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bhanu_rekhag thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome part
Happened as expected but RK got it easily . ..
But now everything is fine...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

Awesome part

Happened as expected but RK got it easily . ..
But now everything is fine...

Thankyou.yeah everything is fine.now a little prangs😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update.We guess right but what a wonderful planner rk is.Now all is well.Love this story .plz write more.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update. ..di. .
hey. ..I am right
😛
I told na. .that rishikesh. .is our superstar. .. 😎
madhu gets shock. ...
rk na always to drama. .. 😉
padmini helps him. ..
great plans. .. 👏
early waiting for their cycle ride. 😉
oh that girl is ria 😲
we all think it's her sis trishna 😆
thanks for pm. ..
early waiting for next part. .
update soon. ..di
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: manna43

Awesome update.We guess right but what a wonderful planner rk is.Now all is well.Love this story .plz write more.

Thanks for pm.

Thank u.will update last episode soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sapnaf52

Amazing update. ..di. .
hey. ..I am right
😛
I told na. .that rishikesh. .is our superstar. .. 😎
madhu gets shock. ...
rk na always to drama. .. 😉
padmini helps him. ..
great plans. .. 👏
early waiting for their cycle ride. 😉
oh that girl is ria 😲
we all think it's her sis trishna 😆
thanks for pm. ..
early waiting for next part. .
update soon. ..di

Thank u sapna.will update soon wwith song
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing work 👏👏
Read four parts in one go...
felt bad for madhu.. Rk na bada dramebaaz... felt so happy..
When it came to marriage.. i thought for sure it will be RK...
Unexpected was Ria giving news.. 😉
Really fantastic work.. Long way... Keep going...
Waiting for your next update on MMF and also for your next new writings👏👏😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhika_G

Amazing work 👏👏
Read four parts in one go...
felt bad for madhu.. Rk na bada dramebaaz... felt so happy..
When it came to marriage.. i thought for sure it will be RK...
Unexpected was Ria giving news.. 😉
Really fantastic work.. Long way... Keep going...
Waiting for your next update on MMF and also for your next new writings👏👏😊

Thank u radhika.will updAte soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
superb update
Wow !!!!! my guess is right...groom is rk
rk never want to hurt madhu. only his plan got fire
beautiful nd happy update
thanx for pm di
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Posted: 8 years ago
My Mysterious fan
Last part


Every guests left.radhaji said"rishu its 10:30 ,go and take rest."
"ok ma goodnight"rk
They went to thier room."well madhs you lost the bet"he said in rishis voice.
Madhu said "if u talk like him, I will kill u."
"what about the penality?"rk
"ok what I have to do?"madhu
"hmm...100 kisses"rk
"what?it's tough"madhu
"ok then50_50.you will give me 50 and I will give u 50."rk
"no"madhu
"madhu I won the best.so no more bargains"to
"ok "madhu said shyly
"start now,action"rk
"is this your film set rk?"madhu
"I think madhu you are not mature enough to handle the situation.so I will give u some tutorials after that u can "to wincked at her.
Madhus face red.
Rk led her to the bed and Sat on the bed.he gently removed her nose pin and kissed there.madhu felt an impulse.then he removed the maang teeka and kissed on forehead.he removed her earrings and kissed there.she felt goosebumps. He removed all her jewellery and kissed her.
Rk looked into her eyes"I want to hear a song,will u sing for me?"madhu nodded yes and start singing
Mile ho thum humko
Bade naseebon se
Churaya hai maine
Kismat ki lakheeron se
Rk Sat behind her and moved her hair, kissed on her bare back.
Mile...ho...tum
Madhu stopped singing as her voice trembling.rk smiled and said sing madhu."
Bade naseebon se
Rk pulled her dori and opened it.and again kissed her
Churaya...hai...
Her voice flattened again.rk signalled what?
"if u keep kissing me how could I sing"madhu
Rk signelled sing.
Churaya hai maine
Rk kissed on her ears and nibble on it.
Qismat...her voice again trembled.she stopped and looked at him.rk cupped her face and gently peck on her lips.then it went into a passionate kiss.he laid down on bed and kissed on her jaw line,her neck...

Morning

"Rk"madhu shouted "wake up"
"what biwi?I am tired"rk
"I will kill u rk"madhu
"r u a female spider to kill the mate after s*x?"to opened his eyes.madhu was wrapped herself in a towel which barely covers her thighs.rk gazed her.she showed the love bite on her neck to rk"how I could wear a Saree "
Rk chuckled"wow my sexy biwi,u r here to seduce me?"he pulled her and she fell on the bed.he kissed on her hickey.
"biwi relax,wear a salwar and a dupatta,problem solved.next time I will bite somewhere else"
Madhu shyly looked at him."rk leave me please I want to take a bath."
"what about a bath together?"rk
"no."madhu ran to the bathroom and locked it.rk smiled.
"rk what do u want for breakfast,?"madhu
"hmm...kheer"rk
"ok get ready, and come fast I will make it"madhu

Rk went to dining room"goodmorning ma "
"goodmorning dips".they too wished him.madhu came with the breakfast .
"chief here is a parcel and bouquet for u"
"what?"Rk looked at madhu
"no I didn't"madhu
"then whoelse"rk they went to visiting room.
"who send this rk?"madhu
"leave it madhu,may be a fan"rk said
"no, I want to hear the cd"Madhu
"we will go to our room and play it"rk
"why are u scared to play it here? "Madhu
"we were married yesterday and u start doubting me today.disgusting biwi"Rk
"I want to hear it now rk"Madhu said furiously
"ok hear it.but anything went wrong don't blame me"to
"why r u afraid rk?,bittuji play it"madhu passed this CD to bittuji.
Mile ho... Pause
Bade...sigh
Churaya hai... Voice flattened
Voice trembling
"rk how could I sing if you keep kissing me"
Madhu realised its rks plan.She glared at rk.radhaji put her hand on the forehead and left. Dips and bittuji smirked with eachother and they went back.madhus face was red.she looked at rk.he was smiling amusingly."rk stop it"madhu
"no u want to hear it right here na,?"rk
Sighs...moans..."rk"
...sshhh...rishab...madhu
...sigh...ouch...it hurts.


...its good...rishab...
"please do stop it na"madhu pleaded
"rk stopped the cd."u don't want to hear more?it's getting much interesting later.ho...madhu how much u shouts. I should close your mouth with bandage when we make love"Rk
Madhu try to hit him.rk ran.she tried to catch him.to ran to his room.madhu followed.both fell on the bed.rk and madhu giggled.
"madhu this is the best one you had ever sung"
"yes rk,it's my best too"madhu kept her head on rks chest.


"AAHAAN"Rk said





-MMF ends_





Thank you priya, sapna, aani,priyanka,manjeet,leena,bhanu,abhi,harini
Ananya varsha and all my silent readers.it's my first attempt and your comments were very encouraging.bhanu rekha your confusion made me think more and make it somewhat perfect.thank you.harini your long comments were very encouraging.sapna you always helped me with songs and your comments.@priya you were my support when I thought of dropping the story.aani love your comments yaar.thank u all

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