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Bol Do Na Zara

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|| Bol Do Na Zara ||

Prologue



Mumbai,

Event ceremony

Today the Filmfare award ceremony is going to take place, the auditorium was decorated nicely, a huge stage was made. The reporters were all ready to shoot the event live, few reporters were surfing outside and taking pictures of the actors those arriving there, few were busy in taking interview. The huge people were making chaos seeing their favourite stars when finally a white BMW car entered, seeing the car, the people along with reporters rushed to the car and soon police, guards were stopped them. The car slowly reached near the auditorium gate and a short height man walked out from the front seat and opened the back door.

Meanwhile people especially girls were trying to reach to the car but as usual they couldn't due to the high security. But they were continuously calling his name, "RK... RK!!"

There, he stepped out from the car, checking his phone. Without giving them a damn to the crowd, he walked towards the entrance but near to the gate, he stopped and turned at the crowd, he showed them his hand and have them a flying kiss with a smile and then walked inside.

RK took the seat from the first row when few directors, producers who worked with him came to greet and RK gets busy with them. When from somewhere Bittuji arrived there, "Excuse me chief..." RK looked at Bittuji tensed and excused from there.

RK : What happen Bittuji? Is everything alright?

Bittuji : Chief... I got a call from Mr. Khanna and he confirmed the schedule that tomorrow has an outdoor shoot.

RK sighed deeply : You just scared me!!

Bittuji looked at him confused as RK never stay calm when it comes to sudden outdoor shoot. Bittuji : You mean, should I confirm the shoot then?

RK patted on his shoulder saying : Of course Bittuji...

Bittuji : OK chief.." Bittuji was going to leave but seeing RK's excitement he couldn't stop himself and asked : Chief is there anything special that you looks so happy..

RK : Yes Bittuji there's... You know from last two years, how much I was struggling in this industry and finally the day has arrived...

He sighed with a bright smile, Bittuji just looked at him confused and asked : I don't get you chief...

RK winked at him saying : Just wait and watch!!

He just left from there leaving Bittuji confused. On his way RK met with the star Abhay Kapoor. "Hello RK.." RK first thought to not talk with him but once Abhay said, "Come on.. Did you get scared of me?" RK couldn't control and looked at him.

"Excuse me? Why should I get scared of you hun?"

AK : No. I was thinking that every year you came to this event with a hope to receive the superstar award but as usual I took them from you. So I thought you gets scared to stand in front of me. You know what RK, it took me five years to achieve the success but being a newcomer you are dreaming about the superstar award.. I should salute you!!!

Meanwhile RK was Silently hearing him and then spoke : You know what.. Yeh kismat bohot kameeni cheez hoti hai.. Kab palat jaye pata hi nehi chalta.. It's your time that you are ruling on people's heart but soon game game will change. And I won't be scared of you.. Kyu ki jab tak khel mein barabar ka takkar na ho tab tak khel mein maza kaha aata hai.. So good luck!!

Saying this RK left from there, he didn't even let AK speak much.

Motihari village,

"Didu please.. Give me the remote." Trishna was chasing behind Madhu. "No Trishu!! I won't.. I know what you'll see and I haven't least interest in that live event." Madhu replied still running.

Trishna : Didu please.. Let me see who gets the award, RK or AK.. Please please..

Madhu : Noo!!

Madhu was running and she bumped with Balraj and the remote fall from her hand, "Sorry chachaji.."

Balraj angrily glaring at Madhu when Trishna was about to say something but he showed her his palm to stop her.

Balraj : It's not your play ground that you are chasing all around. I am letting you live in my house, it's not mean that you can do whatever you want.. Baap ka toh kuch pata nehi aur chodhh gaye musibaat..

Hearing this Madhu's eyes filled with tears, "Bauji please.. Don't talk.." Trishna was going to protest but Balraj shouted, "You keep quiet. For this girl, toh are still at house.. You have grown up for getting married but for this bad omen... No one is ready to accept you. Nor she is getting married not letting you.."

