New Rishbala TS: Who Am I?- Last part updated on pg.18 (27/09/16)

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Mikolingam

@Mikolingam

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Different concept. Made loves Sultan. RK dead and his face on Sultan' s body. trying to digest it.

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

@vishuv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: Mikolingam
Different concept. Made loves Sultan. RK dead and his face on Sultan' s body. trying to digest it.

No worries dear!

Thanks for liking and commenting 😃

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

@vishuv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

Friends sorry! I know its late but I will try to post the update within this week...Am busy with counselling dates and all so why...

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Badbuddy

@Badbuddy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: vishuv
Friends sorry! I know its late but I will try to post the update within this week...Am busy with counselling dates and all so why...

Oh OK!! Take your time!!
But update soon after being free.

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Anupriya

@shinegirl100

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#125

OHH MYY GODD DIII...IT WAS AMAZINGGG

u know it was just awesome..wat should i say..i m not able to find the correct word..🤣.🤣.

this story is lucky that i chose it...🤣..my first story written by u that i read..🤗..❤️

the start it was just superbb..the accident memory loss and all..everything was written fab...loved it shooo much..

the way u described everything was perfect...u r an amazing writer...sis...loved it alottt..and yeah that duo was soo cute..RK and doc duo..it was sooo sweet..lovedd it ❤️i also have a duo like this ..me and my doc uncle.❤️

this story makes me think why cant i write..😔🤣everytime i tries to write it comes out to be something..ugghh..which no one can understand..i m a horrible writer..🤣..🤣..🤣

i know i m late in commenting..🤣..bt u have my comment nw..its just that ..that i m a bit lazy..and bit busiee too..🤣..soo commenting finally..waise no sorriee for commenting late..🤣..we r frns right..

hmm soo i read the story..and nw i m curious to know..wat is gonna happen next..soo update sooonish..dont be lazy like me..🤣

comment soonish..or i will eat ur head..🤣

with lotsss and loadss of love

Anupriya❤️

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

@vishuv

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: shinegirl100
OHH MYY GODD DIII...IT WAS AMAZINGGG

u know it was just awesome..wat should i say..i m not able to find the correct word..🤣.🤣.
this story is lucky that i chose it...🤣..my first story written by u that i read..🤗..❤️

the start it was just superbb..the accident memory loss and all..everything was written fab...loved it shooo much..
the way u described everything was perfect...u r an amazing writer...sis...loved it alottt..and yeah that duo was soo cute..RK and doc duo..it was sooo sweet..lovedd it ❤️i also have a duo like this ..me and my doc uncle.❤️

this story makes me think why cant i write..😔🤣everytime i tries to write it comes out to be something..ugghh..which no one can understand..i m a horrible writer..🤣..🤣..🤣

i know i m late in commenting..🤣..bt u have my comment nw..its just that ..that i m a bit lazy..and bit busiee too..🤣..soo commenting finally..waise no sorriee for commenting late..🤣..we r frns right..

hmm soo i read the story..and nw i m curious to know..wat is gonna happen next..soo update sooonish..dont be lazy like me..🤣

comment soonish..or i will eat ur head..🤣

with lotsss and loadss of love
Anupriya❤️

Wow dearie! You are back to comment! Hehe naughty girl...even you are gonna try writing! Poor readers 😆

Thanks for the wishes! Happy to see that you love it...You should have read my other works. Its far better than this...coz this is one twisted concept LOL 😳

Wow! You and your Dr uncle! That's also so cute 😃

Its ok dear better late than never 😆

I hope I didn't bore you with the story 😆 Anyways you are gonna read it for me 😈

Thanks for reading, liking and commenting! It means a lot 🤗

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

@vishuv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

@vishuv

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Last part updated in the above post.

Thanks for your likes and comment friends. Sorry if this story is not up to your expectations. Anything is welcomed 😆

Edited by vishuv - 8 years ago

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 8 years ago

#129

First!!!

Brilliant finishing dear...

Rishbala's love story was narrated so neatly and beautifully...

The way u have written the dance sequence... the mudras (that's what we call those poses nah? the joy, angry, lust and pain?) actually u have said Rishbala's love story in that simple yet lovely scene... applaud for ur imagination dear...

yeah... their first meet was so joyous... Rk was a gone as soon he came face to face with madhu...

you know what? i felt this madhu greedy... yeah becos she asked him to get her Scooty for just breaking the rear lights LOL!!

awwee... their ride to the library on her scooty was one romantic moment...

i loved their love confession.. it was so sweet and DIVINE!!

Rk had tears seeing her dance gracefully... lovely lovely...

their death was painful... it would have been more painful if either of them had survived and to live without the other... so it's better they died together and living in heaven happily...

even if both had survived but Madhu couldn't dance then it would kill her and seeing her in pain will pain Rk too... so its better their divine love ended this way...

Madhu's sis was angry that Rk didn't call for an ambulance and look after her sis but doing social service but then realised her sis was no less... even she wasn't caring for her pain but was consoling an injured kid... it shows Rk loves her dance and Madhu love his social service mind... thats what we call as Match made in heaven jodi... and now the jodi is having dance jodi dance contest in heaven... LOL!!

LOL!! I felt like you played safe... you didn't dare to even match this Madhu-mathi with that Sultan... u let us readers to imagine whether Madhu gave him a second chance or not... fr me.. NO!!! she loves her jiju and can see him only as her sister's lover... so she can't romance Sultan with her jiju's face... so ullu sullu ki babaji ka thullu!!! LOL!!!

I will imagine like Madhumathi continued her sister's dancin class... after all she is madhu's sister and she could have learned some dance but she didn't show much passion before as she was lazy... but nw she will dance to keep her sister's name memorable!! but then she cn't become the legendary dance Madhubala... still she can dance and make her sis happy who is looking at her up above the world so high... like a diamond in the sky!! LOL!!

and that sultan can do some social service and at least try to reduce the rate of sins he committed in the serial and in all the stories!! LOL!!

Thank you so much souwmi for giving this unique and lovely story to read... it's so perfect! i loved it! keep writing more on rishbala...

(Hey you said pink part flash back nah? but the color looked like violet in my phone... blue in my laptop... and lavender in my office PC... nowhere it looked like pink color... I don't know why? 😆)

Edited by madhurish - 8 years ago

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sapana

@sapnaf52

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#130

Second!!!
awesome update Sowmi,
madhumati was real twist in this story. ..
rishbala first meeting was superb. .., cute
madhu dance, confession. ..was soo lovely
wish they are alive. ...
rishbala ending was so emotional. ..
i feel like cry. ..
rishbala face was alive in madhumati and sultan. ..
twist was awesome dear. ..
madhu loss her life to safe her sister. ..and rk give his face to sultan. ..unknowingly. .
Thanks for pm dear. ..

Edited by sapnaf52 - 8 years ago

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