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Aaniya

@EVIL_ANGEL

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: GOODLUCKANGEL
Im loving it very much.It seems like im watching mbeiej once again. Awesome.

same here.. Watching mb all over again with different lil twists...!!! Nyc update...!!!

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janani

@janani04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Madhu whispers "all this are a part of his dirty plays,i know about him ",Trishna shows the signature of RK in the cheque."Sir,you can verify the sign.we need money it's urgent,please ".The manager tells them about ths letter which RK gave exlaining about the cheque book being missing from morning.and Trishna comes out the bank with losing all their hopes of getting money for the operation of Shamsher.Madhu sees the posters about the film of RK,and begin to tear it with so much anger.Trishna controls her from behaving weird,Madhu cries"he caused all this problems bow,let's go and asks him about the matter,we ,even we have no more options ",both of them tries RK's number for several times.RK sits happily in his home eating the chocolate ice cream .he sees the phone ringing and tells"Madhu calling, mmm not my madhu calling.he cuts the call,and messages both of them "if you want money please come to studio.only madhu wants to come after two hours ".Trishna asks Madhu to go and meet RK in studio.she accepts for RK.and they gets in to the auto passing nearby.Madhu sees the call from Padmini,"di,ma is. Calling ,what to do now ?".Trishna wipes her tears and attends the call with unhappiness."Trishna,Madhu someone paid the money for treatment of Shamsher,both of you come soon to see him".Trishna tells the news to madhu with surprise.Both of them rushes back to the hospital and sees RK's new film director paying the money to the hospital.standing there with the bills of Shamsher in his hand.Madhu tries to talk when she receives a message from RK(voice mail),he says"I paid the bills of malik,and Now its your turn madhu ,"he walks from there.Trishna sees Malik through the glass order and smiles happily.Padmini asks them about the person who paid the bill for Malik.Madhu smiles seeing the happiness in Roma and paddo's face.she signs Trishna and leaves from there towards the studio.

"Come fast "tells RK on seeing the film in TV.he sees Madhu's number and smiles evily.she tells"I am standing in front of the studio but where are you RK?".He increases the sound of the TV and tells(whispers)"in my house Madhu".she cannot hear anything due to sound and cuts the call.Bitto comes in with the paper signed by Padmini and Trishna for the formalities of the hospital.Bitto sees the phone ringing once again.he tells about almost ten missed calls from madhu.RK switches the airplane mode in the phone. Trishna tells madhu about RK paying just 12 lacs for the treatment "so only one operation can be done,did you met him?".Madhu sees RK's message and tells"Di,you don't worry I will even die to save malik",she reads the message"come fast to my house or else".she gets into a auto and goes to RK's house.they says"Sir just left to sitara studio",Madhu rushes to the place .She enters the place which is fully dark..RK sits eating the icecream along with Bittoji.

"Wow,madhu you are speeder than the breeze ,mmm but you are not as delicate as breeze ,aren't you?" teases RK in his own tone on seeing madhu there.Madhu walks towards his place with confusion in her eyes.

"what chief,madhubala ji is so much tired ,ji you drink this juice "offers Bitto to madhu a bottle full of wine.Madhu stares at him and tells"thank you RK for helping my dad,he is everything to us but still I cannot trust you".tells madhu on seeing RK ,He signs Bitto to go out.

Padmini asks Trishna about madhu for the hundredth time with tension.Trishna tries to convince her by telling some lies.even she begin to get worried for madhu.

Precap:RK tells his conditions.he says first.

(Guys I am updating a story "love story starts with hatred"in writers corner page,I hope you will like it ,please give it a try".

Edited by janani04 - 9 years ago

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manna43

@manna43

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Awesome update.Evil rk in full form.

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GOODLUCKANGEL

@GOODLUCKANGEL

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

omg! This RK is heartless m so cruel.poor madhu.Getting more interesting.lobed it.why font u write fat story here in dis forum?

