rishbala ff -MY MYSTERIOUS FAN - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Wow, this mysterious fan knows RK quite well!

Good luck with your story.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Nice prologue waiting fr a fresh air of rk madhu
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Thanks yaar.will try to update tomorrow
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
nice start...
so RK is dips bro...
madhu is a secret admirer n a fan of RK..
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Thank u.ye.ah dips his sis and madhu his secret admirer.😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
I thought I will post the update tomorrow.I had written the rough copy and so thought to post it today.sometimes I can't post tomorrow so want to keep the promise

MY MYSTERIOUS FAN
Part 2
Madhubala went back to the bed and lay down.she thought whether rk heard the song or not.then she saw a shadow near the door. She got startled and asked"who is that ".she switched on the light in panic.she saw rk sstanding near her bed and smiling at her.madhubala got out of the bed.rk moved towards her with his charming smile and caught her by her waist and said "madhubala aahaan ". He came even closer and gazed into her beautiful brown eyes. He slightly bend and kissed on her lips.
Suddenly she felt its raining and she got drenched.madhu saw passion with a mug and staring at her.madhu looked for rk and realised that she was dreaming.
"madhu don't u want to go for work. Get up and prepare breakfast sweety want to go to school on time.iron Papas and sweetys clothes. Today is 2 nd of this month and u didn't give me the money.u didn't get the salary this month or u spent it on ur dresses.if u don't give me today u have no breakfast for one month"_padmini
and mumbled herself"this girl never do anything on time, just like malik.I am fed up "
Madhu quickly freshen up and went to kitchen.she thought about her dream and blushed.
Padmini glared at madhu
"chottima I will make it soon"

Rk mansion

To woke up and looked at the glass on the table and said " I didn't take even a sip yesterday.oh no this is not done.MET is going to make me human from an animal"
Hearing him dips asked "MMF "
My Mysterious fan "rk replied
"anyways it's good that u r controlling ur alcoholism"dips
"noways dips I am rk and no one is supposed to control me"rk
"I am going for jogging, do u want to join dips"to
"no Bhai my heart is not like that, I like to workout at home " dips
"lazy creature"rk chuckled
Dipali glared and went out

Malik house

Madhu rode hercycle quickly and reached the destination in a minute.she yelled out "news paper,todays breaking news.superstar rk hit the reporter ".some people bought news papers from her.
Rk was jogging and he saw some girls drooling at him.he waved and gave them a flying kiss.he thought'someone in this group will be mmf"
Madhu saw rk coming and she then yelled"breaking news pm to call off 500 and1000rupees currency ".rk continued without looking at her.madhu stopped her cycle looked back at rk and smiled.

Rk mansion

Rk went to his Room and bittuji gave him the towel and a bottle of water.rk asked"bittuji today it's second shift na"
Yes_bittuji replied
Dipali cane and asked"bhai will u drop me to college today I have to show my frndz that I am great rishab kundras sister"_dips
"please bhai" she made a cutie face
"ok I will but don't expect me to come inside and get attacked by bimbos who fell upon me like anything"rk
"ok you are the sweetest cutest Bhai ever "dips
"I am not sweet but ofcourse cute "rk said with a grin

Malik mansion

Madhu reached home and gave money to padmini.she asked "chottima where is papa"
_"he went to flower shop"padmini replied."ok chottima I am going to flower shop and to college from there "madhu took her breakfast in a minute and left

Rk mansion

Rk and Radha taking breakfast.dips joined them. "what is this Dipali can't u wear something better.u r not going to college to show yourself but to study "radha
"what ma it's the latest collection and I bought it for her.she looks gorgeous in it " rk
"yes yes I am not the one to get in between u two " radha
Then rk kissed her cheek and said "when my ma is angry she becomes the beautiful woman in the world"
Radha smiled."papa used to tell this name "dips
"yes "radha blushed
Rk and dips winked to eachother and left to college

Flower shop

Madhu reached the flower shop and hugged Malik "goodmorning papa"Malik kissed on her forehead and replied"goodmorning my princess".
Madhu went inside the shop and she made a beautiful bouquet of red roses and kissed on it.shamsher Malik asked "madhu what r u doing with these bouquets daily"
_"just for my frnd papa" madhu said "bye papa"
"bye madhu"Malik




Its been a long update.if u feel it's dragging tell me. I will make it little fast.please comment on it.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Nice update.
Normally we read long update.
so there is no problem.
Madhu is cute.Her dream will become true oneday.
We are waiting for that day.
Rk slept without alcohol.Because of her song.Nice.
Dips is so sweet.She loves her brother .
padimini is chotima for madhu.This is different.
Rk is cute and Handsome.
Update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Awesome update,
loved it,
Madhu is Rk's mysterious fan,she was dreaming about Rk,
padmini is madhu's chotimaa,
dipali and rk bonding is nice,
excited for Rishbala first meet,
All the best for your exam,
thanks for the update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
lovely update.. Madhu is sweet..!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
first welcome to the forum Rachna nd congrats for ur first ff
story is interesting nd in this story dipali is rk's sister nd madhu is rk's secret fan
continue it dear

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