HIS REVENGE :Updated Part-4 / Dt-03/02/2017 - Page 3

Ahhh thank you sooo much Ashu Di for updating the 1st part 😛😛😛. I was upset since last night about something and tadaaa your update made me forgot about my issue for sometime 😳😳

ROFL SUDHA - As usual "Haar ke jeetne waley ko Baazigar kehte hai and BTW neither you were first nor me . Someone else took our first spot " 😈😈😈

Ahh Di I am wondering while writing the first part was Jiju besides you ?? Bcz if he would have read this 1st part then he must have got the biggest shock of his life that his B.I.W.I. has such a creative mind to write superb stories and this is the first psycho twisted story I am coming around . Di , chodo , Jiju ko ye story padhane ka plan cancel ... You can make him read your other cute sugary romantic stories and not this one warna he might get scared thinking that "creativity toh thik hai par itna dark concepts kab se likhna shuru kiya meri wife ne ?? Hehehe poor jiju , I don't want him to get scared LOL" 🤣

Ohk now coming to the story - Yeh kya ho raha hai bhai yeh kya ho raha hai ??? 🤔🤔 So Sullu was Madz's husband . So where is he now ??? Died , hospital , jail , mental asylum , married someone else and having sex with his new wife ?? "Pata lagao Daya pata lagao ki aakhir Sultan gaya toh gaya kahan" ???? 🤣🤣🤣

Oh no puhleaseee I don't want Neel to be Sulbala's son ... Sullu as Madz husband itself is a nightmare (atleast for me hehehe) so make Neel either Madz bro , or her nephew or anything else other than her son . Only RK has the right to get Madz pregnant . 😆😆😆

Ohk like I really don't know what has happened in the past b/w Rk , Madz and Sullu that Madz is getting such shitty kind of treatment . IDK but I am getting this feeling that RK is doing a big mistake in avenging Madz BUT I don't want that bcz it hurts me when RK regrets but I have really no clue what you have planned ??? So I am hoping for a really Valid wala justification of RK's act ... 😒😒😒

Ohk so Neel calls Radha as Nani and Madz call Radha as Aunty ??? Why ??? Now what is with this different name calling ceremony of Radha ??? 😕😕

Just answer my one question that HAS EVER RK LOVED MADZ OR IS IT PURELY REVENGE FROM THE BEGINING ?????

It was a superb update and however bad you are portraying RK , I am juz loving it AND MY RK and loving these updates ... Another order from Ishu and order is spelled as O.R.D.E.R that if I can get 2nd chap by tmrw

Pleech , Bada wala pleech

acha uss sey bhi bada wala pleech ...

I HOPE YOU ARE UPDATING THE NEXT PART BY TMRW 😳😳

Originally posted by: RagingBlaze

Yipeee First !!!!!! OMG ... No , like seriously OMG ... Is it really you Ashu Di ?? Wait lemme pinch myself to make sure that the prologue which I read is written by our very own sweet romantic Rishbala story writer Ashu Di ... Ouchhh ... Yeah its you only ... Babes ! What a fantastic , mindblowing and superb prologue it is ... Can I get the first part by TONIGHT ??? Pleech choti bachi ka dil nai dukhate de do aaj raat 1st chapter :):) So Madz is already married to RK's friend ... Ok since you wrote its based on revenge and IDK who was at fault that RK is taking revenge ?? I mean is it Madz's husband who did something and so RK is taking revenge from both OR is it Madz who did something and so RK is taking revenge from both ?? Ahaaan so from your cute , romantic RK here he is a so called cruel avenger ... I hope Di that there is a VALID justification of revenge and of what RK is doing with Madz (someone else's wife) bcz I don't want to hate RK in any of the story ... Laga laga laga shock laga !!! You just shocked me with this new side of your creativity but I am quite impressed and happy ki finally RK sweet , caramell , dessert coated banda se Kameena toh bano warna itne sweet RK's har story mein dekh k mujhe diabities ho gaya hai hehehe ... Waiting for the next update (maybe by tonight you can gift me) Di and this was just Marvellous ... :)

Originally posted by: madhurish

Ressee...

Ishuuu!!! 😡😡 You took my spot! I will take "my revenge"... Yes i m on revenge mode... Haha...😆

Unres...

So here is ur new ff!!!🥳

Interesting Prologue!!!

His revenge!!! So i guess our kameena Rk is taking revenge on his own friend Neel... But pleasuring his wife??😉😆 I hate if any man lust's other man's wife... But here i dont mind... Yeah i know i m a hypocrite... But what to do?? Its our rishbala nah? So legal or illegal i want rishbala to be together...😃

Is Neel in death bed?? In coma?? In jail?? Where the hell he is?? 😆 Wherever he is... He better suit himself there forever... So that Rishbala can rock the bed!😉😆

Hehe... 5 minutes time for Madhu to stripe for him or else he will just peel her off for some pullp juiciness...😉😆

Loved the prologue... Waiting eagerly to read the first part... 😳😳

Thanks for this super awesome story, baby... Quite different from your sweet romantic stories... I know this will be one hot & sexy story... So update soon... Its not a request! Its an ORDER from you Bae!! Muahhaaa!!😛🤗

LOl...I need to quench your this thirst by giving a steamy update ..hmmm but need to wait sweets..but for you anything

Originally posted by: sss333

Omg really scary prologue. So rk is taking his revenge on madhu.who is neel; what deal dd they have?

Madhu os rk"s friend wife, he is threatening her, and she is scared too.interesting, update soon dear.Tnx for new story

Originally posted by: Haya1022bmw

Dhamaka update