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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing update...its vry interesting
tfs for pm
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Royal start.Loved the beginning. Pics shows the grandeur. Madhu's edit r awesome. Rishbala hate each other.Madhu seems more manipulative.Characters name r really royal.Meera is silly sikky's evil mother.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Different concept i really enjoyed reading that... Waiting for next part n lots lots of rishbala xx
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey do updatethis soon I'm really eagerfor this one
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Poorva congrats on the new story.
Ekdum mast aahe, mela khup aavadli, interesting concept.
Madhu's edit in Maharashtrian style are very very beautiful.
Continue soon, waiting to read more.
Thanks for the PM dear.
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rishbala hate each other bcz of their fathers' death.But circumstance made them marry.They r on their mission to make each other suffer.Kets see how their revenge turns in2 luv.U have done a r8 job in doing a historical work esp names n edited pics
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dedicating this Part to all my readers especially madhurish and Ragingblaze two desperate ladies in this whole universe.

@Vishuv and Silverfire : your request about edits on Rishbh is granted.. I will upload more edits on rk on next part


@madhurish : yeah, there names are hard to pronounce but they are one of the richest Maratha kingdoms.

Few things to clarify :

1. The picture Of Palaces i have posted are Real and still present in Baroda, Indore and maheshwar. I have visited palace of Maheshwar and it is really beautiful.
2. Everyone have watched Bajirao Mastani and some are worried that like Bajirao who is bald 'is RK is Bald too?'.. I have say Ye.. No!!! Bajirao was a Pure Brahmins but Gaekwads are not. So don't Imagine Rk bald. But sorry to say that Radha, Padmini and meera.. Sorry I can't help it.

Enough now.. Here is story.



Part 2.

"Madhu!! Utha, Apana Usira.. (Get up, you are late...)" Kalyani shakes Madhu. "Yeah.. Yeah.." Madhu Rubs her eyes with her eyes still closed. "It's your First day in your sasural." Kalyani gently reminds her. Madhu opens her eyes furiously hearing her and throws pillow toward kalyani, "Ouch!!", "Madhu.. Last.. Night.. Rajesaheb walks away... Did you scare him..." Kalyani ask curiously. "Shutup!" Madhu says not want to talk about this. "Ok baba!!!" Kalyani says laughingly. "Ranisaheb!!" One maid came with thali in her hand which was covered with red cloth. "Yes." Madhu ask her. "Badi Aaisaheb gave this.. She said you have to wear this.. And meet her at Khandoba temple which is situated near court room..." Maid tells her. Kalyani gently remove cloth and shows Madhu beautiful saree and jewelries. "Sundara (beautiful)." Madhu says looking at jeweleries. "Mi Kase sodhata ahe ? (How I am looking ?)" Madhu ask Kalyani and two of her maids. "You look beautiful Madhu!!" Everyone replied in unison.


Madhu stops and chuckles seeing Rk who was busing examining his sword. Rk furiously look at Madhu 'how Dare SHE' Rk thought. Rk get with and walks toward her, "Why are you laughing?" Rk ask her as he grab her hand. "Mala Soda Rakshas!! ( Leave me devil.) Madhu struggle while pushing him. " How Dare you laugh at ME!!" Rk shouts as he locks her between him and wall. "Say!!" Rk grab her face but stop as Madhu pinch him very hardly on his showlder. "Madhumakhi (Honeybee)" , "Rakshas (Monster)". " I will laugh.. Ha.. Ha.. Ha.. I throw you from your Room." Madhu says laughing. Rk furiously picks his sword and Put it on her next, "Your Neck is so delicate and my sword is sharp.. If you dare to say another word then i swear of My Aaisaheb I will cut your next and will burry you here.." Rk threatened her. Madhu was about to say but Kalyani cames and begged her to stop this.

