I was not in plans to come anytime sooner here. But I was so curious to read yours and Sudha akka's stories. Haha and see where I am, I jumped out of nowhere. I am glad that you still consider me as your best reader and I no longer wish to disappoint my favorite author.
Wow! Wow! I thought of giving exclusive comment for each and every chapter. But I guess I am way too impatient...so I searched for your PM...Like nearly for 12 pages and finally I got the link. And then instead of the password for Rishbala I typed the other password...😆 You should have seen my face that time dear...I looked like I was about to cry hehe. Then I found my error and corrected the password, entered the story and soon lost myself as usual!
Coming to the comments section...
I loved one person more than even the protagonists of the story. Its none other than Balraj. What a lovely father he is! He surprised me in every turn of the story. His boundless and unconditional love for his daughter. The way he understood her unsaid words and emotions, his concern even about the little things made him apart from the rest of the characters. He didn't care about RK's status or life. he just believed his daughter's story. And as a dutiful father, used his powers and investigated thoroughly. Indeed I was surprised that Rishbala's love and tragic death was recorded in law book. I was like why is it not in a medical book??😉 Don't get me wrong...but Madhu's death before RK affected him deeply that he almost became inhuman. He was no longer a human then. So I though that their case would be a good topic to research. Since the scientists and Doctors couldn't clearly explain love and its consequences.
I will better stop my blabber before you decide to throw me out of your list...hehe. I just love their glorious and historic past!
Throughout the story RK was like Madhu in previous life and Madhu was like RK in previous life...hehe...role reversal I guess 😆 In the previous birth RK was bolder than Madhu in romance while here Madhu took the cake 😆
Madhu was timid in previous birth while RK is like that here 😛
Not mean to be offensive but just compare and contrast Lol!...Rk was richer before and now Madhu...note...just comparisons dear 😳
Mohan was a bad guy there unlike Balraj. But seems that RK got a better father this birth. I almost had an attack when I discovered that they both are siblings biologically...😲
And yeah...I loved how the history repeats itself...Madhu being two years older than RK and , they both are siblings by law and not by blood. I loved how you continued their legacy ❤️
Bittu, is now a great grandfather and Dips is grandmother to Rishbala. I love you so much dear! Never thought they are still alive...but very glad that they witnessed Rishbala's reunion. They gave the locket that made him remember his past.
This scene...when Riya kissed RK I died a thousand deaths like Madhu. Indeed...RK didn't reciprocate it but having Madhu to witness it... She would have definitely seen her RK's reaction by hiding somewhere. It would have broken her heart...
Its completely understandable why RK distance himself from Madhu. First coz she is a rich girl. But after few years when he seemed to come around and get used to that idea...he caught hold of his DNA Report. And very soon...like a coward he fled away from the scene leaving Madhu running behind his car aimlessly.
Balraj is indeed a rock in Madhu's life. All those eight years without RK, he has been her anchor. He is a gem of a father. I have never seen a person as genuine as him in the story...to say I am completely in awe of this person. He even supported Madhu to sacrifice her dreams of Boston University for RK. When she was depressed and lonely, he gave her his shoulder to cry on and always encouraged her. I loved their bond. I was so unhappy that Madhu wasn't his biological daughter. Yes...honestly...But later Madhu didn't have a problem with that and I was like complaining uselessly Lol!
Riya is a good bitch here. I understand...sorry...she is not even a bitch. Am glad she found her love with the Sultan.It was completely RK's fault to lead her on. When he clearly knew he was in love with her ...why did he do that? So that he can forget Madhu or so that he wants her to find an other person 😕
I am being irrational here...just wanted to point out how selfless RK is. Haha but I can't help sympathising with him too...😆
Loved the basement romance of both the present and past era. One thing I loved about the rebirth is that there are no negative characters (Of course except this spineless Angad) or situations. Esp..no Mohan, Meera or Abhay 😡😆
Wait dear...I wrote whatever I thought I guess. Since I am commenting for the whole story in one single box 😃
I guess...Angad is Sultan's father...poor memory LOL!
Thanks for writing such wonderful stroeis for us...which is actually far beyond my imagination. i thought of saying many things but eventually forgot while typing...so I guess you would forgive me if I miss saying about any important parts.If I remember them I would be back with another comment.
PS. I loved how the new Rishbala are going to create happy memories in the basement erasing one strong worst memory 😳 Kudos to you for sketching this so wonderfully. Now I am actually reading the murder case to know the dynamics of your creativity.
I am always with you dear ❤️ In whatever writing spree you start. If possible publish your stories on Wattpad...oh sry...I dunno whether you are there since I joined recently.
But if you come there you will get a lot more readers. You can publish your stories either as Fan fiction or general fiction category (so that you can just replace the name of the characters).
Just a suggestion dear 😊
Lotta love,
Souwmiya 😳
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