RIMA SS: Poisonous Love (Pt.7, pg.51, dt. 14/12) ON HOLD! - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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it brilliantly d emotions, d longings, d helplessness .all n all wonderful n heart wrenching update...U made me cry n u r right have so many Q's n curius 2 knw about it ...congo 4 u n seema 4 this interesting story n thanks 4 pm 2 dear...pls pls pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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whtz that..😲Rk Dead..🤔I mean gone..??usually i hv mny thng to say but here am blank😔Madhu killed rk with her own hand & he too willingly eat.. !! Congo on this story both of u.. Kudos 2 u both for thnking & executing it so briliantly👍🏼Tnx fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks a ton guys for liking and commenting 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Unbelievable but awesome start.
Will wait for the story to unfold.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting Promo, Awesome Why Madhu killed Rk? .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Interesting start
U wrote it beautifully rk dead was really painfully why did Madhu killed rk? Story hv tragic end
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for new story and intresting prologue and concept yaar dil ma thoda pain ho raha hai prologue read kar ka rk ko esha pain ma dekha kar aur madhu ko yasha karta hua read kar ka kya hai kuch to truth hai jiska wajsha madhu esha kar rahe hai... Waiting for part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting Prologue!
Waiting for the update! Thanks for pm me!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks all for your likes & comments... Such overwhelming comments... Seema & I are so happy. Thanks!

Sorry I was facing a person problem so I couldnt update any of my stories soon...
Even now I m just giving you the teaser of the first part as I couldnt write the full update. But dont worry... You dont have to wait long as I will be posting the full update really soon!

TEASER!!

"Ahhh..." She screamed in pain.
"I can't do this" she cried.
"You are almost there... Please try hard" the doctor standing beside her said in a stern voice.
"No!" She groaned in intense pain.
"Just one hard push... The baby will come out..."
"No! Ahhh... Goddd! I want my husband. Please let him in... Please... I want to see him" she pleaded amist her tears & loud screams.
"I want to see him one last time..." She breathed hard. She lost hope that she will survive & see her husband & her baby. At least she wanted to see her husband before breathing her last. She wanted her husband promise her that he will take care of their precious little baby for whom they yearned for.
"Doctor, her pulse rate has reduced & she has started hemorrhaging internally. Its dangerous for both the mother & the child to survive"
"We need to go for a C-section. Ask her husbands consent on whom we should save if we couldn't save both the lives." The chief doctor orders her assistant.
"Save my child... Please" she said panicking. She doesnt both about losing her life. She wanted to her child's life.
The doctors passed a worried glance & the chief doctor nodded at a nurse to go out of the OR & get signed in the consent form.
"Everything is alright dear. Just take deep breathe. You will be fine..."
"I dont care about my life. I want my baby safe. Please let my husband in... I want to see..." Before she could finish her sentence she screamed a piercing cry as she felt a sharp pain in her lower abdomen. By now she had started hemorrhaging out & she was soaked in the pool of blood.
Gritting her teeth hard she gave a hard thrust to her swollen belly & a second later the room was filled with a loud cry of a baby.

"Here, take hold of your baby" the doctor handed the baby swathed in blue sheet to him. His eyes filled with happy tears.
"My child!" He whispered & planted a soft kiss on the baby's forehead.
"My... My wife... She is alright?" He asked panicking.
"Sorry... We really tried hard but we couldn't safe your wife. She lost so much blood & she was too weak to take in the excruciating pain. she died the moment her gave birth to her child." The doctor said in a sad tone & quickly grabbed the baby from him when he was about to drop the baby down. Then he collapesd on the floor & fainted.

... To be continued
Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh! Another heartbreaking teaser!
Can't wait to read d full update... 😳

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