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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: vishuv

Beautiful update di! Enjoyed ti so much...

Sujoy is a welcome relief to Madhu. He was cheerful and talkative unlike her husband. Glad she is welcomed in a new land.
Your description of the surroundings and the food is superb! Its very nice to read. Honestly I didn't understand single name of the food there. Di! Have you visited LA? Is it really beautiful and peaceful as you have described?

Madhu slept long after a tiresome and long journey. Yeah being in a new place, she would be homesick...that too with a husband who is no better than a stranger. Haha! She wants Men to come with a user guide! She would be beautiful in whatever dress she wears...and the hairstyle too!

No no you are not going fast...


Thanks dear!

I've visited LA many times and have actually spent a few years there. Most of what I write are from my own experiences. Glad you like them :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya2010

Simi awesome update, loved it..

Poor Madhu can't eat anything that is available there but I guess she will learn to live.
Sujoy is a nice man and Madhu is going to be a part of his and Debolina's life, feel like they will come to her rescue.
Rishab is caring and thoughtful of him to call her parents since she was feeling home sick.
In love with this story, I keep waiting for the update.


Thank you!

Yes Sujoy is a wonderful person and his wife. Its nice to have people like that in a strange land.

Update coming up!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: ...Seema...

Chap2

.amazing
Rk father forced rk into this marriage
Rk told madhu DAT she can move out of this marriage n he will handle da situation then
But madhu told him DAT she can't
N after sometime she can tell her father DAT she isn't happy
Amazing story


Thanks so much Seema!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fabolus dear... You are an amazing writer.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: manna43

Story is going nicely.They reached LA.Like this guy Sujoy.He is so lively contrary to rishabh.Madhu slept so long n nothing to eat .poor her.Rishabh seemed care for her to sent her back safely. Madhu broke down after hearing her parents voice.



Thank you! More to come!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Mona_90

Beutiful and lovely part..
Chalo madhu ko koi toh mila jiska saath wo baat kar sake..
Soojy kitna bolta hai uska bas chala toh risabh ki puri pol hi khol dega madhu ka samna..
Madhu ko apne mom and family ki yaad aarahi hai aur ya risabh ko usa bhejna ki jaldi hai..
Waiting for next part...


Hahaha.. Poor Rishabh. He has to be careful abt Sujoy! Thank you!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: madhurish

Amazing update as ever...

LOL! Men to come with an user guide! that line cracked me up!
poor girl got quite a boring husband!

Gah! what's the need to remind her that she will be leaving back home in few weeks? i remember he will get a nice tongue lashing from her next time when he says that again LOL!!!

i guess i have already told u this.. but saying it again... u describe the aesthetic beauty of the surrounding so well... i could visualize everything in front of my eyes...

Ah! Sooj... man, thank u for welcoming her & warming her up with your jokes... Glad Madhu got fraternized with Sujoy so easily & consider him as her brother...

how come this unromantic Rishab get so romantic by time? wondering!! LOL.. May be Madhu's effect!
What he had with that woman, that bitch was just mechanical sex...
Madhu was the one who taught him the true meaning of love and romance & of course what life is!!

Thanks for this Sunday special update... loved it!


Thank you x 1000 times Sudha!

Rishabh's indeed quite boring.. Madhu has a lot of work in her hands😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks dearies for taking a keen interest in my story. I'm enjoying reading all your comments and it brings back great memories!
So without further ado here's chap 6.


6: Twenty-Nine Days"Trials

Madhu was excited.

Her husband had offered to take her out for dinner to an Indian restaurant. "It's in Artesia on Pioneer Blvd, the longest stretch of everything Indian in LA where you can immerse yourself in complete desiness!"

"Is it close by?" she asked eagerly, wondering if she could walk over every day.

"No, at least an hour away, and with the LA traffic, you can never be sure. Hope there are no major car chases or accidents." He crossed his fingers.

"Car chases?" she inquired, puzzled, as he held open the door of his Prius.

Laughing, he replied, while starting the engine and easing the car smoothly onto the street, "If LA is notorious for something, it is for car chases. People steal cars and race them at breakneck speed on these highways, and the cops give chase. It's an adrenaline rush. The pursuit can go on for hours"across counties and cities till the poor fellow gives up. It's frequently shown live on TV. You should watch it sometime. It can be fun."

"Getting your thrills out of watching car chases? Not my idea of entertainment." Madhu said.

"Suit yourself. It's mind-numbing to a degree, helps when you are lonely and don't wish to think."

So that's why you're having an affair, a very noble pastime.

"You said something?" Rishabh looked at Madhu.