As soon as Madhu enter she spot three widows wearing fade colors clothes and completely Bald in Room, two were sitting on swing discussing something while another one who was nearly of her age was siting on floor stitching curtains. "Aaushman Bhava.." Radha says as Madhu touches her feet. "No need!" Meera says rudely seeing Madhu was about to touch her feet. Madhu looks at another girl curiously, seeing Her Bahu curious look Radha introduces Madhu to That Girl, "She is Trishna.. My elder son late Mukund's Wife.. " Radha tells her. "Whom your family made Widow!!" Meera says furiously. "Shantha!! ( Silence)" Radha says. Madhu smiles at Trishna but she ignores her and continue to stitch. "Maid said Badi Aaisaheb called me." Madhu slowly tells them. "Aaaisaheb your life is long. Your New Bahu was asking about you..." Meera says as she spot Pabho entering with four servents behind her with thalis in their hands

Madhu shockingly look at Pabho who was busy looking at her pabho grab her face while Madhu winch in pain, "Good..." Pabho says leaving her face. "Welcome to gaekwad family.." Pabho says in fake smile. Pabho walks toward Maid and remove clth from thalis, "This is for you.. Jewelries and alll..." Pabho says thrusting thalis on Madhu's hand. Madhu gave thali to her maid and touches Pabho feet, "may you live long.." Pabho says. "Trishna!!! Show her whole Palace.." Pabho orders trishna. "Thanks.." Madhu says admiring jewelries. "Now you go and make kheer.. This is your first day in your sasural.." Pabho says leaving.



"Aaisaheb.. Aaisaheb!!" Meera run behind Pabho. "Sunbai (daughter in law)!!.. How many times i have to remind you to behave like a mother of twp childrens. " Mala Mapha kara (I am sorry).. But how can you trat her so well? Did you forget she killed my husband your son..", "I know.. I know.. You don't have to tell me so many times.. This is all because of that chatrapati.. I swear i will kill her with my own hands.. Just wait for some days soon you will see her dead body.. " Pabho says evilly. "I will let Rishabh marry a beautiful princess then her..." Pabho says happily while Meera make face.

"Vaini (Bhabhi).. I am Madhubala.." Madhu says To Trishna. Trishna continues to ignores Madhu and silently walks while showing Palace to Madhu. "Vaini?" Madhu curiously look at Trishna thinking as trishna is deef. Trishna looks at her angrily, "Wait here.." Trishna says and walks away. Trishna comes with a Kalash in her hand, trishna gives Kalash to Madhu's hand. "Vaini, what is this?" Madhu ask curiously. "This is my mukund.." Trishna says as tears escape from her eyes. "What?" Madhu ask shockingly. "Yes my Mukund.. My Mukund ashes.." Trishna cries more. Madhu drops Kalash from her hand in shock. "How dare you!!" Trishna shouts and picks up kalash angrily. "Vaini.." Madhu tries to say. "Because of you all my mukund died... Everyone believes This is my bad luck who killed Mukund... Tell me is this my fault.." Trishna ask shaking Madhu. "And they also believe I can't give birth to child... I was only 15 when mukund died and he was 16.. Tell me at that tender age i can give birth to a child!!!... We didn't even had that relation with each other... This is all beacause of you.. I hate you Madhubala!!!" Trishna cries more. "Vaini.. ", " Don't say a word..." Trishna shouts. "I curse you madhubala.. Just like mine you too will not have any peaceful life.. You will cry.. Cry.. And cry..." Trishna angrily says and walks away leaving a shocked Madhu.

"Smell so delicious..." Kalyani says dramatically smelling kheer. Madhu chuckles seeing her egarness and continues to Stir kheer in a very huge pan. "Let me taste this.." Kalyani says picking up spoon from table. "No. You can't.." Madhu says angrily. "But why?... Oh.. Yeah.. I forgot first your Rishabh Raje will taste this kheer and then we are allowed to taste it...haina!!!" Kalyani says naughtily. Madhu frowns and quickly grab spoon from kalyani's hand and taking out a great amount of kheer in spoon she pushed it on kalyani's mouth. "Now you shut you mouth and eat this kheer.." Madhu says furiously giving her more.

"Seems like Today dishes are very tasty..." Rk says sitting on Stairs which was near court room. Everyone started getting up leaving there food seeing there Raje sitting. Rk smiles and signs them to sit, "yes, Raje.. It is very tasty especially Kheer.. You should taste it.." Bittuji said while attacking on kheer. "My aaisaheb makes kheer very very Tasty.." Rk says happily thinking that his mother made kheer. "Raje.. Wo.. Sunbai made kheer.." Maid tells him while she look down. Rk makes an disgusted Face and replies, "No I don't want to eat... Give me dishes made by you all..." Rk says furiously. Everyone silently eats realizing they are eating dish made by their kingdom rival's daughter. "Ho Raje.." Maid walks away.

