HIS REVENGE :Updated Part-4 / Dt-03/02/2017

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Peeps,
How are you all..i knw knw you all will be awesome..
Oke so the baddie in me wanted to write a "Dark story", hmmm this is going to be my first attempt and definitely need your support.
this story is revenge saga so...I guess you people should deal with the brutality and language used *sometimes*..so please don't hate me for portraying some of the characters in this way...what way, you will get you knw..
please do give it a trya nd let me know your opinion. I absolutely don't mind in dropping it if, you all are not oke with it...
here comes the prologue

HIS REVENGE

"what the hell do you think of yourself RK" yelled Madhu and her every word is filled with hatred towards the man standing infront of her and looking as if no one exists around. She got frustrated and was fuming in rage "biggest looser you are, how can you just how can you act so innocent ...ohh I forgot , you are the great Rishabh Kundra , a very well known Businessman and certified pervert . Who can do anything to seek revenge from me...WHY..because because..."she was not able to say further as her head is heavy with excessive crying and her body is quite weak but she don't want to give up , not this time

"hmmm, continue baby, what were you saying haan , all I need is ..aage bolo speak up damn it" he glared at her and for a moment she got startled, because he is the mighty Kundra who can do anything to satisfy his ego but what he did to her is something that, that can't be pardonable. She wiped her tears which are not stopping and then looked at him with utter disgust, he is glaring at her the moment she came closer to him , he held her shoulders tight and shouted " what are you looking at, no one ever dared to look into my eyes and you, the dirty secret oops sorry DIRTY LITTLE SECRET of mine is shouting on me, haan..wait wait wait , I guess you forgot about the deal..shall I say it once again to YOUuu"

Madhu gulped her saliva in fear, she can't make him suffer I can never forgive myself if something happens to him ,I can't let him struggle..i want my Neel to be happy and healthy..."

He released her form his grip, and she her fell on the floor , he bent his right leg which is towards her face, and lifted her chin up with his shoe and said

"I need to relax so ,just take bath and come over to , fast as you have just 5 mins" he left her face and was about to step out but stopped on listening to her

"I can't do this anymore RK, I am your friend's wife damn it...please !!!!" she said pleadingly but in turn he just smirked, gestured her to come to his room by showing his watch before leaving. She fell on the floor and sobbed.

Do let me know, with your likes and comments as how much you want me to write this story

INDEX:

Prologue: Above
PART1- PAGE 3
PART2 - PAGE 11
PART3 - PAGE14
Part4- Page17

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yipeee First !!!!!! OMG ... No , like seriously OMG ... Is it really you Ashu Di ?? Wait lemme pinch myself to make sure that the prologue which I read is written by our very own sweet romantic Rishbala story writer Ashu Di ... Ouchhh ... Yeah its you only ... Babes ! What a fantastic , mindblowing and superb prologue it is ... Can I get the first part by TONIGHT ??? Pleech choti bachi ka dil nai dukhate de do aaj raat 1st chapter :):) So Madz is already married to RK's friend ... Ok since you wrote its based on revenge and IDK who was at fault that RK is taking revenge ?? I mean is it Madz's husband who did something and so RK is taking revenge from both OR is it Madz who did something and so RK is taking revenge from both ?? Ahaaan so from your cute , romantic RK here he is a so called cruel avenger ... I hope Di that there is a VALID justification of revenge and of what RK is doing with Madz (someone else's wife) bcz I don't want to hate RK in any of the story ... Laga laga laga shock laga !!! You just shocked me with this new side of your creativity but I am quite impressed and happy ki finally RK sweet , caramell , dessert coated banda se Kameena toh bano warna itne sweet RK's har story mein dekh k mujhe diabities ho gaya hai hehehe ... Waiting for the next update (maybe by tonight you can gift me) Di and this was just Marvellous ... :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ressee...
Ishuuu!!! 😡😡 You took my spot! I will take "my revenge"... Yes i m on revenge mode... Haha...😆
Unres...

So here is ur new ff!!!🥳
Interesting Prologue!!!
His revenge!!! So i guess our kameena Rk is taking revenge on his own friend Neel... But pleasuring his wife??😉😆 I hate if any man lust's other man's wife... But here i dont mind... Yeah i know i m a hypocrite... But what to do?? Its our rishbala nah? So legal or illegal i want rishbala to be together...😃
Is Neel in death bed?? In coma?? In jail?? Where the hell he is?? 😆 Wherever he is... He better suit himself there forever... So that Rishbala can rock the bed!😉😆
Hehe... 5 minutes time for Madhu to stripe for him or else he will just peel her off for some pullp juiciness...😉😆
Loved the prologue... Waiting eagerly to read the first part... 😳😳
Thanks for this super awesome story, baby... Quite different from your sweet romantic stories... I know this will be one hot & sexy story... So update soon... Its not a request! Its an ORDER from you Bae!! Muahhaaa!!😛🤗

Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg really scary prologue. So rk is taking his revenge on madhu.who is neel; what deal dd they have?
Madhu os rk"s friend wife, he is threatening her, and she is scared too.interesting, update soon dear.Tnx for new story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Intriguing Prologue !! :)
Hey ashu di...I really love dark concepts & Rk as kameena types though I love the RIGHT kameena as he has a kameenapan also he has justified reasons I hope...
And a dark story from u is not expected so I'm truly excited abt this :)
Thank u for PM di
Great start !

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting..

Will be waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sound interesting ; update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Quite different side of u.want to read.continue plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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new ff...n v different...but treating like that lifting her chin with his shoe leg...whatever might be the situation,,,,,,he deserved a hard slap ...and a punch in his gut...wondering what the story line is...and when is the update of LSAM
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Unresed my comment on pg. 1

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