Merrily Yours #completed#page28dt3/6

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Hi friends here is anew story..Please read and post your review.please tell me if I have to continue or drop it

Merrily Yours


Prologue


Madhu stepped inside the room.she looked around.its a nice furnished room with two beds and two study tables and wardrobes.she pulled her trolly bag inside.she choose the cot near to the window .She always loved fresh air and the views outside.and sometimes the fresh air kissing her hair locks reminds her about him..It always keep her smiling.
Madhu heard a sound and looked back.she saw a girl struggling with her luggage.
"May I help you?"Madhu
"Yes..."girl
Madhu helped her to take her luggage inside.
"Hi...I am pia...Pia jaiswal"pia
"I am madhubala"Madhu
"Surname?"pia
"No...I am orphan 'Madhu
'Oh..I am sorry"pia
"Oh...It's all right.i am used to it"Madhu
"Well may I call u Madhu?"pia
"Yeah.."Madhu
"So ..I am from Pune"pia
"MP"Madhu
"Oh...You are here for first time?"pia
"Yeah...I got scholarship in this college"madhu
"That's great...So u are a studious girl"pia
Madhu smiled.
"Well..I came here to enjoy my life and meet my love"pia
"What?"Madhu
"My love...Hmm actually it's a one sided love..."pia
"Oh..."Madhu
"Look he is my love"pia opened her bag and show her a photo
Madhu looked at the photo and started laughing.
"Madhu...Y are you laughing?"pia
"You are really mad...Rk.. Rishab kundra?The superstar?"Madhu
"Y not Madhu..He will definitely marry someone na...Then y not me?I stand a chance too"pia
"Yeah...Go on and don't ever lose your confidence"Madhu Smirked
"Y you don't like him?",pia
"I don't believe in such things.ofcourse I like his movies but not crazy about stars.they won't have time for Thier family."Madhu
"But rk is different ..His first preference is always his family."pia
"Good for you"Madhu smiled

Next day
Evening

After Thier college they went back to room.madhu took a paper and started to write something.
"Hey what are you doing?"pia
"It's ..It's a letter"Madhu
"Letter at this century..Come on yaar"pia
"Han...I love to read and letter.the warmth spread by a letter cannot be given by a phone call.a letter is really precious."Madhu
"Stop...Your speech and say ..To whom you are writing this?"pia
"Hmm..Vivian"Madhu
"Vivian...Hmm...Who is he?"pia
"My ...My pen friend"Madhu
"Pen friend...thats nice...telle the story please"pia
"It's..Nothing yaar...When I was studying at10 the standard I saw an advertisement on paper .They want to promote letter writing among youth and so interested ones can send Thier address and they will give us an address and we can write letters ."Madhu
"And then you send your address and you got his address?"pia
"Yeah"Madhu
"Oh...So you keep writing letters for him since 10th"pia
"Yeah..He too wrote me letters"Madhu
"You are friends or more than that?"pia
"I don't know ...We never talked like that"Madhu
"Oh..Nice.well he is handsome?"pia
"I don't know...I never meet him"Madhu
"No photos?"pia
"No...He didn't ever asked me and I too"Madhu
"Story is interesting.."pia
Madhu smiled.
"Where he is from?"pia
"Mumbai"Madhu
"Oh...Girl so you have a chance to meet him...Hmm...Now I Kno y you prefer this college to MP"pia
"Han...I want to see him...But I am not courageous enough to face him"Madhu
"Well...What he is doing?"pia
"He is a photographer"Madhu
"Oh... So we have to search in all studious here"pia
"No...I got his address na"Madhu
"Hmm...So let's search him"pia
"No...I want to tell him about it.after that we will go to him"Madhu
_hmm...Ok..As you wish mam"pia smiled


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dharsii thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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First
Congrates for new story ka.
Nice start ka.
Pia didn't come for study..
Who is that vivian?..
is there any link between RK and Vivian?
Waiting for that..
Update soon.
Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for new story,
Interesting prologue,
Madhu is orphan,Rk is superstar,
Pia has crush on Rk,
Vivian is pen friend,both writes letters to each other,
both Rk & Vivian are same or different,
continue soon,
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Rach congrats on the new story.
Awesome start, interesting concept.
Loved the idea of pen friends.
Shall be waiting to read more of the story.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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New concept..
I hope Vivian must be Rk...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting
I think Vivian is rk
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats for this new story chechi..
nice concept..
i am sure vivian is our superstar rk..
continue soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting.
Pen friends concept
Eager to read more.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats di for new story loved it
Superb start
Is vivian and rk are same
I hope so

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