RISHBALA SS- Love You Gudiya (Last Part pg 15 dt 14/4) - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: SAI92

Feel bad for RK and Madhu is so ignorant,

Thank you for reading & commenting..😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Aishu awesome update, intriguing one.

Madhu did not listen to RK and give him promise.
Feeling bad for RK.
RK jumped from the cliff, i hope its not true, hope someone saves him.
Continue soon waiting to know what happens next.
Thanks for the PM dear.

Thank you ananya..will update last part soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Insaneniyu

Awesome update
That Maya is bitch how can she do this to rk n madhu hope rk is save

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sapnaf52

beautiful update aishu. .
madhu didn't believe in rk words. .
Maya soul in rk body ..and wants to kill madhu. .
to save madhu. .rk jump form cliff. .
aishu pls save rk. . 😔😔
thanks for pm

Thank you sapna..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujitharajan

Superb update dear and what happened to rk😲 I hope he is safe and madhu is a idiot ,she doesn't believe her husband's words😡

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi friends..here is the last part..pls read & drop your reviews..pls ignore mistakes😊



Love You Gudiya



Last Part


"madhu..madhu.."sultan shook her but she didn't open her eyes..he hold her in arms & went to baba's home..he saw baba chatting mantras & doing poojas..
"baba..rishab.."sultan's voice faltered..baba looks him & signaled him to lay madhu down..he lay madhu on the floor & baba sprinkle some water on her face..she opened her eyes & raise suddenly..
"rk..rk.."she screamed & looks sultan..
"sultan..i want my rk.."madhu..sultan cried..
"this all happend becoz of me..only i am the reason for his death..i didn't believed him..i am not worth for his love.."madhu yelled..
"he is alive.."baba told in return sultan & madhu looks him with hope...
"baba..."sultan..
"he is alive...he didn'nt dead.."baba..
"where is my rk baba..i want to see him..."madhu..
"i dont know where is he..but.."baba..
"what happend baba..?"madhu..
"his life is in danger.."baba..
"baba..what u mean.."sultan..
"u know y she keep him alive for this much years..becoz if he simply die she will not get him & look 12.00 am over..for this day she waited for this much year..if she make him her's today..then no one can save him...she will take him to her world.."baba..
"she will try his hard to get intimate with him today but if he overcome today then v can save him..her powers will remain only upto morning 4.& after that i can fetter her but anything happen wrong before that.."baba..
"no..i wont let anything happen to my rk...what i do.."madhu got worried..
"only u can u do anything madhu.."baba..madhu looks him..


In another place


Rk opened his eyes & looks around he raised & found himself in a small hut..he pressed his head..
"Rk..u woke.."he hears & look at the direction & saw madhu coming towards him..
"madhu..u..but how..how i reached hre & u.."rk..
"what u had done rk i really got scared u know how much i love u.."she hugs him & he hugs her back for 1 second her face turns into maya's & then again changed to madhu..
"sorry madhu..i had no other way to save u from that maya..y cant she understand i didn't loved her i loves u.."rk..she clenched her fist..
"what happend madhu..what r u thinking..?"rk..
"ha..nothing..i just.."maya..
"how v reached here & i jump off from the cliff na..then how i got saved..?"rk..
"that..hm..someone saved u..& when i came in search of u..i found u here..so.."she stammered..he feels mismatch in her words..
"i am sorry rk..i didn't believed u...but i am ready for it now..i am ready to become urs.."maya told & kissed on his cheek..


In baba's home


"what i can do baba..i will do anything for my rk.."madhu..
"i dont know where is he now but 1 thing is sure maya is with him in ur form.."baba..madhu gets shocked..
"& u know na what she want..the place is not visible for me so v cant reach there...but u can.."baba..
"madhu u r his wife so u only can do anything..there is an indirect connection b/w u two..becoz of this connection he finds maya & madhu that day...he can realise u..but she can create illusions...so.."baba..
"baba..but how can i reach there.."madhu..
"u dont want to go there ur mind will reach near him.."baba..sultan & madhu looked him totally confused..
"close ur eyes.."baba told & she did like that..baba chatted some mantras & madhu got a visual of rk & maya...maya above rk trying to get intimate with him madhu got worried..
"call him madhu.."baba told..
"Rk...Rk..."madhu..in hut maya was about to kiss him on his lips but rk pushed her..
"u..u r not my madhu.."rk shouted..
"rk what r u telling i am ur madhu.."maya..
"no..u r not..i can realize my madhu's presence u r not my madhu..my madhu is calling me..u r maya.."rk..maya changed to her original form...her eyes r red..blood flowing from her eyes..she transforms to a demon..madhu saw this got worried..
"tell him to come out from there.."baba..
"rk..hear me..come out from there.."madhu told & rk hears his her voice & runs out of the hut..maya followed him & stops him using her powers...rk stood there like a statue unable to move..
"u cant go away from me...today no one will stop me.."maya..
"u r really selfish..for ur own happiness u r spoiling ur sister's life..i hate u.."rk..maya slapped his & gripped his neck..
"if u dare to tell this once more..i love u & i want the same from ur part too.."maya..
"no..u didn't love me..u know the meaning of love...i am ready to give my life for madhu & she too..but u r trying to kill me & saying this is love..its not love maya...ur love is not true.."rk..
"stop this or else..i will kill u.."maya..
"u kill me what else u can do..after my death also i will love madhu only..i have no place for u in my heart..if u were not like at least i can see u like my best friend that i lost..u know after hearing ur story i feels pity for u..but..but u r not worth for it..because u r now a fiend..u r not that innocent girl that i met years before...u changed a lot..r u thinking i can love u..?never maya..becoz of ur ur selfishness u r forgot ur sister who loves u most..& once she was ur life & now u tried to kill her...is this the value of ur love..?"rk..maya took his hand off from his neck & changed to normal form..tears rolled down her eyes..
"dont u love me..?"she softly asked cupping his face..he looks her..
"u told right i became blink in love...i always loved to see u happy but becoz of me u suffered a lot.."she cried..
"maya.."rk called..
"u told true..no one can love me..i didn'nt got my papa's love..malikji also didn't loved but my madhu & ma loved me a lot more than anyone madhu loved me...she always supported me..but what i had done to her i tried to spoiled her life..mine was really a cursed life..i didn't got anything in my life..i thought at least i want u but...its my fate if that accident didn't happen that day..."maya..tears continually flowed from her eyes..
"but pls dont hate me rk...like u told pls see me like a good friend...& i couldn't tell my love to u before i going but now before going i want to tell one thing.."maya...rk looks her..
"dont make my madhu cry & u two want to stay together always.."maya.."& friends.."maya forwarded her hand..rk smiles & touched her hand & she disappears..he looks around but didn't found her..