Madhu hides behind curtain to listen to their conversation and chuckles hearing this, "Even I am not interested in serving my delicious kheer to you Rakshas... Anyway enjoy you lassst meal.." Madhu says and walks behind maid silently who was going to kichen. Maid turns sensing that someone is behind her but Madhu hurriedly hide behind a big statue. Madhu looks inside kichen and saw only that maid and kalyani are present inside kichen. Madhu slowly takes out A very small packet from inside her blouse and smiles "Good bye Rishabh.." And walks in, "Kalyani, Is all kheer finished.." Madhu ask but her eyes were on That maid. "Hmm.. No. I think kheer is plenty enough for everyone." Kalyani says looking in pan of kheer. "Ok. Now give me some. I want to taste it everyone is appreciating so even I want.." Madhu says, kalyani takes a bowl and serve kheer to Madhu.

"Did Raje eat your kheerrr.." Kalyani says winking. Madhu gives her a fake smile and look at Maid who was busy in putting dishes on thali. Maid walks past from Madhu to bring Ladoo, Madhu waited for maid to return and as she return Madhu turns and they both collied with each other and kheer bowl falling on maid. "Don't you know how to walk.." Madhu shouts at maid. "Go and change.." Madhu says angrily. Maid nods and run to change her clothes. Madhu slowly looks at kalyani who again resume to work. Madhu walks toward Rishabh's thali and open her paper packet in which some pills are present, "Enjoy your last meal..." Madhu says chuckling.

Rk sits on small chair with His thali placed on small table he prays to god and breaking his chapati he dip it in daal and was about to eat when suddenly Pabho Shouts, "Thamba (Stop)!!" Pabho comes with Trishna behind her. "Don't eat this. This is poison Raje.." Pabho says furiously. "Aajisaheb.. What are saying. Who wants to kill me.." Rk says getting up. "Trishna saw Madhu sunbai add something on your food!!" Pabho says. "Call her.." Rk shouts at His servant and within a minute Madhu came infront of him. "How dare you.. " Pabho comes closer to Madhu and grip her showlder.

"Aajisaheb, what I did?" Madhu ask innocently. "You don't know... Don't act smart infront of me.. Trishna saw you.." Pabho says in anger. "I didn't.." Madhu says cryingly. "Then prove it.." Rk says. "Ok!!" Madhu says without any fear on sat on Rk's place she started tasting all dishes while Pabho and Trishna watches her shockingly. "How it can be possible." Pabho says shocked. "But..." Trishna tries to say but *SLAP* Trishna looks at Pabho crying as Pabho slapes her. "You unlucky... If you dare to say anything I will throw you out of my house.." Pabho says threatening. Madhu had erge to stop Pabho but she could'nt she saw trishna glaring her Madhu in shame looks down. "Sunbai you go.. " Pabho says pulling Trishna with her inside.

Flashback.

"Enjoy you last meal.." Madhu says chuckling. Madhu looks at Kalyani who was busy in preparing something, Madhu smiles and was about to mix pills in daal when suddenly she spot someone's shadow on floor. Seeing shadow Madhu quickly grab her pills tightly in her hand. Madhu smiles and walks toward window and throws her packet outside so that no one could find this.

Flashback ends.

Madhu enters her Room throwing her Shola and jewelries she step inside Bathroom but stop in shock seeing Rk inside bathroom with only wearing his dhoti showing his sexy body and six pack abs which any women want to touch and caress. Rk hadn't notice her that Madhu is watching him. Madhu didn't move nor she shout she shamelessly droll Rk's body. Madhu had erge to touch him but soon she shouts as She saw Rk removing his dhoti.

"WHAT ARE YOU DOING!!!!!!!!!" Rk shouts and quickly grab his clothes to hide his chest. "What are you doing!!!" Madhu too shouts and look away. "Don't you have any shame.." Rk says angrily. "What are yoing in my room." Madhu ask him still looking down. "This is my room.." , "Mine!!!" Madhu shouts at her wits end. "Go out!!" Rk shouts. "I will not.. What you will do stab knife or will kill me?" Madhu ask angrily. "I will.. Um.. Wo.. Yes.. I will remove this dhoti.." Rk says and touches his dhoti. "What!! No.." Madhu shrinks and walks away. Madhu was about to leave but Rk shouts from inside bathroom, "You can stay here... I am not like you madhumakhi..", Madhu makes a face and enter room again.

