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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: keerthiprasad

Nice update Dr ...loved it
Madhu took rishabh for shopping bcz she know that he hates waiting in the mall...
Mama's boy rishabh is...
He also took sexy dress for madhu and she seduced him also
They didn't waste even a single chance to set scores...

Thanks for the PM Dr
All the best...

Thank u.they will realize thier love soon.will update asap
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update diii...,rishbala's first shopping is superb and their fight too...update next part soon...thanks for the PM dii...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update
Both are possessive about each other
Last scene was awesome
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aishu007

Nice update diii...,rishbala's first shopping is superb and their fight too...update next part soon...thanks for the PM dii...

Thank u,last episode today
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: v.p.joshi

Superb update

Both are possessive about each other
Last scene was awesome

Thank u.updating last episode.don't throw tomatoes on me...😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Married To A Child
last part

"sikky you heard that song "trish
"yeah it's from rks room I think"sikky
"song...late night"trish
"they are newly married na...so trying something different "sikky wincked
"different way to fight"trish
"no Trish I saw them...kissing,u r mistaken"sikky
"no sikky,I saw them fighting again and calling abusive words at eachother.at college rk made her stand on the desk"trish
"I will ask him tomorrow,now sleep"sikky closed his eyes.

Morning

"I want to talk with u "sikky
He sat on the couch, to on bed and madhu stood near the bed.
"hmm...rk... Is everything normal between you two"sikky
"what do u mean?"rk
"no...Trish told me that u two were acting infront of us like a happy couple."sikky
"well... Bhai...I never lied to u about anything...its true,v hate eachother.bit don't want Mom to worry...so"rk
"but then y you married"sikky
Rk explained his plans.
"oh wow gr8 plans rishu...,.r u two small kids?don't u have any brains to think.its not a matter of few days.it's a life long relation.
How many days u are supposed to live like this?"sikky
"it's obvious for madhu to behave like this, age is still a teenager.and u rishu,u r25 and don't know how to behave."sikky
"Bhai..,. I..."rk
"yes.,.. He is a jerk "madhu
"look this is what I said...she never know to respect me "rk
"respect u...u r such a man who doesn't deserves anything,I spoiled my whole life"madhu
"look madhu u made me live my life like a pervert"rk
"do I asked u to go with other girls"madhu
"do I asked u to wear mangalsutra and sindhoor to school and said those girls to tease u"rk
They glared at each other.
"hey guys do I asked u to fight again?"sikky

"ok one question,when u two were living in the lovedale you had feeling for eachother?"sikky
"yes I truely loved her "rk
"yes I loved him too"madhu
"and your love lost in a sec.when u realized eachother.them what type of love was it?just lust"sikky
"no it it was lust,we were together for months but we didn't cross the bar"rk
"look rishu true love never die out,it will be in our heart for ever.do u have any feelings for her?"sikky
Rk looked at madhu and remained mum.
"madhu u had any feeling for him?"madhu nodded no.
"she is lying, I saw her threatening the sales girl"rk
"I heard u telling my madhu to sultan"madhu
"you seducing bala"rk
"you Casanova kundra"madhu
"stop it"sikky sgouted.
"I think u two cannot live together,so think about a divorce.I will convince ma.my friend is a lawyer and if u need help inform me"sikky

Few days later

Madhu was crying."what happened? "Rk
"nothing"madhu
"tell me na sani.."rk he sat near her."r u going to divorce me rk?"madhu
"you hate me na, then it's good get rid of me"rk
"yes I hate u,but I can't go"madhu
"y sani?"rk
"then who will teach me these difficult formulas at home"madhu
"thats true,u call me sani when u need help, I will come and teach u"rk
"ok, rk but.., u will marry again na,then your wife will allow u to come to me?"madhu
"hmm...I won't marry again"rk
"han...u were going live like earlier,pub and girls"madhu
"no,..sani I won't"rk
"will u go with sultan?"rk
"eww...sultan?never"madhu
"u stay at lovedale?"rk
"yeah I love to"madhu
"tomorrow that lawyer will come "rk
"han...I am scared"madhu
"for what sani?"rk
"I don't know"madhu"will you allow me to sleep on your chest"
"yes come sani"rk
Madhu placed her head on his chest and hug him.rk felt hhotness of her tears on his chest.tears rolled down fRom rks eyes and madhu saw his.she wiped his tears and kissed in his cheek.Rk wiped madhus tears and kissed her.