In baba's home

madhu opened her eyes & said to baba"i cant see anything now.."
suddenly light starts to blink there & all looks around..& maya appears there..
"didu.."madhu..she is no violent anymore...she looks madhu & smiles..clock hits 4.00 am..
"i am ready to leave this world.."maya told wondering everyone..madhu thought that she killed rk so she is ready to go now..
"rk..u killed my rk.."madhu asked her with wet eyes..
"madhu.."she hears rk's voice & turns..she saw rk coming towards her..he came near her she hugged him..
"u r ok na.."she cupped his face & asked..
"i am ok.."rk..
"i am sorry madhu i did wrong with u..pls forgive me..bye..i will not come again to ur life.."maya..finally becoz of baba's help maya's soul got moksh..


After 4 year


"Madhu..madhu.."rk calls madhu..
"what happend rk.."madhu came there..
"look what maya had done.."rk said showing the little 3 year girl who spread her toys all around the room..
"she is a small kid na..leave it.."madhu carry her in arms..
"papa is bad...ma is good..."maya..
"oh...now u both became one & i am out.."rk..
"bla.."maya..
"ok..then i am going to eat this.."rk tells by taking a chocolate from his shirt's pocket..
"wow..chocolate.."maya jerked & tries to come down..madhu leaves her down..she runs to rk & told...
"ma is bore..papa is good..give it pls.."maya..rk gave it to maya & she kissed on his cheeks..she took a doll from the floor & showed it to rk..
"look papa..this my new gudiya..do u like gudiya..?"maya..
"hm..i love gudiya.."rk said looking madhu..she looks him & smiles..maya leaves from their for playing & madhu too tried to go but rk stops her by hold her by her waist..
"rk..what is this leave me.."madhu..
"y..??"rk..
"leave me.."madhu..
"u know one thing beevi..i think our maya feel loneliness so dont v want to give her companion.."he winked..
"now..??"madhu..
"v can try now & will get the result after 10 months.."rk..
"u shameless.."madhu blushed..
"aahhann...my beevi is wild than me & calling me shameless..jungli billi.."rk..she pinched on his nose..
"ouch.."rk..
"rk..now ur nose is looking like a tomato.."madhu laughed..
"you.."he tried to pinch her but she runs from there...he runs behind her & caught her & back hugged her...
"Rk.."madhu..
"shh.."rk scooped her in his arms & placed her on bed..
"i love u r..."before she could complete he palmed her mouth..
"tell my name.."rk..
"rk.."madhu..
"my name.."rk..madhu smiles & told"rishab.."
he kissed on her forehead..
"i love u gudiya.."rk..
"i love u too rishab.."madhu..
"aahhaann..."rk..




-----The End (Only This Story Not Their Life)-----




Thank you so much for all my friends,readers,silent readers for your great love & support❤️

--Aiswarya--



Edited by aishu007 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice And Happy end Aishu..
Finally Maya realized her mistakes..Because of her love,She hurts RK and Madhu..
Rishbala patch up...
Maya is so cute...
Thanks for pm..
Edited by dharsii - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved it from start to end..
the heart changing of Maya u described was suprb...
Write more...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Happy ending aishu.so at last Maya realized her mistake .She got moksha .Rk a Madhu named Thier daughter Maya and she is a little cute girl and love last scene😳.thanks for such a lovely story.thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update,
finally Maya realized what ever she is doing is wrong,she is gone from their lives,
Rishbala named their daughter as Maya,she is so cute,
lovely ending,
thanks for the pm

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