Rishbala FS 'Tum Hi Ho' ||COMPLETED#PG.34||(15/03)

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: sapnaf52

Congrats aani for new story. .
superb start. .
rk is broken, alone man. .no one care him. .
for reducing for pain he come pub and drink. .
rk lost his mother when he was 10. ..and mohan think radha died because of rk. .
poor rk he lost both mother and father. ..
dipali. ..hate her..also she betrayed rk also and choose sultan. .
no one care rk ..
he have so much inner pain ..the outer wound didn't give him pain. ..
madhu is singer. ..she do part time job for her mother treatment. .
madhu nurse his wound ..
after listening madhu words. .rk went his mansion with out drinking. ..
thanks for pm. ..
update soon. .

Thanks sap.. Yeah.. Rk was lonely from chilhood.. With no one by hus side..
So he grown up like this..
Right.. His inner pain is much more than outer world..
And madhu too, a cute thing..
Thankyou :)

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Aaniya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Have replied to all comments :)

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Aaniya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

Thankyou guyz :) have replied to all comments in previous pages.. and
as i mentioned before too, This concept is different, and hence, no tragic end..!! be rest assured..😳

Tum Hi Ho
Part-2

*After some days*

As usual madhu found him in his usual place but without drinks. She noticed, from past few days, he use to come here, either he dont drink, or drink occasionally.
After collecting tips, she walked to him, as he waits for her, like every other day.
"Come out.." He whispers to her, in ears & walks out. Madhu's breath hitched as she feels his breath on her skin as he whispers to her. Taking a deep breath, she walks too, following him.
They came over his car, which he parked across the road. This place is usually silent & perfect for someone who wants to be away from chaos.
"I joined my father's firm again.." He told her, leaning on his car, looking aimlessly at the sky, as she stood next to him. He dont know why, but after that night talking to her, he thought to give himself a chance. A chance to looks at this world from her view point, and find himself from her perspective. Each night he came here, and narrates to her, what happened all day along or what he thought, & as usual, she never judged him. She silently listen to him, and parts away with that beautiful smile on her lips.
"Thats good right.." She said.
"But i dont feel like working." He looks at her. Ya, he dont like his father taunting him, his father"s employee behaving oddly with him.
"There is no easy way for everything" madhu reasoned. Yes, when u starts something new, useless u have patience & time, u cant succeed.
"Hmm.." He again leans back.
"Can i go ?" She asked, as he nods his head. She turn away to go, when he spoke suddenly remembering something.
"Suno.."
She stops as she hears him, he normally spoke this word when he wants to say something in last moment. She turns to him, as he walks to her.
"I wanted to ask something.." He said "what have u thought about ur music ?"
"Music ?" She looks perplexes.
"Ya, i told u thousand of times, as u got the best voice, so why are u wasting it here ?" He crossed his hands over his chest.
"No.. Am happy with the way i am" she lower her eyes. Her dreams are big, but she knows that she cant reach it.
"But someone told me, that unless u try to find urself u cant discover urself" rk step close to her as he spoke. She looks at him with those soulful eyes, which soothes his heart.
"Dont u want to go in singing field ?" He asked gently.
"I do but, its not possible"
"Do u want to become a singer ? World's best singer ?" He asked again ignoring her negative comment.
"No, that beyond my reach" madhu fervently shook her head, and turns to go, as he holds her wrist.
"Why dont u give audition ?" He asked pulling her close to him. From the very first day he can see, the fascination in her eyes about music.
"I cant, i belong to middle class family. I have some responsibility, and i dont have funds to spend on auditions. There are other important things for me to do" she said softly as she fidgets with his hands to make him lose his hold on her, while he stares at her.
"I want to launch u in industry" he said after a moment, firm with his decision.
"U what ?" Madhu asked baffled. What is he talking about.
"Yes, i will launch u in music industry" rk said with smile sure of his decision, as he leaves her hand.
"No, u are kidding.." She whispers as she turn around to run away from him.
"Am not done yet" he again holds her arms, as he got her motive to go away from him.
"Its not possible, u are joking with me." She said, her voice soft but angry.
"I am serious" Rk sighed looking at her.
"U are not influencial, and in industry it works on influence, i know about it" she argued. Rk looks at her realising that she don't know about him, she dont know who he is.
"Am part of them. But guess, u didnt recognise me." He said leaving her, stepping back, as madhu looks at him confused.
"Am Rishab kundra, Elder son of Mohan Kundra, Kundra Music Life" he looks at her with smile as her eyes go round.
"The music director mohan kundra ?" She mouth formed "O".
"Yes" he confirmed, as she gasped.
"No, i cant.." She sputter as she turns on her heels, when Rk again blocks her ways, and holds her gently against the car.
"Firstly, stop running from me, and secondly, what is the problem ? U dont have any idea, on how good u are. Trust me once, u deserve lot more." He tried to make her understand.
"But why will u do this for me ?" She asked.
"So, it about status ?" He got her point, as he keeps one hand against the car beside her, hovering over her "all, these days, i was just ME to u, u were with me, not even acknowledging who or what i am. Please let it be like that, i dont care about my status"
He said to her, yes, his status, money, etc.. Never gave him happiness, never people looked at him for what he is. He is always Mohan Kundra's son for the world.
She somewhere believes his words, cause she has seen his vulnerable days.
"So, let me help u" he proposed, and she smiles. A smile which brightens his world.
"Ur voice need to be polish, meet me tomorrow at 10 in morning. We will first go to the Music Trainer. After few days of proper training, u will give the audition for debut" he tells her excitedly.
"Ok, where i need to come ?" She asked happily. She is very happy, her dreams came into light, afterall.
"Here only, i will pick u up" and they made the rest of plan for the day.

~~~~~~

"Ready for it !" Rk asked her enthusiastically, before entering the music trainer, Kuku bhatia's room.
"Do u think, i can ?" She asked still nervous.
"U will !" He said, and there was certain conviction his his voice. Madhu gave him a small smile as they enter the room.
"Kuku uncle" Rk happily hugs a fatherly figure.
"Rishab, good to see u here, son" kuku said pleased.
"I got someone" he said as he pulled madhu forward holding her hand "The future ruling voice of our industry"
Rk smiled looking at madhu, as madhu nervously stands before the two men.

