampy"pia
"Oh..that's so cruel"Abhay
Pia Opened her room.
"Hey...pia ..I want to talk with you something serious about rk and bhabhi"a hay
"Yeah..I will come to your room"pia
"Ok"Abhay opened his room and entered

*****
Madhu wiped her tears.and looked at mirror.
"Viv..."it echoed in her Mind.
"Viv..y you did this to me.you know everything about me .still you decieved me"Madhu
"Tara..I am sorry...I couldn't keep my promise . Eventhough I Know everything about you"rk
"Viv...why did you play with my heart"Madhu
"Tara...my heart is always yours.."rk
"Viv...how could you"Madhu
"I am sorry Tara"rk
Madhu cried out .she opened the tap.
Tears rolled down rks eyes.he fidgeted his hands
Madhu came out wiping her face.
"Madhu..r u hungry?"rk
"No"Madhu
"You look tired...you want to rest?"rk
"No"Madhu

*******

Pia went to Abhays room
"Welcome princess"he said opening the door
Pia sat down on the couch.
"What's it?"pia
"Well..I said you it's something serious"Abhay sat down beside her
"Yeah"pia
"What do you think about rk and bhabhi.."Abhay
"What I should think?"pia
"No.. actually I meant ..r they a having a normal wife and husband relationship?"Abhay
"Of course not..you Kno how they got married .more over Madhu had..."pia stopped
"Bhabhi had any affair?"Abhay
Pia nodded
"Omg..and then y she married him?"Abhay
"The guy betrayed her"pia
"But y?"Abhay
"It's a weired story...leave it and come to the point"pia
"I mean ..rk also some problems..but after all they got married na.so they have to start a new life"Abhay
"Yes"pia
"We have to try for it"Abhay
"But how?"pia
"Let's make some plans"Abhay
"Ok.."pia
"Well pia we can also make plans for our love story too"a hay
"Abhay when will you stop flirting?"pia
"I was a decent man till I met you.you made me a flirt pia"Abhay
"Shut up.now say the plan"pia
"Outing"Abhay
"But they will come?"pia
"I will convince Viv...err...rk"Abhay
"Ok I will tell Madhu"pia
"Why he is always having same slip of word..Viv for rk...strange"pia though
"Hey dreamy head ..go and execute the plan."
They knocked at rks door .
"Come in"rk
Pia went to Madhu while rk and Abhay sat in the balcony.
"Hey ..v...rk...we were planning an outing."Abhay
"Oh.. nice..if want the car I will tell Bittuji to arrange"rk
"Actually we all are going"Abhay
"No..no way.i have to learn my lines"rk
"Damn..lines..you should learn your life lines"Abhay
"Abhay"rk warningly
"Look rk..babhi will like to go somewhere ..she will get bored"Abhay
"Then take her"rk
"Man..don't be so rude..she is your wife"Abhay
"I Know that"rk
"But It seems you forget it sometimes"Abhay
"Hah..Abhay ..you want us to come with you . OK I am ready .ask your bhabhi"rk
"Ok..pia will ask her"Abhay.
"Viv.. please forget everything and live your life man"Abhay
"When you call me Viv..do you Know how it feels.my heart is bleeding each time Abhay"rk
"I am sorry rk..I used to call u so.i am trying it"Abhay
"It's ok abhay..but I am thinking of Tara.. bittuji searched for her in college but no one named Tara at that college .can you believed it"rk
"Look rk.. it's your past and Madhu babhi is your present and future.so stop brooding in and move on man"Abhay
"Yeah...Abhay I feel something in your heart"rk playfully
"Hey nothing"Abhay
"Do t lie...I saw something in your eyes for pia"rk
Abhay blushed
"Oh...man you are blushing"rk smacked on his shoulders
"Yeah.. something ..but I am not sure about her"Abhay
"She is a nice girl Abhay"rk
"Yeah I Know"Abhay
"Get ready man..party time"rk
"That's like my Viv..oops sorry rk"abhay
"And what about your bhabhi?"rk
"Wait "Abhay
"Abhay..Madhu is ready"pia
"Ok..then get dressed quick"rk
"Yeah"pia

*****
Poison ivy

"Hey look rishab kundra"some girls went to him.
"Hey girls please give them some privacy.they are on honey moon"Abhay
Girls looked at him dropping Thier jaws.
"Rks look alike"girls
"Sorry..I am engaged"abhah grabbed pia s hand.
They went to a private room.
"Please make sure no one disturb us"rk to waiter.
"Yes sir"waiter
Pia and Abhay started chatting while Madhu and rk lost in thier thoughts.
"Hey bhabhi..y don't you say anything"Abhay
Madhu Smiled
"She was so silent earlier..or after marriage she became mature?"Abhay
"Silent..and Madhu?she was a chirppy girl .all this after that vi.."pia
"Stop it pia"Madhu
"I am sorry"pia
"Leave it guys...what about a dance?"Abhay
"Dance..but "rk
"Hey don't deny rk .it's your first dance with your wife"Abhay
"Okay"rk
Bahon ke darmiyan
Do pyaar mil rahe hain
Bahon ke darmiyan
Do pyaar mil rahe hain
Jaane kya bole mann
Dole sun ke badan
Dhadkan bani zubaan
Bahon ke darmiyan..
Khulte bandh hote
Labhon ki ye ankahi
Khulte bandh hote
Labhon ki ye ankahi
Mujhse keh rahi hai
Ki badhne de bekhudi
Mil yoon ki daud jaayein
Nas nas mein bijliyaa

Rk andadhu swayed Thier bady with Music
"They look perfect with each other"Abhay
'haha..nice"pia
"Well we can also make a good couple"Abhay
"Very funny"pia
"This song is Viv s favor one.thats y I asked them to play this"Abhay
"Viv?he again said it.i think it's not a slip of word .he used to call to as.viv.but y and what it Viv?"pia thought"I should find out"
"Madhus favourite too "pia
"Oh.."Abhay
Rk and Madhu looked at each other's eyes.they lost in it
."Viv.."Madhu called in her mind
"Tara"rk
He cupped her face and leaned towards her.
"Hey Abhay what are they doing?"pia
"Let them do it"Abhay
"But she is Thinking about some one else"pia
"And viv thinking about some one else.so no problem.let it happen pia"Abhay
"Agai Viv"pia thought
Rk leaned and pecked on Madhus lips.madhi closed her eyes.the song stopped and everyone clapped.they went out of the trance and realized the situation.madhu palmed her mouth and ran to the room.rk followed her.abhay and pia also.
"I..I am sorry madhu..it's.. just"rk stuttered
"It..it's my fault too"Madhu
"No guys..it's not your fault .you are husband and wife ."Abhay
"Abhay let's go back"rk
"Yeah'abhay

****
Morning

"Damnit"rk throw the news paper
"What's it rk"abhay leaned and take the paper
'Rk kissing his wife '
"Oh dude..don't worry..it's the photo with your wife .not any random girls"Abhay
"Keep it away from madhu.she is already tensed..about last night.abhay please take care of her.i am going for shoot"rk
"Don't worry we will Viv"Abhay
Rk glared at him
"Oops..sorry rk"a bhay
Pia heard Thier convo
"So Abhay used to call rk as Viv .rk glaring at him .. what's that means ..they are hiding something.i have to find out it.it may help Madhu in her new life"pia thought
"Mr.rishab kundra and Mr Abhay raichand mission is on"pia



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