Hearing his shout Padmini (Madhu's mother) and Damini (Trishna's mother) came out from inside and saw Madhu crying. Damini rushed to her and console her, meanwhile Balraj was accusing her.

Balraj : I thought to fix Trishna's marriage with a rich person but here if I get a simple person, it will be my luck.

Damini : What are you saying? Please stop it..

Balraj : No.. I am saying right. For this girl, Trishna spoiled, she didn't complete her studies.

Trishna interrupted saying : It's not because of Didu.. I don't like to study that's why I quit. So please don't blame her.

Balraj rolled his eyes and again looked at Madhu and said : Look Madhu.. If you really wants to stay here with your mother, then you have to earn money as I can't take your responsibility more.

Madhu replied with a sob : OK chachaji. I will find a suitable job for me.

Balraj : This will be better for you.

After using few more bad words he left from there when Madhu too ran inside, Padmini said there crying.

Padmini : Why did he left us alone? If he would be here then we shouldn't have to face all this. Madhu would have get married till now. Balraj said right, Madhu becomes bad omen for Trishna.

Damini console her saying : Please didi.. Don't say this. Madhu is my daughter too. You will see one day will come when Madhu will get married and will get the love.

They hugged each other crying.

Madhu was crying in her room recalling the words which Balraj said, Trishna came when Madhu hugged her.

Trishna : Didu please. Don't cry. You know how much it hurts me.. Please stop crying.

Madhu : Chachaji was right. For me your life is spoiling.

Trishna : No. Don't think like this. And to be honest, it's good that my marriage isn't getting fix.

Madhu looked at her confused and asked while wiping her tears : Why so?

Trishna : Bas yuhi.." she winked. "Now please don't start again. Let me concentrate on the event. I already missed." saying this Trishna turned on the TV. They were watching the event when sometimes screen flashes on RK's face, Trishna jumped in excitement.

Madhu : Oh god Trishu.. Why are you sooo mad for him?

Trishna : You won't understand.

Madhu rolled her eyes and continue her works while watching.

"So ladies and gentleman now hold your breath because now I am going to announce the name of the person who will get the Star of the night award.."

Trishna was excitedly watching without blinking her eyes and mumbling, "RK.. RK.. RK.." Madhu smiled.

"And the award goes to Mr. Rishabh Kundra.."

Trishna simply jumped hearing the name and started dancing. "Yaayy!! RK won.." She twirled Madhu in excitement.

Madhu : Calm down Trishu..

Trishna : Didu.. I will come later.

She just left the room when Madhu looked at RK who was receiving the award.

Mumbai,

RK was coming from the event with Bittuji, "Chief.. You knew it. Isn't?" Bittuji asked.

RK : What Bittuji?

Bittuji : That you won the award and that's why you were happy. But I don't get how did you know?

RK : From my spy.. You just enjoy the moment.. We should celebrate it.

Bittuji nodded with a smile.

RK reached at mansion and directly went to his mother Meera Kundra. He was about to take blessing from her when she stopped him saying : Oh come on RK!! Now you are superstar so don't bend your head to anyone.

RK : But you are my mother.. I need your blessings.

Meera : My blessings are always with you." saying this she hugged him. He then hugged his father and left the room. RK was going to his room when he found some lights were coming from kitchen, he looked around but didn't find anyone so he went to check when he saw Radha was arranging the dinner table.

RK : Maa!! You didn't sleep yet.

Radha smiled saying : When my son wasn't at home, then how can a mother slept?

RK smiled and took blessing from her saying : Bless your son Maa!! So that he can achieve more success.

Radha placed her hand on his head.

RK : ... And this award is yours as you always support me, motivate me. So without you, I would never get this.

Radha : I did what every mother does!!

RK : But my own mother who have me birth never does...

A tear rolled out from his eyes when Radha nodded no and wiped his tear and hugged him. This was witnessed by Meera who was furiously left from there.

Radha : Now come and have your dinner. I know you didn't eat anything.