~~~~~~

*After few days*

"U wont believe what kuku uncle said" she tells rk excitedly as they walks in market place, with bags, as madhu has to buy groceries.
"What ?" Rk adjust his shades. In public he again disguises himself.
"He said i have the calibre. I can be a good singer" madhu tells him pleased.
"And when all these days i was telling the same, u were deaf ears to me" he teased, as madhu sheepishly smiles at him.
"Pani puri.. Come" madhu points at street food stall & drags Rk with her.
"Bhaiyaa, 2 plates" she ordered.
"No, u eat " rk denied.
"Why ?" She looks at him.
"I never had eaten in open.. These .. Ermm.. Pain puri.." He said giving weird looks at panipuris.
"There is always the first time naa" she laughed happily seeing his expressions, and she took the first pani puri from her plate & stuff it in his mouth. Rk covers his mouth with his palm, and chew on it making weird faces.
"What ?" She frowns.
"Its actually good" he looks at her amazed, as he took one more from her plate & popped it in his mouth.
"So, what u do apart from singing in pub ?" He asked her as they eat. They had never discussed their personal life.
"I help in home, and i work in shifts also.." She replied, stuffing the last pani puri in her mouth.
"And studying ?" He asked as madhu pays the money.
"I left" she said as rk sharply looks at her.
"Why ? And u are very young.. " rk exclaimed shocked.
"Umm.. U wont understand" she hesitated.
"I want to know" he said with authority.
"My parents, both used to work. Then maa's health crises raised, cause of which she had to left her job. Only dad's income wasn't sufficient, so we thought it best to invest in my brother's studies rather than me"
"U have brother too ?" He interrupts her.
"Yes, he is 12 years, so, i got scholarship for two subsequent years then in 3rd year i didn't got it, so i left" madhu ended as they resumes walking.
"What u last studied ?" Rk asked after listening her.
"2nd year graduation"
"And what is ur age ?"
"20 years, if i continued, then i would be in my 3rd year" madhu sighed.
"Madhu.." He fetch her attention as they stood near his car "Continue with ur studies, i will fund it"
"No.." She instantly denied.
"I guess, this is ur favourite word, but am serious" he crossed his hand over his chest.
"I cant take money from u" she has sternly. She has self respect.
"U can pay it back after u become a singer, and am ur friend, so i have right to help u" he tried to convince her.
"Thats why i cant take, cause when money comes between friends, friendship drowns" she spoke "Please, i cant, please try to understand me"

He looks at her, as he felt it right. When money comes in relationship it spoils relation. Who can better understands it, other than him ?
His father was money minded, cause of which he couldnt spend his time with his family, when he & his mother needed his father, and cause of his absence only his mother got into that deadly incident, and his father did nothing other than to blame him & took away his childhood. Only if his father didnt run behind money, they could be a happy family today.

