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Hi frndz,
Part4
I am rachana.it is my first ff and I am a little nervous.
I have been thinking of this thread since a long time
Hope u comment on it and ofcourse criticism is
Warmly welcomed
MY MYSTERIOUS FAN
Part1
Car reached the mansion and Rk dashed into his
Room.he settled on the couch and threw his shoes out of rage
He heard a knock and a sweet voice"may I come in ". A beautiful girl entered
She smiled but Rk looked at her angrily."y the he'll r u here. What dips"he asked
Dipali smiled againand said "don't say that u again had a problem with press Bhai "
Rk sighed and said "yes dips. That idiots were just irritating me asking about some new gossips with my heroine"
"then u beat the reporter, right? " dips
"yeah " rk said pressing his forehead."dips I am upset leave me alone please_"
Dips went out of the room muttering "Bhai and his problems,always the same "I have to do something to cool him "
Then rk began to shout"bittuji... Bittuji".he came running "chief" he put the alcohol bottle and glass on the table and looked at him. "do u want to join bittuji".bittuji noded no."then y r u staring at me " "out " he shouted.
Dips came back to rk with a packet"Bhai here is your today's treat, May I open it "
No dips I am not in a mood " rk"but I am in good Woodrow hear it "dips
She opened the cover and took out some photographs and a CD.she looked at the photographs and said"it's yesterdays photos.look it's the same t-shirt u wear during your work out "rk looked at it and nodded.she took out the CD and played it.
A sweet voice said"hi rk r u tensed and tired.put down the glass and I have a better way to calm down u.she started to sing.
Rk pit the glass back on the table and lay down on the couch. He closed his eyes and fell asleep.
Dipali put off the CD player .covered rk with a blanket and switched off the lights."goodnight Bhai ".
Radha saw Dipali and asked "he slept "
Yes Mom "dips replied "goodnight Mom"
and she went to her room,.
Madhubala was standing near the window and a gentle breeze blow her hair.she closed her eyes and whispered "Rk "
So guys how is it. Please comment.
Index
Part1_above
Part 2_page3
Part 3
Part4
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4748270&TPN=6
And
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/madhubala-ek-ishq-ek-junoon/4748270/rishbala-ff-my-mysterious-fan
Part5
Part6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9 A, 9 B
Part10
Part11
Part12
Part13
Part14
Part15
Part16
And
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/madhubala-ek-ishq-ek-junoon/4748270/rishbala-ff-my-mysterious-fan
Part 17
Last part
Read my new ff-MARRIED TO A CHILD
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