Rishbala TS (Part 2 - Page 5)

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silverfire

@silverfire

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Wow...wow...wow...very interesting concept.

U hooked us in the very first chapter itself.😛 It's too interesting for a TS. Plz turn it into a SS or FF.😛

There is a family feud n they hate eachother. Their first sight after 8 yrs pulls them together. Wow... These two r gonna fall in love like there's no tomorrow.😃

I can imagine DD in this avatar. Plz give one edit of Rishabh as the maharajah. Would love to see Vivian in this getup. Ur edits r beautiful. DD really looks like a queen.

Thoroughly enjoyed the first chapter.

Thanks for the PM.

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Sana

@luvvivian286

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Loved the starting of the story

Continue soon

Will be waiting for it

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lovRishbala

@lovRishbala

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Congrats for the story

Loved the Marathi backdrop

It was very good that u put some pics in between so it made easy to imagine and madhu's edit was beautiful

So rishbala hate each other would love to see the love bloom

So madhu is evil here interesting

I like to see rishbala in grey shade

Do continue the story

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sapana

@sapnaf52

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Interesting concept.
they hate each other,but get married.
so hate then love.
meera is evil here,sikky is funny .
waiting for next update;;
awesome story ,madhu pic is soo cute,beautiful.

thanks for pm nd happy gudi padwa.

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Rishabh ne Madhubala se mohabbat ki hai ayyashi nai 🤣🤣 Well your story is giving me that Bajirao Mastani feel of a maratha warrior and his love story 😛

Hmm so they both are married to each other and they hate each other bcz both feel that their father was killed by the other. Why do i feel that Meera is the mastermind behind Rishbalas father being killed???

Waiting for the mystery to be solved and for Rishbalas love to start 😳😳😳 It gave me the feel as if I am personally seeing Rishbalas historic love story 😛😛😛

It was a good update and beautiful editing done by you 😛😛😛

Edited by RagingBlaze - 9 years ago

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aarya1

@aarya1

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

nice story & nice concept
continue soon

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sneha lokwani

@Snehalokwani200

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Amazing concept

Loved it

All pictures were awesome

Keep writing

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Seema

@...Seema...

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Intersting n v beautifully written
The history was perfectly described
Rk n madhu hate each other as fathers killed each other
Continue it im loving this avatar of rk n madhu

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Anntempleton

@Anntempleton

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Amazing start.

Firstly you did good work with pictures. Rishbala hate each other and are around people who do not want them together. It's going to be amazing. I hope rk is going to retaliate soon. Thank you for pm.