RIMA SS: Poisonous Love (Pt.7, pg.51, dt. 14/12) ON HOLD! - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Its osm
Waiting for more...Update soon
P.s fon se like ho nhi raha will do like soon via laptop
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Awesome prologue
Waiting for the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
What a shocking start
Heart touching
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24


WOW !!! After an eternity I am commenting on your story SIN Babes 😉😉



Seema Di - First of all take a standing ovation from me . 👏👏👏 Kudos to you Di that you have not only defeated your disease but also me, in coming up with an extraordinary creativity . 👍🏼👍🏼 Hats off to you for coming up with an out of the box idea . I am really amazed to see a very artistic & a creative side of yours . You know what Di , now you should start writing stories on your own with such creative concepts . I would get all pleasure in seeing you coming up with your own stories and creative plots . Love you Di . And Di , keep coming with such fantastic ideas and Di the most important thing is that take complete rest OK ... 🤗🤗🤗


SIN Babes - Do I need to say that how expressive & beautifully you write ???? 🤔 OK lets do one thing that from now on I am not gonna write - "that overall chappy was mind blowing , excellent , as always you did a very very very commendable job in writing etc etc etc because this is a copyright statement of mines for you FOREVER . So from next time onwards I am not writing all this because its understood that this will always be said about you & secondly its gonna save my time & energy henceforth in typing such a long essay . You know nowadays I have become so damn lazy that now I am panning yo save my time & energy . LOL 😉😉😉


Ok coming to the prologue . first lemme do my as usual thing 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

This reminds me of one line from a Bollywood movie Devdas " Maar Daala Maar Daala" 🤣🤣

An unusual surprising start ... But But BUT without knowing the whole fact I am not gonna jump on any conclusion . SIN Baby we are law students so we are always taught that if ever you become a judge then you have to listen to what Plaintiff & Defendant have to say and then only judge or pass the judgement . So same applies here . As of now super awesome prologue . But , since this is not a chapter so I am not deriving on any conclusion as of now . Hope you update soon & hope that I read it sooner ...



Ok need to go on my work Adios ... AND UPDATE ASAP


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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Interesting prologue.
Madhu killed RK? 😡
Thank u Seema & Sudha
Continue soon
thanx 4 d pm Sudha
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Wowww!!! Yaaar super awsm concept it is seema di and sudha u penned it so perfectly!!! RK's pain news about his future baby nd everything!!!
waiting for nxt!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for the new story for u and your friend seema.👏
Total different concept.
Emotional one.😭😭
Madhu killed Rk.😲😲
U beautifully described Rk's pain.👏
So many questions.😕
Excited to know the answers.
Hoping that u won't give a painful ending.
Continue soon.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
omg quite diffrent concept..
m waiting fir next update...
thanks for pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Wow sudha
Congrats on the new story.
And as usual I have not covered up with the left over parts of ur ss.
But I will deftly.
Coming to this story.
What a start.
Wow.
Vengance. This much
Omg my RK died.
Will there be a dual role of him or he wil come back as ghost.
Waiting eagerly for next chapter.
Unlike the other ss I wil follow this regularly.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
It is a really good ss and very interesting I loved it when RK was acting like a small kid.

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