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Posted: 8 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Congrats on the new story and Welcome to the Forum dear.

Its such a beautiful story, read all the parts in one go, in love with this story, simple and sweet love story of Rishbala. One wrong number can give relationship of a life time.

thanks my dear... 😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: RijaMalik

awesome story..

loved it..
RK n mayu have cosmic connection😆
mayu is soo sweet n innocent n sweet.
they both are habbitual of taking with eachother lets see how this habbit led them togeather

continue soon

thanks dear... cosmic 😉 lets see what happens further... will continue soon ...😊😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 7

Mayuri happily kept the phone back in her bag. Smilingly she looked in the mirror...why was she being so happy about, she ponder over. Her smile vanished the moment she thought about the consequences of this act.

What the hell was she doing? Talking to a stranger man on the phone and asking him to call after midnight.

It is considered disgraceful if a girl does that, she always heard these things from her Grandmother who at times warned her not to speak to young men and not to look at any young men in the society.

What if her family gets to know about this call? They will bury her alive in the ground without even asking her anything.

How can she keep any sort of relation with a man? Firstly her Father would kill the boy and then behead her. Mayuri had seen violence since childhood, especially her Father being the head of the town, every other person in the town is very submissive to her family.


Mayuri reminiscence every time she goes to Malikapur no one dares to even look at her and young men automatically get scared due to her family's reputation.

She would never prefer this stranger to get into any sort of trouble because of her.

All thoughts came shooting around her little brains and she made up her mind not to speak to this stranger anymore. She wiped her face off the sweat.

For a while she got carried away without thinking that she belonged to an illiterate and violent family who will never spare her for this. She cannot cheat on her family anymore.

She took a deep breath and wore her heels again.


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Mayuri walked in the garden and Trishna waved at her "your turn"

Mayuri smiled and offered her hand for henna... her mind was webbed in the anonymous voice that was creating the snares of emotions inside her.

She only spoke to him three of four times and how can a stranger seem to be so close, so close that she always wants to talk to him. His voice kept echoing in her ear... she can't forget the voice.

"Mayuri"

After few seconds she heard her name... "Yes" she said all puzzled looking up...

Her mother stood watching her "what are you thinking? I am asking have you eaten something"

Mayuri nodded, she recalled about keeping some food in the plate and then she rushed back. "No, Ma I kept my plate on the side and"

"Ok, let me get something for you" Meena left

Mayuri looked at Trishna who was on the top of the world... "Trishna, can I ask you one thing?"

Trishna adjusted her dress "of course, what is it?"

Mayuri hesitantly looked around then came a little closer to her sister "have you seen your would be husband before?"

Trishna was simply astonished at Mayuri's questions "what? Are you serious?"

Trishna laughed aloud "I can't believe, you can joke...O my" Trishna kept on giggling but Mayuri gave a broad smile instead, thinking not to ask another question as people might think she's either dumb or very clever.

Trishna on the other hand thought Mayuri was joking and felt happy...

"Oh my God...Mayuri. You made tears come out of my eyes...I am laughing so much" Trishna went on for chortling another couple of minutes when she heard Vishal in front of her...

"Trishna...my love" Vishal stood in front of her... Trishna smilingly embraced him... then she looked at Mayuri who was watching this "this is my would be husband Vishal"

Mayuri's mouth drop open shockingly, just one day before the wedding and Trishna is embracing him. Mayuri didn't wanted to pretend herself as an idiot...

"Vishal this is my cousin Mayuri" Trishna introduced them

"Hi Mayuri" Vishal forwarded his hand for a hand shake... but Mayuri instead folded her hands to greet him...

"O Namaste" Vishal said looking at the timid girl who didn't folded her hands completely and saw the henna on her hands, "no worries" he said looking at the henna...

Mayuri smiled a little, in her whole life she has never touched a man, and thankfully the henna on her hands made them think she can't handshake because of that.

She saw them greeting other people, then looked at her hands that had a beautiful design carved till her fair arms. Joyfully she kept gazing her hands when she realised a little prick at the back. She forgot to pin the dupatta and her Choli with a safety pin that had fallen lose some time ago...

She thought of going back to her room, but she has to find her mother or someone to pin that together, otherwise it will fall lose and also the pin might hurt her...

Mayuri slowly walked towards the front side of the bungalow, she realised her Lehnga was too heavy for her thin waist, and she need to make it more tight.

With small steps she reached the entrance of the main door when she heard someone behind... she quickly walked in the hall way just next to the door...

"Hello..."

Mayuri's eyes were wide open at the voice... but she didn't turn around to see "yes..."

Rishab stepped closer hearing her voice, he thought it to be very familiar with his stranger M but then he knew she wouldn't be coming to this party and in Mumbai. He knew the previous number she had was from Delhi... "Sorry, where's the sangeet ceremony"

He looked at the girl from the back, his eyes fell on her dupatta hanging away from her blouse since the safety pin had come off... he stepped a little closer...when she said "it's at the back"

Rishab was about to turn when something stopped him, he noticed if she turned the pin might hurt her soft skin at the back "don't move" he said shocking her...

"What?" she said tried to turn around when he picked up her dupatta and tied the safety pin again with the blouse "you will get hurt. The safety pin has come out...Wait"

He carefully picked the dupatta from her shoulder and brought in line with her blouse and pinned again... "That's better"

Mayuri felt her fingers slightly touching her skin at the back while he was pinning the dupatta... this was the first time a man was standing so close to her and she didn't move at all.

Before she could turn and see him, he had already left.

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Rishab walked towards the garden where the sangeet ceremony was going on...

"I can't believe Vishal. I am meeting Rishab Singhania" she said while shaking hands with him...

"Stay away from him, he has the magic charms that can make any girl fall for him" Vishal chuckled

Rishab smiled at them "congratulations to both of you..." he handed over the big present "Vishal, I am in a hurry. I have to leave soon"

Rishab made an excuse to leave, not because his mother wanted him but he was waiting for the midnight.

After spending some time with Vishal and Trishna, Rishab left for home.

His house was on the outskirts of the city, he checked the time. It was almost midnight. He thought of stopping the car and calling her.

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Edited by Freethinker - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Fantastic update loved it.
They met but did not see each other, both are falling for each other unknowingly, let's see what's in store for them, curious to know if Mayuri will talk with him or no.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
brilliant update
both meet each other but can not see 😔
mayuri is afraid to think about her family's reaction nd other hand rk is much excited for mid nite to call her
waiting for their 2nd meeting nd hope this time they will see each other...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#36
😛cuteupdate...waiting for the next step of madhu...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: ananya2010

Fantastic update loved it.

They met but did not see each other, both are falling for each other unknowingly, let's see what's in store for them, curious to know if Mayuri will talk with him or no.

thanks for the lovely comments my dear😃😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Supervampire

brilliant update

both meet each other but can not see 😔
mayuri is afraid to think about her family's reaction nd other hand rk is much excited for mid nite to call her
waiting for their 2nd meeting nd hope this time they will see each other...

thanks a lot sweetie... for the wonderful comments... 😊😊😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: v.p.joshi

Superb update dear

Loved it

thanks my dear😃😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Tinku16

😛cuteupdate...waiting for the next step of madhu...

thanks my dear 😃😃 will update soon 😳

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