Rk comes out from bathroom wearing his full clothes from head to toe. " Don't thank me.." Rk says chuckling. "I didn't said that..." Madhu says furiously while eating her apples. "I know in your mind you surely said this.." Rk says while looking him in mirror. "Bhah.. Bhah..bhah." Madhu makes faces. "If you are not interested staying here then you can go.. I will be so happy.." Rk says. "I will not leave this room ever.." Madhu says angrily. "You will." ,"I will not.." , "Anyway i won't force you i am not like you Madhubala who will mix something on my wife's food." Rk says angrily. Madhu looks at shockingly, "You know this.. How? Madhu asked shocked. "Well i saw you..um.. Wo.. I saw you taking out something from your blouse.." Rk says in embarrassment. "What!!! How dare you.. " Madhu says hiding her chest. "Don't do this.. I am still embarrass.." Rk says looking away. "But.."," How dare you... You are a women and that's why i am respecting you.. I would love to kill at that spot.. I am just respecting you understand.." Rk says furiously. "First thing I am a girl not a women and second i will do this again and again.. Try to stop me.." Madhu replies furiously.



Madhu wiping her hairs sat on sofa and watches Rk who was struggling something with ropes on bed. " What is this..." Madhu ask curiously. "Sleeping arrangement.." Rk replies and looks at Madhu, she was looking extremely beautiful even without wearing her jewelries and Madhu left her wet hairs open making her more beautiful. Rk eyes travel down and struck on her chest, Madhu wore White blouse which was little transparent due to her wet hairs making her nipples shown a little. He looks more down and saw her milky white waist, he had extreme erge to touch her.

"What is this!!!" Madhu shouts making Rk coming back to his sence. "See this.." Rk says and pulls one rope down making a curtain from above falls down in between bed diving bed into two parts. "This is mine side.. That is yours.." Rk says and jumps on bed before she could say something. "Good!!" Madhu says on sleep other side. "Your blanket is on my territory.." Madhu says furiously. Rk without saying anything pulls his blanket his side. "Now your pillow is on my territory.." Rk tells her. "Shutup...", " you shutup... How dare you say.. ", " you Rakshas.. I am tried let me sleep..." , "You Madhumakhi..", " Stop calling me that..." , "Madhumakhi..", " Rakshas..","Madhumakhi!!!!"...

I know edits are not so good.. Actually my niece deleted my edits and my other works.. She is so small i can't scold her she is a baby.. So I am sorry..



Edited by .Poorva. - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
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I m the desperate one here...
I came first...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜›

Thanks for the dedication dear..

Lovely update...
It was so filmy... So many scenes... Reminded me of jodha akbar & bajirao mastani movie...
That madhu being accused of adding poison & asking her to eat the king's food... & that curtain wall scene reminded me of jodha akbar movie... I could see only Ash & Hrithik in this update mostly... Lol!
And that bath room drooling scene reminded me a BajraocMastani... Lol!
Hehe... Madhu seriously tried to kill her patidev?๐Ÿ˜ฒ
But i like Rk here... He hates madhu but he respects her too... Good!
Feeling sad for Trishna! Poor girl lost her hubby.. But i dont get why all r hating madhu... Even she lost her father... It happens in wars right? But all are plotting against madhu & want to see her cry or simply kill her... Hope rk will protect his biwi & also love her..
I dont know why i get this feeling that this story will have a sad ending? Bcos not even a ruler or king lived for long... They will be get killed at a very youg age.. I dont want rk to die soon... Hope these two live happily for long...
Thanks for the lovely update & pm...
Sorry for the late reply... Was little busy!
Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Edits were superb ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Felt bad for Trishna ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ and hate for Pabho and Meera ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก

๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ Oh gosh ! Rishbala fights like a 5 year old kiddo ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Damn that scene was hilariously cute when RK says that he saw her taking out something from her blouse and the embarrassment they both had ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†

Their fights were cute ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† but bcz of Madz's plan Trishna got slapped ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ The ;ast scene was so cute when Rk was checking out Madz and the bed making scene reminded me of MB ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

I am waiting for that moment when they will fall in love ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ Now make them fall in love soon ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›

It was a sweet yet emotional and a funny update . Update the next part soon ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Edited by RagingBlaze - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: RagingBlaze

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Poorva now you can see that who is more despo to take the 1st spot ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ Its not me but Sudha ๐Ÿ˜ˆ

Thankfully my comment will be posted on a new page ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž and that too as a first one of the new page ๐Ÿ˜Ž


Yeah yeah... I m the desperate one... But i like ur defense lawyer!๐Ÿ˜†

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