Radha made him sit and fed him happily.

Next morning, RK was all ready to go. He took blessing from Radha.

RK : Take care Maa!! Don't get stress. I will call you whenever I will be free.

Radha : You too take care. Bittuji.. It's your responsibility to look after him.

Bittuji : Yes auntyji.. I will.

RK then turned at Meera and bid adieu saying : Bye mom!!

He didn't let her speak and left out, she angrily looked at Radha and walked inside.

RK and Bittuji was on their way when RK asked : By the way, in which village the shoot is going to be??

Bittuji : Motihari..

RK nodded.

It had been two hours, they were travelling and finally they reached to the village, RK was fast asleep when suddenly he felt a jerk and heard a girl's shout...

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You guys might me thinking of Meera is RK's mother then why is he calling Radha Maa.. Let me clear Radha is Mohan's first wife whom he gave divorce coz she isn't educated, it was forced marriage for him but after giving divorce he let her stay in the house coz she has no one in her family and then Mohan married Meera.

Finally wrote the prologue. I hope you will like it.. Please drop your comments. Advance thank you.






Edited by ..snow_flake.. - 9 years ago
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Res Unres
Yipeee! ME first 🥳
Congrats for your new story 👍🏼

Wow the start was amazing. From RK receiving the award to the sisters watching it. Trishna is just like the show- a crazy fan of RK.
Can't imagine Meera as RK's mother . But I can see RK loves Radha more than his biological mother.
I dunno how will Mohan Kundra be if he divorced such a nice woman like Radha...
Madhu and Trish were so cute. Bu the demon Balraj came in between 😡 What ? Even Padmini thinks Madhu as a bad omen? You well portrayed a typical village scene beautifully 😊
Hats off
So RK is coming to Motihari. Wow ! can't wait for their meeting...

Thanks for PM 😃

Edited by vishuv - 9 years ago
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Nice pro.enjoyed a lot.update soon.
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Interesting start
Loved it Eagerly waiting for rk n Madhu meet
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Once the story is fully completed... I will read & comment to every single chapter...
I m not going to take the risk of reading & get disappointed when it is discontinued in the middle...
Sorry... I m really upset with u for stopping "Realization" story after giving over 20 chapters... We all loved that story but we didnt get a proper nding to it... So here... I will patiently wait for the story to complete... & then i will read in one go!

Anyway, congrats for ur new story...
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Originally posted by: madhurish

Once the story is fully completed... I will read & comment to every single chapter...

I m not going to take the risk of reading & get disappointed when it is discontinued in the middle...
Sorry... I m really upset with u for stopping "Realization" story after giving over 20 chapters... We all loved that story but we didnt get a proper nding to it... So here... I will patiently wait for the story to complete... & then i will read in one go!

Anyway, congrats for ur new story...

now I am disappoint.. But I get few pm's to continue realization.. So I will write it.. And no worries.. I will continue them.
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Originally posted by: vishuv

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Res Unres</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Yipeee! ME first 🥳</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Congrats for your new story👍🏼</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Wow the start was amazing. From RK receiving the award to the sisters watching it. Trishna is just like the show- a crazy fan of RK.</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Can't imagine Meera as RK's mother . But I can see RK loves Radha more than his biological mother.</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">I dunno how will Mohan Kundra be if he divorced such a nice woman like Radha...</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Madhu and Trish were so cute. Bu the demon Balraj came in between😡What ? Even Padmini thinks Madhu as a bad omen? You well portrayed a typical village scene beautifully😊</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Hats off</font>
<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">So RK is coming to Motihari. Wow ! can't wait for their meeting...</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Thanks for PM😃</font>

Hmm.. Thank u dear.. I will try to portray every character once the story will proceed..
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Originally posted by: ..snow_flake..

now I am disappoint.. But I get few pm's to continue realization.. So I will write it.. And no worries.. I will continue them.



That's a great news.
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Congrats for new story.. Nice prologue.. Waiting for update... Please don't dis-continue the story last tak continue karna...

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