REMEMBER US MY LOVE note - Page 4

Thanks for the PM dear.

I am not on blog

Loved every part of the story.

Sullu was a good friend to Rk as he was willing to go to any length for his friend. Loved madhurima and her patience to wait for rk to have his memories back. For a moment I was sad to read Rk have relationship with riya . But thanks for explaining his reasons to distance himself from his love. I guess both rishbala were right in their place. Madhu had her reasons to not remind rk of past and rk too had reasons to not express his true feelings. It was nice to have both sultan and riya as positive characters . At one point I doubted if riya was plotting against rishbala thankfully it was baseless. the airplane part at ending was so sweet. only rishbala can fight and love at the same time. Rk's relation to madhu was pure and beautiful thanks for explaining their relation clearly.

Finally Brilliantly written emotions and characters . Loved it more than first part. first part was heart wrenchingly good but being sucker for happy endings loved this part more.

Thanks for pm.

loved to read at once😃

i loved it when their love progress gradually 👏

even that's their second life still the love feel new😃

the most amazing thing i like was both madhu and rk are same person but still different from previous life 😃😉

airport scene was the best👏

first time i like balraj and sultan ... best father and friend 😆

thanks for pm😳

p.s:

i really like your stories but again i will always respect your decision 😳

just don't leave 😊

And haan expect 2 ...I am.interested in options 1 to 6 ...7 and 8 naah coz I'm not following any other shows.

Thanks for being us sweets...I will not disappoint u

I m actually speechless... U have written it so brilliantly...

I have lot to say... Which i cant do now bcos i m ising my phone and i cant type long detailed comments thru phone bcos i need to keep your blog open while i type my comment here... I need reference... As i have to mention so many wonderful scenes which i loved in this story... So tmrw i will post my comment here from my PC... Till then kindly wait dear...

Oh... For now i just wanna thank u for giving me this exellent story to read...

Stay blessed!

i hope u don't mind me giving few suggestions...

1. I would suggest you to write... say RK's POV, then Madhu POV like that... instead of writing RK's pov .. Rk's pov ended... why that opening and ending? if u write next pov then automatically means the earlier pov got over.. hehe... i have this bad habit of reading every small note or information along with the story and i feel bored every time read so and so pov started... so and so pov ended then again started... but i like it when u clearly mention the year and place.. like RK mansion... Singhania living room... in car... like that... it gives the perfect feel.

2. I know you are writing stories in both Maaneet and Rishbala version... so it's tiring task to edit the names.. but u have done it so brilliantly so far... but at few places ... u miss out to edit Maan's name or khurana mansion... new readers will get confused.. so u can "Find and Replace" in your word doc. which will replace all the Maan to RK.. or whatever word changes it be... (I hope you are already doing this... but at some places you might write "maan instead of Maan" so if you change capital letter starting Maan then the maan will be unchanged) actually these r minor errors so I ignore it... hehe... but just thought to let u know..

3. I always prefer long updates... it gives me satisfaction that i have read a good full fledged update... u r really one of the writer here who gives long update... i enjoy reading your long updates... but make sure it doesn't go too long... some readers might feel lazy to read to long updates... another thing.. u write lots of good things in one update... but they miss out all to mention and appreciate... if you keep it in medium size... they will remember the scenes well and mention it in their comment...

4. Don't tell me you are good at only in writing suspense, thriller, forbidden love stories or stories with tragic ending... u are good in all genre... u have amazing creativity... so explore your creativity in various genre... one in a while do write some lighthearted fun filled stories... becos u have varied kinds of readers and in that most of the readers prefer romancilicious stories... haha!!

all are just suggestions dear... nothing to hurt your feelings... hope u will understand!!!