"Rk.." Madhu shook him out of his thought.
"Hun !" He looks at her "ok, but after u become singer, u will continue ur studies"
In return, madhu smiled brightly at him. A smile, which brighten his dark heart. Her innocent talk, her smile, her values, he find his home in her, he begins to find himself in her, his destination in her. Unconsciously he raised his hand to her cheeks, lightly caressing it, as madhu looks at him wide eyes & quickly step back.
Rk smiled at her, shaking his head at himself & he moves to get inside the car, to drop her.

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Rk smiles as he hears her singing in the pub, sitting in his usual place. She looks at him for a moment & then turn her gaze away. Her voice has gotten polished, he can identify that. The next day is her recording audition & he has made all arrangement for it. Madhu ended her song, and starts collecting tips. She dont like it, when men look at her, touch her hand while giving money, but her needs made her to bear it.
She moved to a table, as a man gesture to her to take the tip. As she forward her hand, he grips her hands, while caressing her fingers, smiling wickedly at her. Madhu's heart started hammering in her chest as she tried to take away her hand. This is not the first time that someone is misbehaving with her. She looked for sikky, as he is the one who always assure her safety.
"Please leave me.." She softly feebly & desperately.
"I can give u more money.." The man cleared his intension at her, as madhu shook her head in negative trying to free her hand from his grip.
"Say yes" the man said, as he tug on her arms.
"Please.." Her eyes filled up with tears as she looks for sikky, but right at the moment, she felt her hands being free as a hard punch landed on that man's face. Madhu looks up to see Rk standing between her & the man. He was watching her from the bar counter, and when he saw the man holding her hands forcibly & the tears threatening her eyes, he couldn't control himself.

"Dare u touch her" rk hissed at the man.
"Saale.." The man abuse, as he attacks Rk. Seeing the situation worsen, madhu runs to get sikky & mukund.
Soon they came, and pulled Rk away from the man.
"How dare u touch this girl" sikky charged at the man as they took the man away from the crowd.
By now, madhu's face is covered with tears, as Rk looks at her angrily. She gulped getting the fierce looks from him. He grips her hand, took her bag from corner & drags her out of the pub.

"U will not work here, anymore" he declared angrily running his hairs on his hairs, as he throws her bag inside his car.
"But.." Madhu begins to protest.
"NO means No.." He raised his voice at her "tomorrow is ur audition, so focus on that"
Madhu didnot said anything, as she thought, after audition she may get offers & then she wont need to do these all. As she was thinking she felt a hand, brushing off her tears from her cheeks. She raise her eyes to find rk standing close to her, looking at her intently.
"I dont want these tears in ur eyes ever" he spoke huskily to her, making her heart flutter. She down cast her eyes feeling his gaze.
"Sit, i will drop u home" rk said moving back to driver seat as madhu follows him.

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"Madhu relax" rk holds her hands, as they stands in recording studio. Seeing all the arrangements madhu became nervous.
"Am scared" she said softly "i cant do it"
"Look at me.." He pulls her towards him looking in her eyes
"we have left this cant word long back. U worked so hard for it, its ur dream & here is ur only chance, u dont have any other option.
U have dreamt of it, and now live in this dream" he provides her with much needed motivation.
"Madhubala malik" the head, Abhay Kapoor called for madhu to start recording.
"Go.." Rk gently smiles at her giving her a gentle push to move. Madhu looks at him nervously & begins to drag her feet.

"Suno.." He calls her, and unknowingly a smile appear on her lips as she hear him. She turns to him, Rk strolled to her while holding her gaze. As he neared her, he circle his arms around her waist, pulling her to himself, hugging her. He closed his eyes, feeling his body pressed against her. Madhu too wrapped her arms around his neck savouring the moment.
"Am here" he spoke near her ears, breaking the hug. "Believe in urself"
Nodding her head at him, she walks to the recording glass wall. Rk looks at her standing in front of glass wall, along with all crew members. Madhu looks at him in his eyes, getting the energy from him, as she got the cue & starts singing.

"mein jaan ye waar du, har jeet v har du..
Kimat ho koi tujhe, beintehaan pyaar du..
(I'll give this life,lose every victory,whatever be the price,I'll give you limitless love)

Haasrate ab meri tumse hai jaa mili
Tum dua ab meri, aakhri ban gaye.."
( my wishes have now gone to meet you,you have now become my last prayer)

As expected madhu got the correct tone, and everyone present there got spellbound hearing her. Rk smiled as madhu hold on his gaze.