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janani

@janani04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Madhu sees Bitto leaving the place,she asks RK to explain the reason why he asked her to come in order to meet him.RK asks her to wait and tells"just wait for three minutes,the climax is coming ",Madhu angrily stands there,she gets so much worried about the rest of the amount which she nerds for the treatment of Shamsher. She tries to call RK to explain her situation but RK acts like watching the film.he switches the TV and "mmm what do you want now,money,chance to act in film or anything "winks his eyes.Madhu sees him walking towards her and moves back in fear in her eyes.RK laughs seeing her fear,he says"I have explained you hundred times,RK is not a villain but your hero,I mean peoples ".Madhu sees RK with hatred in her eyes.he shows her the seat and repeats his question.Madhu hesitantly thanks him,"but I can't understand your mind set RK",tells Madhu on seeing his eyes.

"You must accept some of the conditions of mine so that I will pay the rest 2500000 for your Malik,will you hear me or not?" Sarcastically he smiles seeing her.Madhu nods yes.

RK:please take your seat,because you will get shock

Madhu:tell me

RK:I want you to act with me

Madhu:what?

RK:yes in real life as my wife as Mrs.madhubala Rishab kundra.

Madhu(worried): next

RK:it means you accepted the first condition,next

Madhu: next...

RK:that's all madhu ,just one condition,other things comes under the subclass of it and a assurance to you.

Madhu:...

RK:I have sent the rest of money to your malik's hospital.

Madhu:the,,thanks.

RK:what about my condition.?

Madhu:but why?

RK:to enjoy my life with someone,to have a chance to give back the debt to you Madhu alias Mrs RK.

Madhu:you are a sadist

RK:thank you and you have this only chance,and even your sister and mom has signed the document ,I will read it

" until we pay back the debt to sri.rishab kundra .we have accepted our madhu to live with him ",Madhu closes her ears and shouts "Stop it,stop it ".

Madhu:you are not a human.

RK:about my condition.

Madhu:how would I be sure about you paid the money.

RK:OK let's go to the hospital and see him then decide but don't try to back from it because I will publish the document in paper .

Madhu:I haven't accepted anything

RK:but you will.

They goes to the madhu's house.Mukund sits worried thinking about his life and past,he feels very much guilty for creating problems in Madhu's life and not trusting her completely.his mother comes home with bundle of money and sits happily near him.Mukund sees her with shock.Padmini slaps madhu for accepting the offer of RK.Trishna stands spell bound on seeing the tactics of RK.RK stands as a silent observer of things.Madhu shows them the copy of papers.Trishna shouts "wow Madhu,so it is all your plan,you made us to live in hell and you live happily,so cheap",All of them sees her with shock.RK gets shocked on hearing the words of trishna.Padmini scolds Trishna for talking with her like that.Roma asks Trishna to shut her mouth for a while.Trishna tells"Mr and Mrs RK,get out from here, get out ".RK signs Madhu to come. He says"I know no one likes this marriage but don't curse her,you Madhu because she will suffer more in my house ",he takes her away.Trishna shuts the door of house .Trishna sits crying "she is not very innocent, Roma".

Madhu stands in the lane remembering her moments which she spent in the place.RK almost drags her from there.Madhu sees RK with anger and tells"you want me to suffer but I won't shed a drop of years from this moment ".

Precap:marriage in lane.

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varsha joshi

@varshajoshi17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Superb update dear loved it

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janani

@janani04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Madhu stands there in the lane, she remembers playing in the lane along with Trishna and the words which she spoke to madhu,she sits in the floor with tears.RK stands seeing madhu crying.he gets a bit concerned and goes to console her but stops himself from doing so,he says"let's go,its getting late ",he makes her to get up and takes her along with him.Padmini sees madhu going along with RK in his car,she cries holding the window grill.Trishna breaks things in the house with so much anger.she shouts"today we are living with too much problem but RK is happy with Madhu, she is spineless".Roma signs her not to talk too much.Padmini takes the broken pieces of Madhu's photo and takes it ,she gets hurt from the glass pieces.Trishna"ma,be careful,you please wait ".

