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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello dear...I missed your updates on ILUMB...will soon read and comment...srorry for not responding before...
Congrats once again for your new story! I enjoyed the start so much...soon post the subsequent parts...

Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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vishti4eva thanks dear
v.p.joshi thanks dear
harini_ thanks dear
dharsii thanks dear
--Evil_Angel- thanks aniya..s dear rk is always rk..he should b different..😳😆
ananya2010 thanks dear sure will pm..
😳
Supervampire thanks dear
manna43 😳😳😳thanks dear
sapnaf52 wow ...😊
Our dear friend come back with back to back update. ..and ...New story..!!
Congrats dear for new story. ..
look it seems so crazy . s really crazy.😆
rishbala both know each other. .s
They fight like tom and Jerry ..😊.
and we love rishbala cute nokjhok and their little crazy fight. .
Loved the flask back. ..part. .
oh madhu she want boyfriend. .
and that naughty cute little boy was rishab. ...
early waiting for update. ..thanks dear😳
Tinku2015 thanks dear
radhadd thanks dear
pirl18 Oho... Dreemy Madhu wants to make rishu her bf after 5 yrs...s dear,, soo she will regret😆
Hehehe... 😆
N now their mrj..
Sweet.. Start
thanks dear
@vishuv


Congrats for the new story Hiba 👏 thanks dear
Title itself is very interesting...am looking forward to read more. I love such type of stories...

same pitch😳
LOL RK thinks her father is a lion...'sher' 😆 Madhu, for sure, is pissed off...hehe loved it!
thanks dear


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chapter-2

boy:why not?

madhu:k then plz tell me..

boy:come with me..

madhu follows him..after some time the boy turns to look at madhu.

madhu:why you are looking at me like this.?

boy:actually..can you wait for sometime?I want to go to toilet.Its urgent.madhu again gets irritated.

madhu-okay..I will wait here..

she turns to the other side..

madhu looks at her watch and notices if anyone is there ..god why he is not coming?

boy: aaa

he begins to shout..

boy inside the bathroom:madhubala please come..

madhu gets worried and asks him.

madhu:what happened?you.. ok?I mean any problem?shall I call anyone?

you need any help?

boy:hey no...dont call anyone.. please can you come inside?

madhu again gets worried and without minding anything enters boys toilet.

madhu:what happened?

why were you screaming?

the boy came towards her and tells.

boy:I saw something there..

madhu:wht did you saw?

she looks at every corner of the bathroom and finds nothing..

madhu: nothing is here..then why were you screaming?

she turns to look at the boy and finds her alone inside the bathroom..

she gets scared and runs to the door..but finds it locked from outside..

she begins to scream..

madhu: hallo ..anybody please help..I am inside the bathroom..

tears escaped from her little eyes.she heard some whisper outside..

from outside: hai mad-bala,wish you good luck..a small present from rk..good bye...

Little rk goes from there leaving madhu in boys toilet.
Madhu: Hallo..what a I did to you.please open the door.she begins to scream.
Somebody please help...
She checks her watch.
Madhu: God..its 9:30.She heard the bell rang.
She tries to open the door many times but all her trials went in vein.
Its now almost two hours she is inside the toilet.
She heard another bell which rang for interval.She gets relaxed because atleast she can go out from here.At the same time she gets embarassed.What will others think about me.They would surely tease me.She gets more worries because of this.
Little rk came with his friends to the toilet.
Rk's pov
Now this is the moment.I will tease her more.This will be more interesting.He chuckles imagining what will happen next.
Madhu was shouting from inside.
Mukund hears it.
Rk somebody is inside.Its a girls voice.
Rk looks like he didnt know anything ..
Lets open the door..
And he open..
All other boys came to the toilet sees madhu inside.
They begins to laugh.
Rk: Girl this place is not for yours.This is our world.
Madhu gets stunned by his reply.
Madhu: You...
Rk: are you a girl?
Everyone begins to laugh more louder hearing rk's words.


Madhu felt like her life had lost.
She tries to go away from the crowd.
But it was not all possible because rk and his gang were surrounded by her.
Madhu: You moron..You locked me inside this boys toilet. Everyone please believe.
Madhu looks at rk angrily.
Rk again thought what he would say.All boys stared at him.
Rk: S..I locked her.U know ..I saw a girl in boys toilet.So thought of showing it to you all.I think this girl uses boys toilet only.
All boys started laughing louder surrounding madhu.Madhu cant tolerate this anymore.
She held both her hands on her ears because of sound.
She started screaming..
Madhu : aaa
All other boys who were surrounded madhu run away from there because of her screaming.
Madhu thought "Looks like these boys dont want to go to toilet."
Thats madhubala mallick.
Madhu turns to leave when she spotted one boy.He was non other than the prankster..little devil..Yes he was a devil..He is showing an innoccent face and hidding a devil inside him.
Madhu regretted what she thought when she meeted him first..
She stared at him angrily..
He gave her an evil smirk...


so small update ..
plz like and comment😊

Edited by leena45678 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
vishti4eva thanks dear
v.p.joshi thanks dear
harini_ thanks dear
dharsii thanks dear
--Evil_Angel- thanks aniya..s dear rk is always rk..he should b different..😳😆
ananya2010 thanks dear sure will pm..
😳
Supervampire thanks dear
manna43 😳😳😳thanks dear
sapnaf52 wow ...😊
Our dear friend come back with back to back update. ..and ...New story..!!
Congrats dear for new story. ..
look it seems so crazy . s really crazy.😆
rishbala both know each other. .s
They fight like tom and Jerry ..😊.
and we love rishbala cute nokjhok and their little crazy fight. .
Loved the flask back. ..part. .
oh madhu she want boyfriend. .
and that naughty cute little boy was rishab. ...
early waiting for update. ..thanks dear😳
Tinku2015 thanks dear
radhadd thanks dear
pirl18 Oho... Dreemy Madhu wants to make rishu her bf after 5 yrs...s dear,, soo she will regret😆
Hehehe... 😆
N now their mrj..
Sweet.. Start
thanks dear
@vishuv


Congrats for the new story Hiba 👏 thanks dear
Title itself is very interesting...am looking forward to read more. I love such type of stories...

same pitch😳
LOL RK thinks her father is a lion...'sher' 😆 Madhu, for sure, is pissed off...hehe loved it!
thanks dear

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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Lovely update...And I am very sorry I am not pleased with this RK.
He is so naughty...but this mischief is not so good...very bad I can say. She is an innocent girl who believed him right away...he shouldn't do like that.Hmm...let's see what's gonna happen...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow...hiba it's amazing..
Rk he is really devils...
He do this ragging in this age...I cann't image what he did in college ...
Poor madhu..she stay in boys toilet..2 hours...
rk really do bad..
Waiting for what madhu do next...
and this was their first meeting...and he come to see her!!!madhu wants to kill him..lolz
update soon..

Edited by sapnaf52 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
rk is soo naughty...poor madhu
nyc update
dharsii thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Fun update.
Really super .
I like it very much.
Feel sad for madhu.He Locked madhu inside restroom.
Rk is so naughty.Mukund also is there.
Rk was teasing her with his friends.
Madhu's escape weapon is super.
Tom And Jerrry .Now I understand the title.
Update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Haha it was funny but felt bad for madhu
Nice update 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Awesome update, loved it.
So this is how their enimity began, RK the prankster.
Curious to know what happens next, continue soon, waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
so cute.. Kiddo rk is fun to read.. But plz make rk adult.. That will be more fun to read..!! Madhu poor girl got locked.. Thats really a vry bad prank.. Madhu should teach him a lesson.

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