Madhu shook her head and turned her attention to the window. What was she like?

They were playing old Hindi movie songs on the radio.

"One thing I must say though, there is no beating these classic tunes, so soulful. And Kishore da, RD combo wah simply magic!" Glancing sideways Madhu took in the blissful look on Rishabh's face as he hummed along. At least he liked something Indian. You can't escape your roots no matter how much you try. "Aap yahaan kitne saalon se hain?" (How long have you been here?)

"What?" He frowned at her then smiled. "Hmmm...Hindi...Okay! Pichle che saalon se." (For the past six years.) "Came for higher education, then decided to stay when they offered me the job. Anyhow, no potential for aerospace engineering back home."

"Don't you get bored living alone?" she persisted.

"Bored? That's a relative term. Just work, work, work then crash back in the apartment. There's no time to get bored. Nevertheless, that's how I like it." He didn't look comfortable.

Then you intend to remain closemouthed about her. I need to know more. "But how do you""

"Here we are!" he interrupted.

Climbing out of the car, she looked around wide-eyed. It felt as though she had been transported back home. Brown faces walking on the streets conversing in a familiar tongue, shop fronts announcing twenty-two-carat jewelry, displaying colorful Indian clothes and goods. Posters of Indian movies and visiting desi performing artists. Oh, and there was Salman coming to LA on the fourteenth.

"So what do you think?"

"It's...it's great! Thank you!" she exclaimed with her large eyes shining and a wondrous smile on her face. Rishabh stared enraptured; she was quite beautiful.

"So when can we eat?" She was hungry.

"Yes, food, of course!" he said, dropping his gaze, flustered. "What do you want? Udipi, Gujju, Marwari, or Punjabi?"

"Punjabi...?" she ventured with a doubtful smile.

"Yes, a great choice, and it happens to be right here! Our own Americanized Desi dhaba! It doesn't look like very much, but they say the food is good."

They stepped into the bright small fluorescent-lit place with several small round tables and chairs squeezed into a tight space and the typical glass display showing off a mouthwatering array of sweets and savories. The pleasant elderly sardarji behind the counter smiled at Madhu kindly while he patiently waited for her order.

She glanced at Rishabh, who offered an unsure shrug. "Gobhi ka paratha." Then spying several patrons drinking from Styrofoam cups, she added, "And a cup of tea!"

Rishabh asked for Pav Bhaji.Their order was ready within minutes. "Too oily, right?" he said, handing her a paper towel. "Here, blot it!"

She took his advice, then placed a piece of hot bread tentatively in her mouth.

Throwing his head back, he laughed. "You are something else I must tell you! You don't like American Chinese or American Italian nor do you like Americanized Indian! Even Des"" He stopped mid-sentence.

Madhu stared at him. "Des? What about Des?"

A sudden change came over his countenance; he seemed irritated. "Nothing, it's nothing. Now tell me how do you plan to survive the next few weeks?"

So that was her name, Des... She was real. Madhu had hoped it was all make-believe, an act he had put on to get out of an unwanted marriage because he treasured being single. But it wasn't true.

"Is there some place I can get a few Indian groceries? Aata, daal, etc.?"

"I'm sure there is, though I've never stepped into one."

They found a huge Gujarati grocery store nearby. Madhu blindly piled several items in her cart: spices, flour, oil, pulses, a few vegetables, things she considered essential and of which she hadn't found any trace in the apartment. She pulled up in front of the counter where Rishabh was waiting anxiously. He stared bewildered at the loaded cart.

"Do you plan to eat all that?"

"I've picked the smallest quantities I could get. You are welcome to share too if you wish!" She didn't want to talk to him; she wanted to scream.

"Thanks but I don't want to get spoiled. It'll be hard to recover after you leave."

"You don't have to remind me about that over and over again! I have decent memory, and I shall keep my word. Before you know it, I'll be gone from your life, and you won't even miss me."

He looked up sharply. "I'm sorry. I shouldn't have said that."

"It's all right. I'd prefer you being honest with me. It's bitter but healthier in the end. Shall we leave?"

***

The following day Rishabh woke up to the mouthwatering aroma of freshly baked bread. Closing his eyes, he tried to shut out the tempting vision.

After a shower and shave, he walked into the living room to find the kitchen look like one for the first time since he'd moved in. Madhu seemed different; her cheeks flushed by the heat of the range, busy preparing one of her favorite dishes on the pan, humming under her breath, appearing relaxed and happy.

"Hi!" he greeted her cautiously while reaching for his box of cereals.

"Hello. No good morning today?"

"Good morning."

