RiMa SS - Race Against Time - Part 12 on Page 34 - Last Part - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg 😲 this cruel, heartless goldheart sultan😡 he beat madhu...when u update rk vs sultan...plz my Big Request ...iski puri tarah se BBB karwana🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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rk kissing the pillow was comedy.nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
awesome update. Hope sullu doesnt hurt madhu anymore. N hope somehow rk finds abt this soon. Waiting for rk to bash up sullu. Thanks a lot for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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First, sorry for the late comment. I have my boards in March n I'm neck deep in exams. I log into IF only when I have some free time.
Read the last two updates in one go. Amazing!
I love ur writing style.
The sullu ullu punched her in the stomach.😡how dare he do it.😡
RK kissing the pillow thinking it was his biwi.😳
I hope he finds out somehow that Madhu is being threatened by somebody. I'm sure he'll join the dots.
Waiting to see Rishu punching sullu for hurting his biwi.
Great updates.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update, RK imagining Madhu n kissing pillow, curious to know what happens next, please continue soon.
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Good part.
I want to kill that ullu myself.
Rk kissing pillow was superb.






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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
ufff..the way the story is being narrated, trust me..i almost gulped half of my nails...GOD...girl you are awesome ...loved it
and BTW, that SUllu ullu smacked on her head, bloody Douche bag will kill him

and then Rishu baby is playing in living room, ahaan what a dramatic situation...who said we need all mushy mushy romance all the time...

If one has the potential then you just portray any plot on our Rishabala ..we will read it sweety...

Keep up this amazing work and keep writing...

love,
Ashu
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank You everyone for your feedbacks . I hope you guys are enjoying the story 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 5


Sultan snatches the receiver from Madhu's hand and puts it near his ear ... He keeps the receiver backs and gives a tight punch to Madhu on her stomach

"Owww"

"Don't play games with me Madhubala Kundra . I guess you don't want your husband to be alive ... Wait I am calling my men to kill your husband" , Sultan said angrily to me . And with this he angrily dials the number from in-flight call

She nods her head in a negative , pleading with her eyes not to harm Rishabh..

*After 5-10 minutes*

He again gives Madhu the inflight phone .

"Call him now and tell him to shift the Russian President to your hotel. Remember that , this time if you do any stunt your husband will lose his life" , Sultan said in a menacing voice to me that sent shivers down my spine making me realise that he is actually a very dangerous man

She dials Rishabh's number and after the second ring he picks up the call

"Hello Rishu...it's me ...your Madhu"

"Biwi ... You are missing me so much that you just couldn't control your emotions and called me up" ' RK says with a smile in a half sleepy state

Madhu was trying very hard not to cry and make Rishabh suspicious that she has landed both of them into a trouble .

"Rishu how are you ??"

"Wohaaa Biwi... Stop asking like a typical filmy wife . When Mrs Rishabh Kundra is there then Rishabh Kundra can never fear"

"Rishu ! I just needed to know if you are safe and sound" , Madhu said in a soft voice

"Yeah Biwi ... I am fine .. it's just that I am missing you sooo much"

"Biwi ! Are you planning to stay awake whole night and make me also

awake whole night??" , RK said with a yawn from the other side of the phone


"Rishu wait ...I wanted to talk to you something" , Madhu said all off a

sudden when she realised that RK was actually sleepy and was going to

keep the phone any-time soon


"Hmmm say fast Biwi" , RK was now yawning constantly


"Rishu... I was thinking that... the Russian President can be

shifted to our hotel from Sheraton Hotel .. I mean comm'on Rishu in

that way even our hotel will get publicity and plus I will specially take

care of the President. He will be under my security . Please Rishu ..." ,

Madhu sounded as normal as she can and tried to convince Rishu


"Ok Biwi as you say .. Now you also sleep and let me also sleep. Love

you Biwi .." , and with this Rishabh keeps the receiver down and turns

to go towards the bedroom when he hears the dogs barking loudly

outside his house . He goes near the window but sees no one except

for a Mercedes car parked in front of his neighbor Mr. Wilkson's

house .


He yawns and goes towards kitchen to drink water . After one sip

when Madhu's words strike him , "Rishu can you shift Russia's

President from Sheraton Hotel to my hotel..." , RK spits out the water

from his mouth ... His all sleep went away


"Oh no ... What the hell is going on ..." , RK said to himself



P.S. - Guys this a short update because I wanted to end this part on a thrilling point .

2) Ignore all errors

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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Good part.
I feel like killing that ullu. Hope rk beats the crap out of him. Seems he is finally suspicious of something being wrong.

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