"Hasi ban gaya, haan naami ban gaye..
Tum mere aasma, meri zameen ban gaye"
( you have become (my) laughter,you have become the wetness (of my eyes),you have become my skyand my earth.)

She dropped her eyes, as she sings the last lines. Soon the room flooded with loud claps. Madhu was still inside the glass wall, as Abhay kapoor turns to Rk.
"Really appreciative, she is a good talent" abhay said.
"I Told u, so let finalise her dates" Rk said elated.
"Dude, upto recording & all its okk, but dates.. Its too early" abhay disapprove.
"But we talked about it, u said u will give her break" Rk became serious.
"I know, but they are many in line, and they have recommendation & sponsor while she has none" abhay reasoned.
"How does it matter, she is best, and once she came out in open, we will get sponsors too" Rk said agitated. Madhu looks at the heated conversation between Rk & abhay, she cant hear what they are speaking but she can tell from their expression that they are arguing.
"It dont work in that way, there are thousands of good voices in our country, but its not easy to get the chance" abhay said.
"Abhay, u agreed with me on launching her" rk clenched his jaws.
"Cause i thought u will bring recommendation from ur dad on her. This kundra Music Life is his, and he decides whom to launch & whom to not"

And at that moment Rk feels that he is nothing, absolutely nothing. He has never done anything for himself. He always peeped from his father's back
He has never tried to stand on his own, he had never tried to make his identity, to Make RISHAB KUNDRA, known to the world. He was so lost in his past suffering that he never lived in present, and now when he has his present & future in front of him, he could do nothing for her. For every damn thing he need permission of his father, and he know mohan would never launch madhu cause of her background, as she cant pay him in bucks.

Breaking from his thoughts, he looks up at madhu to find her in teary eyes, who is looking at him through the glass wall. At that moment his heart crumpled seeing her. At that moment, only one thought came to his mind, he would be able to fulfil her dreams only if he stand on his own, and its only would get possible when The Rishab Kundra would step forward. At that moment, he decided to set everything right, he got his aim in life, he got what he wants from life & no matter what, he will get it.

As madhu said the other day, he needs to fight & now onwards, he will fight. She asked him to come in light & look at the world. He got his light to lit up his dark dull world, its her, she is his light which illuminates him, and he would do anything & everything for her !!

