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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: RagingBlaze

Just a note : the updates might be longer or shorter depending upon where to put a full stop to the suspense . so kindly bear with it .

Oh thats all cool...😆

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Ress...

unres...

Interesting...👏

so our smart brainy handsome agent Rk joined the dots & guessed something big is up & in all the mess his innocent wife got trapped... aww...sad!!😆 he is so restless & wanna save his biwi before the Russian president...😆😆

i suspect Brin... he could be the culprit... a traitor in the team letting know the secrets to the terrorists... actually he has a hand in all this but not madhu...😆

u r nicely holding the suspense... whenever i read this story i hear a "tick! tick!" time bomb sound..😆😆 okay... thanks for the update... will be waiting for next...😳😳

Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: madhurish

Of course we r enjoying the story... But when r u gonna update the next part??😉😆

😡 can't you wait for a second 😆😆

its updated and posted 🤣

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jalebi

@madhurish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: RagingBlaze

😡 can't you wait for a second 😆😆

its updated and posted 🤣

Hehe... I saw... Thanks for the update...😛

Okay will go read & reply a little later.. Bcos now i m going to colg... Will reply in the evening when i return... So bye...

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: madhurish

Hehe... I saw... Thanks for the update...😛
Okay will go read & reply a little later.. Bcos now i m going to colg... Will reply in the evening when i return... So bye...

Sure take your time .. And girl , have some patience 🤣🤣🤣

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Awesome update, loved it, the story is getting interesting and full of suspense, R.K is very intelligent how fast he joined all the strings together, hope Madhu is not involved in any of this.

Continue soon, shall be waiting to read the next update.

Thanks for the PM dear.

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Sarim.fatmi

@Sarim.fatmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

another fantastic update dear.

do update soon.

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catharsis

@catharsis

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Great update!
It's amazing how u r keeping d suspense factor intact, in every update!
Let's see how does RK get hold of d traitor in his team...becoz, there surely is one, who's been spying on him...
Waiting for d next part...
Thanks!