Morning

"rk kiss me"madhu
Rk kissed her passionately they deepened the kiss till they felt breathless.they parted for a few seconds and kissed again.
Trishna saw them kissing and knocked the door."lawyer is here,r u sure you want divorce?"trishna
They nodded, trishna left, madhu kissed rk again.he kissed on her cheeks, her jawlinrs,her neck and nibbled,madhu moaned.after few minutes trishna came back and said lawyer is waiting.
"yes, v r coming "rk
Trishna left they again started thier work.to kissed on her lips.his hands caressed her b****t .madhu moaned and sighed,
Sikky came and saw the scene "oh... God what are they doing, r they crazy"sikky
He knocked on the door."tell lawyer to come here."rk
"r u sure?"sikky
"yes bhai"rk
They continued.lawyer knocked at the door
"yes come in"rk still holding madhu.
"am l on a wrong room? U two want divorce."lawyer asked astonishingly
"yes where is the papers"rk
"sign it Sir and madam"lawyer
"you sign first"madhu
"no you sign firsr"rk
"no. "madhu
Rk took the pen and dropped it"u sign sani I cant"rk
"no rk I can't "madhu
"y not"lawyer
"I love him/her"they said in unison
"what? "they looked at eachother and hugged.they began to kiss.
"oh God...these youngsters...shameless"lawyer left.
"sani u meant that"rk
"yes honey"madhu "and u"
"yes I love u seducing bala"
"I love u Casanova kundra"


Night

"today is our suhaagraat sani,were do u want it, here or lovedale?"
"no at hill top"madhu
"our first kiss"they said in unison


Hill top


Rk picked up madhu in his hand and placed on bed."sani I think we should have three children,two girls and one..."before he could complete.madhu kissed on his mouth and deepened it.she fiercely opened his shirt and the buttons flew in air.
"aahaan jungli billy"
"you want wild na..."madhu
"yes honey"rk
They ripped open eachother.they nibbled and kissed leaving marks on each other.
"May I sani..."
"do it fast"madhu
"but it will hurt"rk
"don't worry man...rk please I can't wait anymore"
"ouch..."madhu
"I warned u.now relax, don't move,kiss me"rk
"yeah I am okay"madhu
"how do u feel it sani"rk
"it hurts but it's good, I love you Casanova kundra"madhu
"I love you seducing bala"

The end



Thank you everyone for your valuable comments and supports. Thank u my silent readers for liking my story.I know I ended the story very fast.it's just I can't handle both at a time.


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Posted: 8 years ago
part 10 ..
superb update. ..
what a nick name. ..
seducing Bala. .&...casanova Kundra. . 😆
radhaji is rk weakness. .
rishbala went for shopping. ..
what a dress rk choose. . 😉
and he start flirting ..with sales girl. .
and madhu jealous. ..
even see take out her gun and pointed to sales girls. .lol
rk and sultan meet. .. 👏
rk kick that sullu. .."happy "so much. .
he deserves it. ..
and last. ..song. .
raat akheli hai " madhu comes in her seducing form. . 😳..
and kiss. .. ❤️
loverly part. ..di
thanks for pm
Edited by sapnaf52 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
last part.. 😲 seriously !!!
wants more. .part di. ..

crazy part. .di. .
both are totally crazy. .. [:p]
they are madly, insane love each other. ..but not realise. rk tell sikky whole story. .
poor boy he come between this crazy couple. . 😆
rishbala are fighting like children. ..
sikky try hard but in last he give divorce idea. .
madhu didn't want to divorce because rk help in solving difficult question lolz 😆
kiss. . 😳...kiss 😳...go on. .
first trishna, then sikky in last lawyer ..haha. .
finally they realise love. .
they went hill top for their suhagraat ❤️..
crazy update. .di
want more parts. ..
miss this crazy couple. ..
thanks for pm
Edited by sapnaf52 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
I thought this story will continue for atleast five more parts but it ended in next part which is shocker for me
Btw superb update dear loved it
And i m gonna miss this mad rishbala jodi
Edited by v.p.joshi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sapnaf52

part 10 ..
superb update. ..
what a nick name. ..
seducing Bala. .&...casanova Kundra. . 😆
radhaji is rk weakness. .
rishbala went for shopping. ..
what a dress rk choose. . 😉
and he start flirting ..with sales girl. .
and madhu jealous. ..
even see take out her gun and pointed to sales girls. .lol
rk and sultan meet. .. 👏
rk kick that sullu. .."happy "so much. .
he deserves it. ..
and last. ..song. .
raat akheli hai " madhu comes in her seducing form. . 😳..
and kiss. .. ❤️
loverly part. ..di
thanks for pm

Thank you dear.I too like thier Nick name and thier crazyness.

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