"Madhu.." He called for her, as he saw her running out, with tears stricken face. Worriedly he ran behind her.
"Madhu wait.." He pulls her to a corner as he holds her by her arms. She didnt said anything, as she give in to her tears. He pulled her in his arms, hugging her, as she cried burying her face on his chest.
"I shouldnot have dreamt for anything. Am not made for this." Her muffled voice reached his ears.
"No, madhu,its not u.. Its them, and their policy" he pulls away from her, as he makes her looks at him "Being a part of them, i never saw their real face."
He wipes the tears off her eyes as he cups her face.
"Today i promise u madhu, i will get u to ur dreams. Its not end, its the beginning. I will give u everything which u deserve, i promise" he promised her with conviction in his eyes. There was a strange stubbornness in his eyes, to do everything for her, a determination to give her All happiness of this world.
Leaning onto her, he kiss away the tears of her eyes, as he hugs her close to himself, and slowly her cries died down.
"Madhubala.." With the angry hiss, they part away. Madhu step back in fear seeing her father, Malik standing before her, looking at them angrily.
"Papa .." She mumbled scared on what her father is thinking seeing her with Rk.
"Shut up !" Malik roared at her, as madhu flinched back "so, they were saying the truth that u are lying to us & roaming around with this man"
Seeing madhu like that, rk intervene.
"Sir, please, i can explain"
"I dont want to talk to u. U are from rich family, its normal for u to get a girl & throw them, but its a disgrace for middle class people like us, and she knows all of it still she.."
At malik's speculation both Rk & madhu shuddered.
"No papa.. U are thinking it all wrong" madhu speak up to save her dignity.
"Not a word from u, and come with me" malik drag madhu along with him.
"Sir please, listen.." Rk stops malik as he looks at madhu.
"U are taking it wrong. We are here for her recording, she wants to become a singer, and i was just helping her"
"So did u made are singer ?" Malik asked mockingly.
"No sir.. I" rk stammered.
"These big dreams are for high class people. Please,i request u to not play with her and leave her alone" malik folded his hand in front of Rk, as he looks down, while madhu looks at her father with teary eyes.

~~~~~~

*After few days*

*knock-knock*

"Sikky bhaiyaa.." Madhu banged on sikky's door asking him to come out.
"Madhu wait.." Sikky runs to his door to open it.
"Madhu.." He asked seeing her, at his door, tears were on verge to spill out from her eyes.
"I want job. Of whatever kind, i dont care. Anywhere, i just want a job" she said with paused trying to sound herself strong. Sikky looks at her sympathically as he nodded his head at her. Madhu witnessed her maa selling her gold bangles for money. She realised what a fool she was to believe rk's words & went out to became singer. When her reality check is her home, and her current situation. She dared to dream, she did stupidity to pursue it by getting influenced by Rk, even she left her job cause he told her, but now no more.. !!

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" Teri khataa hai mere jiyaa
Un pe bharosa kyuun tune kiya

(It's your mistake o my heart,Why did you believe him)

Madhu sings, with closed eyes. Sikky has gotten a singing job for her in another pub. But, it hurts, what all she dreamt, and now where she stands. She opens her eyes, to find Rk standing at the entrance looking at her furiously. He was keeping tracks on her, and he got to know from sikky that she is here.
Madhu divert her eyes from him, as she moved to the back stage. Rk quickly follows her & pulled her out of the pub in vacant place.
"Leave me.. Please.. Leave.." Madhu wriggle under his hold.
"What are u doing ? I TOLD u not to ever come in such place" Rk shouted at her as he pushed her to near by wall.
"AND DO WHAT ?" Madhu shouted at him, with angry tears sliding down from her eyes. Rk looks at her shocked, she is always the kittenish soft, she has never spoke loudly with anyone & here she has raised her voice at him. Madhu gulp the lump formed in her throat & roughly wipes the tears from her face.
"Look" she started trying to sound composed "ur & my world are different. Once i followed ur ways & it lead me nowhere. I have family to look after, i have some responsibility, so.." She folded her hands in front of him, as Rk looks at her with sadden eyes
"Please, let me be as i am, i dont want anything, no singer, no dreams, nothing. My life is very simple, please let it be" she said softly, and without waiting for his answer she walk past him, as Rk kept looking at her retreating back.

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"Bittuji, i cant go on like this.." Rk said to bittuji as he drinks from the bottle.
"Chief, am trying right.. And we got financier too, Balraj, he is ready to finance us, have some patience chief" bittuji said to him keeping his hand on his shoulder.
"Dont u think its too late to start my career, i wasted all these years" rk suddenly realised it.
"U are going back there again. Dont look back, once u have taken decision so be firm in it. Time was, is, will be always there, it depends on u, whether u want to walk with time or stagger back"
"I want to give her everything bittuji, i cant see the tears in her eyes" rk confessed remembering madhu's tears stricken face. And bittuji smiled, finally seeing that 10 years boy coming out from his shell.
Rk always needed a hand who can pull him out of his darkness. Mohan should be that person but now, if not him, then there is madhu, who is unknowingly influencing Rk.

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I havent wrote update of hasina kamina, & gigolo's love..
Will try to update that soon..

Plz Like & drop ur views on this one..

Thanks,
Aaniya :)

Edited by --Evil_Angel-- - 8 years ago

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Aiswarya

@aishu007

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Res..

unres..

yay..yay..today i commented first..it was my greatest wish to comment on your story first..& i did it ⭐️

now comming to the story..

Great update aan..

madhu went for the audituon and impressed by all..

but her fate made her came back to that pub 😭

& shamseer misunderstood rk & madhu..

but now rk is ready to stand by his own leg..

i am sure he can it..madhu will become a great singer & rk will help her for that..

liked the action scene which rk puched the man who misbehaved with madhu..

update next soon dear..

Edited by aishu007 - 8 years ago

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Superb update dear

Loving this story

So shamsher misunderstood them

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yahoii

@yahoii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

loved the update...!!!!!!! i am really loving this concept..!!!! awEsome work👏👏👏

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yahoii

@yahoii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

hey..n can u tell me the name of your other works??

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Insaneniyu

@Insaneniyu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#88

Awesome update
Hope rk gets stable in his life n would b able to help madhu

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kichu.m74

@kichu.m74

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Posted: 8 years ago

#89

First time commenting!! Love this story & the update!! Beautifully written!!You made Ashique 2 story way better than original!!! please continue soon!!'

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sapana

@sapnaf52

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Posted: 8 years ago

#90

awesome update. .aani
rk can't see tears in madhu eyes. .
for helping her he thinks first he make his own identity. .
and he is going to do ..
Malik misunderstood them ..
thanks for pm. .

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