She watched as he examined with interest the tiny shrine she had created in one corner of the kitchen counter with a small brass Ganesha along with a tiny oil lamp and a couple of fragrant incense sticks.

"I felt this house was missing something. You don't mind, do you?"

"No, not at all!" He brought his hands together briefly in front of the idol before taking a seat at the dinette. But he didn't proceed.

Smiling, she said, "You can try a sample if you wish. I won't force you."

"Perhaps a tiny piece."

Gingerly, he placed a fragment in his mouth. She waited apprehensively.

"May I kiss your hands?"

"You like it?" she asked, beaming with pleasure.

"Like it? Gosh I love it! It's even better than what I recall Mother used to make. Now I get the reason for your absurdly high standards. Can I have a whole one?"

For the next several minutes, Madhu looked on as her reluctant spouse devoured every morsel of her handiwork.

"Ahh...! That tastes so much better than cold, boring cereal. Would you mind packing me a couple for lunch? I've been eating cold sandwiches for ages!" he said, licking his fingers.

"But then your good habits will get spoiled, in your own words."

"No one can resist an in-house gourmet chef, temporary or permanent. I'm going to miss you."

She packed a box for him.

"Thank you. I'll see you later. Take care." He left after hesitating for a moment at the door.

***

When he returned that evening, he found her chitchatting with Sujoy. They appeared to have bonded well. She was bent over, her face red, tears of mirth flowing down her cheeks at one of his silly jokes.

Rishabh suddenly felt envious; why did everyone take to Sujoy right away?

"Sooj! Stop before my wife has a fit!"

Madhu stopped laughing and stared at him.

Chagrined, he looked away.

"She may be your wife, but she is my little sis, and she is teaching me Hindi! Haina, Madhu?"

"Haan, dadamoni! Yes, you are absolutely right!"

"And she fed me her Gobhi Parathas! Bah! Amazing, or I'd have starved today! Debo is so nauseous that she runs away from anything that smells good. Pregnancy is not a very pleasant thing, I think."

"Dadamoni, how miserable! Can I make some khichdi or soup for her?"

"Na! She is fine! But thank you for asking," he replied, gently patting her hand. "Even though I've just met you, it feels like I've known you forever. And since you call me your brother, don't hesitate to come to me anytime especially if this chap here gives you trouble." Sujoy winked at Rishabh. "I should be going now and leave you two alone and stop being what you say, yes...kebab mein haddi!"

***

"I apologize for saying anything I shouldn't have."

"The me' being your wife' thing? I didn't mind it. You did marry me, didn't you?"

"Yes, I did. But sorry anyway." Rishabh's mouth twisted into a brief smile before he headed into his bedroom.

Madhu's hopes improved as the days passed. Rishabh seemed to enjoy her cooking, was always courteous, and appeared prompt in returning home directly from work. There was no further mention of Des.

But that's where their relationship had stalled.

At times when she caught him staring at her, he'd promptly turn away. He had also gone to great lengths to avert coming in contact with her though on one occasion it became unavoidable.

tbc

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yipee! Finally Madhu got to eat something nice there...Haha this Rishab is zero in cooking! I am thinking whether he knows the name of the items she picked in the grocery shop 😆 Lol! Even I am like Rishab 😆

He thinks that his Sandwich and cereals are better? Poor guy! Hasn't enjoyed life enough...I pity him...missing all the tasty oil dripping Parathas and sweets! Now Madhu is here na...even without trying she can impress him with her culinary skills!

Oh so his girlfriend's name is Des? What's her full name? When will she make an appearance? It seems that Rishab is not visiting her after marriage!

Sujoy and Madhu's bonding is great! His brotherly affection and silly pitiable jokes is warming up Madhu in a new foreign land. Can't believe Rishab is jealous of him Lol!

I totally forgot that you asked our names. Yes I am Souwmiya, from Tamil Nadu! A Tamilian 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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super update di..👏
Rishab asking for a piece of paratha.. then a whole paratha.. then asking her to pack was really funny... poor guy got sick of eating cold sandwich LOL! 😆
Rishab speaking hindi, briefly praying to lord ganesha, secretly admiring Madhu all such scenes are so cute and lovely di...
Madhu is really fussy about foods... she wants to give the best food to her palate!😆
Did by any chance I saw jealousy in Rishab's eyes when Madhu was laughing at Sooj's jokes? wanna make your wife laugh like that and keep her happy Rishab? then you should throw that Des out of your life soon...

while reading this chapter's title - trails, I surprisingly remembered three other chapter titles di ..😆
1. Truce (part 10)
2. Jaunt (Part 18)
3. Sunshine (Part 22 or 23?)

Thanks for the update di...😃



Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago

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