RK smiles seeing madhu staring at him with anger,she says"You want to see my failure in life but I won't fail in life,from this moment I won't cry ",she wipes out the tears with the help of her hand.RK takes out a tissue and tells"have it,you must look beautiful till marriage".Madhu pulls it from his hand.both of them remains silent.He stops the car in front of RK mansion.Padmini"don't worry Trishna, I have faced many problems in my life,from my husband,my career and now by my daughter",Roma says"don't talk like this about madhu ,may be"she stops her sentence on seeing the eyes of padmini.She tells"I meant trishna, you know trishna until this moment Madhu didn't give up anything in her life but today for us,she almost sacrificed everything.today you made me think that you are just my step daughter",she walks outside the home.

Next morning,Madhu sees herself sleeping in RK's car.she turns and finds RK sleeping near her in the driver seat itself.she tries to go out but cannot open the car door."do you need my help Madhu?"asks RK opening his eyes.she says "nothing "and tries herself RK extends his hand to help her,madhu turns and finds herself in between in hands.madhu tries to push him and the radio switches, "aalawaria plays".they share a eyekock.Padmini reaches the hospital and sits in front of the ICU waiting to meet shamsher.She sees Bitto there,Bitto stands near her and tells"auntyji,I need to tell you something which chief asked to",he gives the Invitation of RK's wedding with madhu .Padmini sees it and tears it into many pieces with anger and throws it away in the trashcan.Madhu sees many jewels kept in the bed,she angrily takes a box to throw it and sees her jewels in it which she mortgage in shop.RK enters the room ,he knocks at the door"madhubala mam,shall I come in if you permits me".

"Do you give any sort of importance to my wishes in my life "murmurs madhu on seeing RK.he gives a beautiful saree to Madhu,and says"sometimes we cannot expect our dreams inife,even I wished to be with my",he suddenly changes into evil,"this is the time for masti not for sorrows, so get ready sharply at evening,now I am leaving from here madhu ji",he walks out along with Bitto.Bitto explains the way Padmini behaves,"as expected always ".says RK.Madhu sees the saree which RK gave in her hand and sits in the bed tired of all this things.

Precap:You can do whatever you like for four hours madhu."says RK.

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GOODLUCKANGEL

@GOODLUCKANGEL

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

I like it when Rk says madhubala ji.Is dis story goin to b complete version of mbeiej serial or there wud b sum changes too.Nice update.Im loving it.

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janani

@janani04

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Part 19

Madhu sees no charge in her phone,she takes out the phone in the room and decides to call Padmini to talk with her .she doesn't get proper phone connection and sits there in stress thinking about the health of shamsher,she prays to the god to keep malik healthy.RK sits in the studio thinking about the event which are occurring in some days,he takes out his cellphone and calls Madhu's number.he finds the number switched off.he calls the home number,"hello,to whom do you want to speak ?"asks madhu in a emotionless voice.RK laughs out loudly and tells"its me madhubala,I called to give you a offer that you can go anywhere and anything until 7pm".Madhu didn't give reply ,she says"so what dies it brings to me?",RK cuts the call without telling anything to madhu.Mukund comes from his room and tries Madhu's number in the phone."to whom are you trying to talk Mukund"asks his mother from kitchen.he tells"madhubala",his mother comes running takes the phone from his hand.she yells at him for talking with madhu now.He shouts back"you planned everything with that RK and spolied my entire life,you are responsible for everything,",he goes out of the house and walks towards the office.

"I have solidely 3 hours from now,I can go anytwgete and do anything but at end everything will be same as before ,I need to live,mmm not act as RK's wife until my death,but where should I go,there us nothing to me outside thus house today,he shatters everything and now acting like innocent person "thinks madhu on sipping the coffee given by servant to her .she takes out the landline and calls "RK"back.

Padmini sees Shamsher taken from the hospital room to the operation theatre. She stands there praying to the god to give back Shamsher's life."surely he will give back malik's life because he has taken my life ma"tells madhu standing behind Padmini with tears.Padmini hugs her and searches for the signs of marriage in the face of madhu.madhu understands her search and tells"today night only the marriage will happen ma".padmini sits in the nearby chair and tells"you better run to some other place madhu so that he cannot marry you ".Madhu sits near her with a bitter smile.

(Continued)